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Reviews for On the Corner of West Elm and Bailey

By : tinyvoice
  • From ANON - Fallen Angel on January 23, 2006
    I see you haven't updated this story since March '05, but I hope you have some intention of completeing this! I got completely pulled in, read straight through all the chapters, and I don't think Trowa was OOC at all (you mentioned that in a note in a previous chapter). There were several parts that had me laughing out loud, and teary-eyed when Trowa lashed out at Quatre. Nothing breaks my heart more than a sad/hurt Quatre (and thank you, because some twisted part of me loves to see him tortured, but only followed up with tender resolution). You're writing style is wonderful, I was able to concentrate fully on the story instead of distracting grammar/punctuation mistakes. And your descriptions are superb, I could see everything clearly in my head, and had to turn the lights on since I was reading at night (haha I'm such a wuss when it comes to ghosts). Anyway, REALLY hope you update, you have a great piece going here! Don't leave us hanging! I want to, have to, can't LIVE without the resolution! KUDOS!
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  • From ANON - Luna on November 25, 2005
    Do you perhaps have a mailing list for the updates of your story? If you do I would be ever so greatful if you added me. I am very interested to see where this ends, I like it.
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  • From ANON - frog and toad on November 22, 2005
    I've been looking from corner to webpage to old QxT sites and I didn't find any new fics that interested me. I'm glad I found your page by chance because these two characters are bookmarked as my favorite pairing. You're writing, although not flawless, flows without pause. I enjoy your work--there is much substance and I hope that you continue to write more. It's gorgeous, really. Awesome.
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  • From ANON - sassenach on November 10, 2005
    This is a very refreshing story. I'm always pleased to read something that is a little different than everything else out there. Keep up the good work and Please Update soon...
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  • From Sabishii on August 28, 2005
    I love this story!
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  • From ANON - Maka on May 23, 2005
    Oh MY GOD! Tiny voice! I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed or anything but I haven't had my computer in a year and I'm scared to read the fic's here at the library O.O But I keep thinking of your fic all the time!!! I can't wait until I can get mr. satan fixed so i can read you ficcy again! I'm sure it's fantastic. ^___^

    Maka aka Ryu Nemura
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  • From Tashasaphi on March 22, 2005
    OMG I love this. You write with beautiful eloquence and style, and I love your portrayal of Heero and Wu-fei. Duo, of course, is great too. It reminds me a little of Lorena's work. Do you know her? If you have loved writing this as much as I have reading it, you'll love her stuff too.

    Quatre makes a great ghost. It's so touching and sad and great and squidgy all at once. I love love love it!

    Please write more *sad puppy eyes* or I shall be sad.

    Meow.

    Tsx
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  • From ANON - Shinigami_Lucifer on March 16, 2005
    i absolutly LOVE this story! you must update soon! i can't wait, the plot it amazingly written, and the detail can paint soem very lovely pictures. it's like watching a movie! i beg of you, update soon!

    (goes off to wait for update)
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  • From ANON - NautilusL2 on February 18, 2005
    Damn i hate how they cheat me out of pretzels... bastards. ok - so i like how you started the chapter! Really, it was about bloody damn well time that we got to see some other of our friends. But what of the man on the attic?! What then?!?! And the Wu-mans of it all. And the Duoisms. Wow - yes, very short - glad you updated. mucho gracias. $.85! Man, thats stealing from poor people.... for 12 pretzels... you are narly!
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  • From ANON - SantaAna101 on February 11, 2005
    Oh my good God in heaven - YOU LIVE! Praise the lord, hello! I totally did the chapter, very spooky - errie, totally awesome! Im so glad that youre not dead, I was worried for a few long weeks/months. We're not worthy! We are worms!! *grovels* Anyways, keep commin with the updates, Im behind you 100 percent! (Go Edward!)
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  • From ANON - NautilusL2 on February 09, 2005
    *Wheeze* Oh good God! I would very much like to hide under my covers now, thank you very much. I'm scared of your nightmare and I always have dreams about the last thing i read, seen or heard and so... blah for me. This is good. I really liked it - liked it alot. I dont know where its goin but I like the fact that its going somewhere, but gahh.... shadow people on the ceilings... no doors... reminds me of the ride Haunted Mansion, you see - Master Gracy (of that is at least who we think it is) was trapped in a room with no windows and no doors, and the room kept stretching upwards. And so, the only way to get out, was to hang himself from the ceiling... man I love disney. So yeah, that reminded me of that. But i really really liked this, its spooky and eerie and I love eerie so.. yeah, go you! Update soon though!
    Nautilus
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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 18, 2004
    I really love this story! I love 3x4's and I love ghost storys too. I cant wait for you to update. please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ender on October 23, 2004
    This story is absolutely breathtaking, I enjoyed reading it immensely. I know it has been a long time since you updated, but if you could possibly write me and tell me if you are going to continue with this great story, I would really appreciate it. I just wish it had not ended with Quatre and Trowa relationship on such sad terms. Thank you for writing such an intriguing and wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Alex on September 26, 2004
    I've really enjoyed this, but have one MAJOR problem with it...there's no more! I got to chapter twelve and it just ended.

    Seriously, the idea with the tearcomicoming jewels was so unique and wonderful. I loved how he's going to have matching necklaces made!


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  • From ANON - SariL2 on September 05, 2004
    Im so proud of you! You actually updated! This Edward guy seems like a pretty shady character! I cant wait to read what happens next. As to the whole "should i give in am eleborate bg" i would say if you had the time yes, it may make your story really big, but if extra info wont have anything to do with point B then forget about it. Thanks for being a wonderful author- love!
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