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Reviews for Unconditional Bonds

By : Makota2112
  • From Lavonya on January 26, 2014
    Is this finished???
    I really like it!!! And hope that you continue on with it!!!
    I cried so hard when Vegeta was trying to kill himself and when he was so utterly depressed...
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  • From Lavonya on January 26, 2014
    I cried /sooooo/ bad in chapter 3... *sniff* Goku was... insensitive.... Bulma's a whoring bitch... poor Vegeta, he really loved her...
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  • From jou on May 10, 2013
    i lov this fic and i lov the pairing
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  • From MasterofPie on March 18, 2008
    i am loving your fic ^__^ So happy to find a good P/V ^__^
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  • From MasterofPie on March 18, 2008
    hahah Mr. Popo! That was great!
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  • From MasterofPie on March 18, 2008
    haha Piccolo to the rescue !! I love this pairing, it is so hard to find -_-
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  • From MasterofPie on March 18, 2008
    poor Vegeta! And what a bitch Bulma was and Goku too ... wow
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  • From Picspixie on June 20, 2007
    oh man i'm rereading these again, i really really really hope you update sometime, hope you havn't lost interest in writing this story :'(, seriously going crazy with why poor piccolo is afraid to be bottom :( please please pleease update soon ;P
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  • From Rowina on June 17, 2007
    I found this story when you started revising it, but was unable to read it. Could not. Kept shuddering and thinking how OOC Vegeta was in reaction to Bulma's rejection. At the same time, I was impressed with your writing and crafting skills, and intrigued by this unusual pairing. I don't really know why I came back to it now, except that your writing still stands head and shoulders above 90% of what's out there in this vast fandom, and I really, really wanted to see where you went with this. I am VERY glad that these things urged me back.

    I'm still a bit put off by V's reaction to the breakup, but I can deal with it. It's only temporary. I'm not thrilled with Bulma's treachery (almost OOC, but I guess one could make a case for it), nor her choice of partner, nor the fact that said partner is not much more than a caricature of the classic evil stepparent. Still, these shortcomings are far outweighed by the wonderful interactions between P and V--the way they first come together, and the way this heals V almost completely, at the same time creating a new and tense situation for them both. I love the telepathy, both the idea of it and how it serves them both. The way you write P, with all of his inner conversations, doubts and fears, (Nail is great comic relief!) is simply enthralling. I really, really like your Piccolo! And to my complete surprise, I really like him with Vegeta, which I never imagined that I would, being a Goku/Vegeta fan. Thanks for this captivating story--I can't wait to catch up on the rest.
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  • From Salza on January 15, 2007
    This is such an outstanding story - I'm so glad that I finally found it again! Props to you for really inventing this pairing, I think...you've done a great job painting the two of them together and making it work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2006
    I love this story!!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - limpet666 on October 19, 2006
    Wow, this story is absolutely fricken incredible. It's so hard to find a GOOD Vegeta/Piccolo, and this one is just perfect. It's really well written and all the characters are done just right ^^ *shakes fist* damn your talent.

    AND DAMN YOU NOT POSTING THE NEXT CHAPTERS YET! DO IT NOW! *huff* *whines*
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on July 21, 2006
    Oh please update this soon, I really want to know why poor piccolo was scared to be uke, hehe i had to reread that last chapter again cause its so great hope to see more chapters like that one
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  • From ANON - Nia~ on January 18, 2006
    excellent fanfic - i read and loved the original, and i'm so happy to see that the revised edition is coming up quickly ^_^ looking forward to your new chapter of KTD also - any idea on how many chapters it's going to be? anyway, this is an excellent fic, and i hpe to see more updates soon. oh! and are you planning on updating this fic and KTD at the Beyond Wonderland Archive?
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  • From ANON - Dania on January 16, 2006
    Y'know. I think I'm finding the re-write a helluvalot more interesting than the original, though I still have it...somewhere... Still curious how you're going to do Piccolo's past, I remember we were talking about that a little while back. Definitely love this, however. A++++
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