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Reviews for Unconditional Bonds

By : Makota2112
  • From ANON - moongoddess06 on May 23, 2004
    Hey wut up! shit i just finished reading ur whole story in the last 2 hours nad damn is it good. even though some parts did sound corny but it was funny as hell!! it was weird at first to think of veggy and piccolo together i thought this was a pan and vegeta fic but i wasen disappointed at least i got a good laugh out of it... cant wait to read the sequeal!! keep up the good work!! ill be expecting the next fic to be better!! well im out peace!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 27, 2004
    What a wonderful ending!! Awesome!!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 27, 2004
    AHHH!!!! It's over. That was so good. The best Piccolo/Vegeta fic that I have ever read. Uh...the only one...but still the best. I can't wait of the sequel.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 27, 2004
    Those two were really good. The bachler party was described perfectly. It was so hilarious. Drunk Saiyans...I should have know that they would be total idiots. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Akuma-kami on March 24, 2004
    I LOVED YOUR STORY, IT WAS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE EVERD. D. VEGETA IS MY ULTIMATE FAVORITE!!!!!!!!!!! PICCOLO COMES IN SECOND AND I REALLY LOVED WHAT YOU DID WITH THEM!!!!!*you bad, bad, naughty, little, yaoi lover* I WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK!!!!!^_^
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  • From jaygoose on March 23, 2004
    Wow, leave for a weekend and come back to a metric ass load of update. Cool. What was up with you guys this week? Anyway. I loved all of those loverly chapters.

    First, Bulma and Billy: That was majorly harsh. Billy is the biggest ass that I have ever read. I can not believe that. You are a genius to even come up with a bastard like that. Evil...Just like Goku said...pure and unadultarated. Poor, Bulma now I feel bad for saying she deserved that. She didn't. No one does.

    Piccolo and Vegeta: Now at first I was worried about how you would handle the green guy's childhood truama. It is hard to picture the Namek in a position like that, but some how you made it believeable. He was the first Namek that anyone of earth had ever seen and even he didn't know what he was. Of course the government would have tried to get a hold to him. Eww...and that old dude...he was so sick. And yes there was exessive amount of Vegeta fluffiness, but it was warrented. A good Vegeta sobbing like a child fest is needed in the world every so often.

    You did good. Really good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 22, 2004
    *GASP* So much angst!! It was all so gripping and it wouldn't let me go! I hate what Piccolo and Bulma went through, but I'm glad they're both going to be okay! Can't wait for the nchapchapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Drea on March 22, 2004
    And here comes the point I like more!!!!Waaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!^_^
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 21, 2004
    Cool. The Plot is definitely thickening. I am glad in a sick sorta way that things are turning out this way for Bulma. I shouldn't be I know but she was so mean to ie. ie. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2004
    Nani? What had Billy been doing? And what about Trunk's reaction to Piccolo and Vegeta's relationship? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Jupitor Knight on March 18, 2004
    Hey I was kinda flipping through the site and imagine my surprise when i saw this updated, I did a little happy dance before I sat down and read it. So your not going to kill Billy, your choice, but...how about this. Billy gets in a world of trouble and Vegeta has to save his worthless tail. That could be interesting. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2004
    WOW!!! That was HOT!! Excellent job!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 17, 2004
    I just happened to be checking around the site and lo and behold another chappie. That was soooo good. I never thought that I would ever be able to imagine Vegeta and Piccolo together like this but you did a fantastic job. I loved this soo much. It was so steamy. That is all...oh and when is Trunks going to find out about all this? Hmmm?
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 13, 2004
    I'm glad they came up with a way on how to deal with visitation with Trunks, but that Bulma is such a baka! Oh well, her loss is most definitely Piccolo's gain. Speakif whf which, when is Vegeta going to tell Trunks about Piccolo? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 13, 2004
    I personally am truly proud of Vegeta. I don't think I would have even been that civil. Poor Trunks. His mother would ruin everything by wanting to see him. (just kidding) I thought that Vegeta's first schedule for Trunks was completely acceptable. But oh well.

    Oww. I'm loyal. Something to add to my resume. Cool.

    I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder how Trunks is going to take Vegeta and Piccolo's new relationship. Hmm. This fic is so interesting.
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