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Reviews for Unconditional Bonds

By : Makota2112
  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on January 15, 2006
    oh my! i'm so glad you've started this again :)
    that whole thing with piccolo being afraid to be bottom...is that tied into that chains part in the next part of this series? was poor piccolo sexually abused in his past? cause it seems like that would fit since in the 'chains part' u wrote something about him having a bad past with being tied down and stuff so i'm just curious...yeah so pleeeease update this soon, and KTD since u said u'd have an update for that soon :P hehe great job, luved that whole oral/tailspot/prostate thing hehe vegeta must be tired :P can't wait to read more of ur work, ur still my fav. author :P
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on January 11, 2006
    I was just wondering if you were going to change the story on Saiyan Hideaway as well? Hope you do because this version is steamy!
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on January 10, 2006
    Very good story! I just read it and I love it! I hope you keep writing this is a great story!
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on January 10, 2006
    awwww that was so sweet and hot hehe, it was great how piccolo was afraid to be uke and vegeta understood, please oh please let him get over that fear soon! hehe wanna see some hot namek being fucked by saiyan ;)
    please update again soon! can't wait
    ur fan! tee hee
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  • From ANON - BballAnimeLover89 on August 21, 2005
    Poor Trunks kun!! *sniff* I hope everything turns out okay in the end. Stupid Bulma! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on August 14, 2005
    Im glad you started writing this again. That was a great chappie. Please keep writing!!!
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on August 01, 2005
    OOH, THAT WAS ONE HELL OF A STORY....I TRUELY HOPE THAT YOU WILL HOPEFULLY ADD MOR CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY, CAUSE I TOTALY CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT....I TOTALY LOVE THE PICCALO/VEGEATA PAIRING BY THE WAY...ANYHOO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK O.K., AND PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS FIC SOOOOON, CAUSE LIKE I SAID CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on July 31, 2005
    Please finish this fic! I love it and can't wait for the next chapter to come! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep writing!!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on May 12, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Camaro on April 14, 2005
    Well, I had to stop reading since the idea of Picollo having sex and taking care of Vegeta makes me sick but you DO write EXCELLENTLY. And how original too! I do realize there are a lot of p/v pairings out there, I just never read them for fear of missing the barf bucket but I do have to say, very good from what I've read. You're very creative.

    Camaro
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  • From BrianChattillon on April 11, 2005
    I read upto chap 13 It ends there! what a rather abrupt end?
    I hope there is a sequal indeed or I would hazzard Piccolo AND Vegeta fans will send you nasty letters.

    From what I Read this seems to be a very well structured drama indeed!
    But I wonder will bulma get what she deserves?
    What of Vegeta and Piccolo. And one mustn't forgety poor Trunks!
    BrianDarksoul~
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  • From PrincessKoriandr on April 06, 2005
    Ah! This story is one of my faves so I'm so glad it's getting an "facelift" so to speak. Unbelievable, but this story is better then the last time I've read it. I can wait to see the rest of the chapters. ~ Kenya
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  • From ANON - Dania on April 05, 2005
    Its still damn good, even as a redo. Love the way its flowing. And as far as OOC, you have to remember this was one of your first stories, if not the first. I think you're allowed a bit of leeway as far as OOC goes ^^ And besides, it still makes sense.
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  • From ANON - sm on June 28, 2004
    Great story. The whole stripper scene with the “getting your eyesed oed out” part, made me laugh so hard it brought tears to my eyes. Well done and keep it up, your an excellent writer.
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  • From ANON - Princess Koriand\'r on June 15, 2004
    Really, what can I say? I found this story sometime last night and I haven't been able to turn it loose since. It's now 8:09 am and I can honestly say sitting up and reading this fic was one of the best things I've done with a night. The story was beautifully written, and while at first, I really couldn't see how a V/P pairing could possibility work, you have made a believer out of me. This story was so entertaining, so interesting, so insightful and pure delight to read. I'm so impressed in fact that I've printed out the story (168 pages in word, thank you very much) and have added it to my list of bedside fan fiction stories. I hope to see more from you.

    Kenya

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