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Reviews for Slave

By : vegetagoddess
  • From ANON - BlackWaltzNo3 on March 24, 2005
    I love this story!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Your a wonderfull and gifted writer!
    Adios Black Waltz
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  • From ANON - Kane on March 21, 2005
    I haven't finished the story yet, and it'll probably be a long while before I do (thats a lot of chapters!), and I just found it again after months and months of searching. And when I go out of my way to find a particular story, I hope that person KNOWS how good it is. Well, onto the real part of the review. I've noticed a few gramatical and spelling errors here and there, but nothing overly serious. I've enjoyed the story and its plot a great deal. Its very origanal, hardly any other stories like it, at least when considering Bulma and Vegeta. I like the idea of a slave falling in love with her master, and still hating him at the same time. It brings out a bit more realism. Most relationships are love/hate. I've also enjoyed the lemons, which in themselves are some-what origanal. But on top of that, they are very well written. Over-all, from what I've read, great, GREAT story. Keep up the good work ;)
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  • From ANON - Becca N on March 19, 2005
    Wow...that was one of the best fanfictions i have read in a while...good job and i cant wait for the next chapter^.^
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  • From ANON - PrincessSweetSugar *Not Logged In* on March 18, 2005
    I LOVE this story, it's soo well written, perfect spelling and grammar from what I can see. And this plot is just delicious. You have truly bought out my side for blood, bondage, and dangerous sex. *Licks lips* This story is truly a banquet for me to feast upon. I just wished more people would review for you, you have a truly awesome story.

    Please, keep up the great work and update soon!

    Dewa Mata
    PrincessSweetSugar

    P.S. I think your idea for splitting up this story into three parts is a perfect one.
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  • From ANON - animechick on March 11, 2005
    this story is kinda sad but really good so far i'm gonig to keep reading
    i like how u spaced the sentences out cause when ther are all together it hurts my eyes so thank you
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2005
    this was a pretty good story untill bulma ran away and stuff. PLEASE change it back to vegeta/bulma!
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  • From ANON - Moonlight Shadow on February 28, 2005
    WOW i didnt expect that to happen

    *does a happy dance* you finally updated!! i am so happy.

    i actually think it would be better to split it up in 3 parts. but its your decion if you want to do so.

    good luck and i am impatiently waiting for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - marron1 on February 28, 2005
    I have so far loved your story. Considering I always thought that a story like this would drive me away. I just started reading it and got hooked so far I made to chapter 5. I tend to read all your stories about Bulma and Vegeta keep them coming.

    Marron1

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  • From ANON - elvenangel on February 23, 2005
    You know....I should find this disturbing, but I find myself in the same place as Bulma so to speak. I should but I don't. Guess your audience is as perverse as you are lol. I mean that in the best possible way. I had starting reading this a long time ago on ff.net but I didn't want the edited version. Now I found it again and am reading the GOOD version lol. I never got to see what really happened so I can't wait to finish it but I had to give you a review first since I as an author know they are are as vital as thirst *smirk*. I love Vegeta so much, man he's my favorite character.
    elvenangel
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  • From ANON - meredith on February 20, 2005
    youre storys are amazing i love reading them please keep righting i am so hocked on youre story
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  • From ANON - ctv on February 09, 2005
    nice
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  • From ANON - BB~Lauren on January 27, 2005
    Hey this fic is really addictive and I love all I've read so far!!! Please update as soon as possible! I know I'm not the only one asking that XD!
    Thanxs heaps..

    BB~Lauren
    ~Bulma~Lauren~
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  • From ANON - Zac Imam on January 16, 2005
    This is a REALLY good fic. I like the way things have turned out. I just wonder what could happen to Vegeta because he is nowhere nearly as powerful as Frieza or her daughter. Keep updating!!!
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  • From ANON - Ris on January 13, 2005
    OHHHH MAN POOR VEGETA! I HATE THAT HE HAD TO SLEEP WITH THE SHREW! I HOPE BULMA GETS WELL FOR VEGETA!!! PLEASE FINISH!!!!! :-D
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  • From ANON - pimp on January 07, 2005
    greai fic i like how you really get in the mind of them in details
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