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By : vegetagoddess
  • From ANON - DA on July 13, 2005
    Woot! Love the chappy's! Your a kick arse writer! Nicely done... *thinks of ther complements* Im all out.. Lol. Must read on though!

    Dark Angel
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  • From ANON - DA on July 12, 2005
    Sings the McDonalds song "Im lovin' it!" Lol. Must... keep... reading... AHH!H!!!HHH!H!H Woot.

    *Falls on her face as she reaches for the next chapter*

    DA
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  • From ANON - DA on July 11, 2005
    Thought you might like a review.. Lol. I know I like them.. when I actually write. >D Anywho, Im going to keep reading, I hate having to stop.. Lol

    DA
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  • From ANON - ninjakitty on July 10, 2005
    that was rather fucked up but enjoyable all at once. Can't wait to see where this story is heading. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Julicia on July 09, 2005
    Why are you going through with this Freeza baby thing I dont want her to have Freeza's nasty baby. CHANGE IT NOW THE NEXT TIME YOU WRITE THE STORY PUT IT THE WAY IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE. BULMA AND VEGETA ONLY NOT DUMB DUMB DIDDY AND WHAT NOT.
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  • From ANON - Julicia on July 09, 2005
    You actually put that stupid second embryo in Bulma. Your mucking up the story you ignaramous fart. FIX IT NOW FIX IT NOW FIX IT NOW. YOU UGLY TRAMPESE ANIMAL.
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  • From ANON - Julicia on July 09, 2005
    I dont want Bulma to have that ugly thing Freeza's baby. Thats retarded to put that in the story because Freeza isnt gaining anything from it. I hate when you do good on a story and then go fuck it up with some dumb shit like planting another embryo in Bulma. Fix the story please i dont want Bulma having that nasty slimy slither fucks baby. Change it other people probably hate it too.
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  • From ANON - soso on July 09, 2005
    great keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Julicia on July 09, 2005
    Why the hell are you making Vegeta gay thats just sick the two girls is alright but Vegeta and Kakorot and Brolly thats just so fucking sick. You fucked the story up with vegeta being a fagat that shouldnt be. Then Freeza ugly ass trying take away Bulma's baby thats is so fucking stupid. Dont try to write back to me about telling me I shouldnt read the chapter its a good story but not the part when Vegeta and Brolly and Kakorot are being gay. Your probably gay your self. Quit getting carried with the story just because people like it. If you ever make a story again dont put fagots in there. If I saw you right now i would fucking puke in your face you nasty fuck. Vegeta isnt gay Kakorot isnt gay niether is Brolly you stupid ass hair.
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  • From ANON - og on July 08, 2005
    .... keep writeing
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  • From ANON - e-otaku on July 08, 2005
    nice story ^^ but it is over.???.. because there are no updates (sorry for my bad english)
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  • From ANON - Julicia on July 07, 2005
    Vegeta is one year older than Bulma if hasnt been in the hyberbolic time chamber. Bulma isnt way younger than Vegeta. Write me back or i aint reading this damn story no more.
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  • From ANON - Julicia on July 07, 2005
    This story is awesome. I like the part when Vegeta didnt want to drink the sweet wine. It is a very great story and keep writing more and more. Okay
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  • From ANON - Kagome Rogue Shizoru on July 02, 2005
    Very intresting. I must continue reading.
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  • From ANON - cierra on June 22, 2005
    wtf how long is it gonna be befor u put some morre chaps up ive been waiting 4 3 weeks
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