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Reviews for The History of Kalika

By : jaygoose
  • From ANON - Camaro on March 11, 2004
    How humble you are! I can't see how you could ever say this sucks, honestly! I REALLY REALLY like it. And do you know how rare that is for me? Its a miracle in itself that I've even got the time to go an explore the world of fanfiction as it is these days. I've begun writing my own and believe me, its a cold day in hell every time I actually find the time to read anyone else's. Do you know how GLAD I am that I have? This is like a diamond in the rough! An actual story line framed with amazing writing skills, beautifully added descriptions and believable, likeable, loveable characters! Do you know how AMAZING it is that I've gotten past the first chapter?! It hasn't happened in weeks! This is truly an incredible story and I caneveneven begin to express how proud you ought to be with yourself. You really are talented and sometimes, I forget just how much I love fanfiction.


    Thanks for reminding me.

    Love
    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on March 10, 2004
    I thought this chapter was great! We got to find out a little more about the androids, but there are still many hidden parts. (But that's good cause it leaves me wanting to read more to find out! ^-^)

    The part when Goku was imitating Vegeta was hilarious! ^_^
    And now Goku can read 'Geta's thought's... ::giggles:: Poor Vegeta.

    Looking foward to the next chap! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Crazygurl on March 10, 2004
    Awwww now Goku knows he can hear our precious Vegeta's thoughts. thats so cute. and what about Kalika is she gonna hook up with Gohan or what? You know you want her to. and Vegeta knows he wants Goku, so he need to stop fooling around and get with him! This was a very funny chap also, Goku was really making me laugh he is crazy imitating Vegeta!!!!! that was so kawaii!
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  • From on March 09, 2004
    Hey alright you posted!!!!! That just makes my day!!!
    WHATS IN THE BOX!!?!?!?!??!?!?!? *runs in a circle pulling hair* Oh an I agree with your disclaimer...*smiles*
    Goku is just TOO CUTE when he is looking in the GC, gosh I love him (but I love Vegeta more) anyway he made me laugh when he did that impression of Vegeta. That was freaking hilarious, I could just picture that. I am still laughing about it.

    And Goku concentrating with his tongue hanging out the side of his mouth, very cute.
    “I was just kidding!” Goku said rather quickly. “I know…Don’t mock the Great Vegeta! rofl...
    This was a awesome chapter..that I wish would never end.

    You are excellent at writing a story that makes me bang my head on my keyboard wondering what is going to happen next!!!! I mean really, what's in the box, and are Vegeta and Goku going to hook up, o Veg Vegeta waiting for Goku to make the 1st move...GAH!!!!!!! I need to know.

    I guess I will have to wait for these and other questions to be answered in later chapters... Thanks for updating, this was and superb chap worthy of the wait....
    Keep up the excellence....
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Card on March 09, 2004
    Hmm. Never seen a girl Saiyan fight. Wonder what she can do?

    Oh, I love that Goku ripped his gi. He always seems to end up with only enough clothes on to be decent, doesn't he? Poor boy getting crushed under all that rubble.

    Loved Vegeta. He was so...Vegeta. You wrote him really well. And Goku too. And I like Kalika.
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  • From ANON - Card on March 06, 2004
    Chapter da *not sure actually*
    Intri.
    A.
    Ahhh. I love Trunks.

    Must go read next chapter!
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  • From ANON - card on March 06, 2004
    Poor Gohan. He went through all that work to save the planet from Cell and Hercule took all the credit. What a blow to his ego with his new lady friend. *sigh*

    And Vegeta needs to stop thinking about females and start thinking about Goku!

    "Freak" I don't think is an adequate enough word to describe what Goku will do when Gohan tells him that he's found the girl that Goku is looking for. But I shalt have to continue to read to find out, won't I?

    Story is good. Funny. I like it very much.

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  • From ANON - Card on March 06, 2004
    “Alright, this guy is definitely acting weird.” Kalika thought. “I swear to Kami that if he pulls out his wang, I am so going to kick is ass from here back to Japan.” I fell off my chair laughing about that. I tried to imagine it, and I failed, but the attempts were pretty funny.

    Poor Goku; Vegeta probably should have told him that he could hear his thoughts.

    Where did she come from?!

    *oh, and the part with Bulma giving him the evil grin, that was good. I like Bulma here.*


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  • From ANON - Card63 on March 05, 2004
    Chapter one:
    It didn't suck. I think you write them very well. Your Goku is probably much smarter than mine. Hn, and I loved his reaction to Bulma asking if he was sleeping with Vegeta. That's our Goku. And our Vegeta who won't say anything about his nightmare. I'll come back annishnish reading, promise; I like it!
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  • From ANON - Card63 on March 05, 2004
    Hi! CardDragonBall here. I loved this line: It was their thing. He was Kakarot and the angry prince was Geta. It was part of their strange bond; the sparing, the insults, the Getas and the Kakarots.

    Yes! I want to know what's happening, and thankfully, there are already chapters ahead of me to read. Yeah!

    I like the way you've written them; and made an exposition that is very interesting, and mysterious but not confusing.
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  • From on March 05, 2004
    *gasp* I just read your review for the story More of Us....and I do read the reviews...Im so nosy...but back to the subject at hand *gasps again* Someone is going to become you know...who?????? oh gosh!!!! Why did you to this to me!!!! I have been thinking about it all day now!!!! You better hurry up and update!!!!!!! *shakes fist at you* I need to know who the parents are!!!!!!!!! *dies, but is alive enough to whisper* WHO????? *err...did I say whisper I meant yell* WHO????? DARN YOU!!!!!! I mean it you better update in one hour, or else!!!! *laughs* just kidding! but please update soon!
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on February 27, 2004
    That was a great chap, it was really 'actionpacked'??? o_0.
    It was really exciting reading all of the fighting scenes!
    I can't wait until the next chap, so I can find out more about Kalika! ^_^

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  • From on February 27, 2004
    Fighting scenes aren't your forte, you say, well you did a good job to me. It was a very cool fight scene which had me worried about Trunks.
    So you were going to end the chap at the Big Bang Attack? I am glad you didn't or else I would hae to strangle you! ::strangles you anyway:: AH! How dare you end it right there!!! Is she going to blast Vegeta? Whats going to happen!!! How could you do this to me! I need to know! HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From on February 27, 2004
    Thanks for answering my question. Well in FF X/X-2 there is an Island called Kalika, but now that I think about it it might be spelled Kilika. *shrugs* I can't remember.
    I can't believe my eyes either! *rubs eyes* Why is Vegeta hugging her? Not that I mind...but Goku wanted me to ask. Oh yeah *kills Nomi* thats for blasting Vegeta in the back, nobody and I mean nobody hurts my OUJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok now that I got that out of my system. That was a great chapter, with great fight scenes, and a most lovely Big Bang Attack, which I cherish! Oh and the chapter ended so cool w/ the dream sequence. I was so proud of Goku when he remebered what Kalika does to Vegeta in the dream, and tries to stop it from happening. Well I loved it, as I always do! I can hardly wait for the next update. ^.*
    Keep up the excellence!
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on February 23, 2004
    Hi! I just re-read this whole story. I love it so much. Anyway I have a question did you get the name Kalika from Final Fantast X???????
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