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Reviews for Slave

By : vegetagoddess
  • From ANON - thuger on June 17, 2005
    keep writing
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  • From ANON - lasaire on June 13, 2005
    This concept is one that has been done many times, yet I find that yours is original and well-written enough that it holds my interest. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Shaft Silenced on May 22, 2005
    I think i've only found 2 fanfics that trully caught my full attention (and as u can see, thats not an easy thing to get from me), and "SLAVE" was one of those two and its inserted in my section of long story ranking.
    I've kept coming here everyday to check out on more new chapters, cause u been handling pretty well with that story line and i wanna see how ur gonna manage things till the end of the story. Pretty good descriptions (im not talkin bout the lemon ones! though they're good too;oP) of the places. I particularly liked the reception at planet Vegeta and so many other parts that i have no time to write about now. So, anyway, keep up the good work and please dont die till u finish it! And that is an order!!!
    Good luck on everythin else...
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 20, 2005
    That was a great chapter! This is an amazing fic and it just gets better and better! I can't wait to read more, please update as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 19, 2005
    This is an awesome fic, I love it. I haven't gotten very far into it yet but it is wonderful so far. Great Job
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  • From ANON - Allie on May 15, 2005
    Hey! I'm hopelessly addicted to this story! I check to see if it's updated all the time! It rocks, and I can't wait for another chapter to be posted
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 15, 2005
    Man, i really have to congratulate u for the amazing peace of work u been witting! I think most of all have been said on other reviews, but u seem to want more (and I understand why). So ,here I am to tell u to continue that story, with a great and original story line!
    I also love ur descriptions in the story, u r pretty good at it, besides u have a great imagination. the way u write things and describes them makes me feel like if i was there, i can really put a picture of it in my mind!
    GREAT WORK! DON'T STOP WRITTING! I WANT THAT NEXT CHAPTER SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Lizzy on May 08, 2005
    I really love the Slave story. I just seem to have a problem with my computer and it cuts off the last bits off each chapter and sometimes it cuts off in the middle of a sentence or lemon. Lemons are my favorite part of the story. Please write lots more. Thank you much.
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  • From ANON - ris on May 07, 2005
    PLEASE FINISH ITS SOOO GOOD!
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  • From ANON - kiersten on April 20, 2005
    i love it! i hope you can get the next chapter out asap!
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  • From ANON - Fear me! on April 12, 2005
    omg omg omg!!!!! I just finished Slave (up to 41 of course) after three days of trying to sneak in reading time and IM SO EXCITED about what's going to happen next! GREAT GREAT JOB!!!

    I've never seen a fanfic so long but that's what makes it stand out. It's sexy, dramatic, interesting, and almost funny at times. Well to me anyway.

    One thing though - I know things HAVE to be moved around sometimes for a fic to work, but the ages arent quite right for the chars.

    Bulma was 16 when she met ten year old goku - yet around the time of Goku's birth vegeta was like eight or something so....I dunno im confused. Makes sense in the story though. But what happened to Bulma's parents? I know that died protecting her - but how??? Oh the madness!!!

    And I loved Bardock! I always have. Since the Bardock special came out he was just so hunky and cute!

    Anyway enough of my ranting - thanks so much for sending this fic out into the internet world! Muah haa.
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  • From ANON - goody goody on April 09, 2005
    NICE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - JAMELA on April 09, 2005
    THIS STORY IS GREAT!! TOTALLY I'VE COULDN'T GET OFF MY COMPUTER UNTIL IT WAS DONE.
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  • From on April 05, 2005
    This fic is quite well written, but there are a few things I don't like about it. Characters seem to develop in a light switch manner, suddenly gaining completely new facets to their personality, or changing their mind entirely. Some characters become focus points who have been previously undeveloped or not even there - I don't care about them. Then there's this numbing stagnance feeling I get where it seems like nothing will ever change, kind of like when you watch season 4 of Ranma. On the plus side it is very well written, the descriptions are excellent and the dialogue quite reasonable. The unpredictability of the fic does foster some interest at the end of every chapter since almost anything can happen in the next one. If you wanted my advice, I'd say to stop trying to trick the reader so much, show that characters are completely motivated to do things before they do them. If every time a character does something it's unexpected, then the characters start to seem like random people - they loose their cohesion.
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  • From ANON - reader on March 31, 2005
    well great story great story but the chaps you been puttin up lately make me want to stop reading
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