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By : vegetagoddess
  • From ANON - Moonlight SHadow on January 07, 2005
    omg omg omg!!! you must update soon! because i must know what happens!!! bulma and vegeta deserve each other!!!
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  • From ANON - Moonlight Shadow on January 06, 2005
    very well written chapter once again!
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  • From ANON - moonlight shadow on January 06, 2005
    this is by far the best v/b fic ever!! i will continue to read this wonderful piece!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkBug on December 20, 2004
    i love it snd cant wait for the next chapter. short, sweet, and simple. lol.
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  • From ANON - ICY CHIC on September 30, 2004
    *TEARS* noooooooooooooooooooO PLEASE DON'T GO TO mm. FOR GOOD! WELL I GUESS IT'S ONLY A SITE AWAY, BUT I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL. I ENJOY REVIEWS 2. BUT YOUR WORK IS REALLY GOOD AND THAT IS MESSED UP HOW YOU ONLY HAD E-MAILS, BUT JUST KEEP DOING YOU THING HERE, I LOVE THIS STORY! 200 OUTA TEN LOL. GREAT JOB.
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  • From ANON - SeeDWAgweenPaNdA on September 29, 2004
    Hello Vegeta Goddess! ^^
    I just finished all your 36was was it 35 or maybe 37? Ohh well!! I finshed all your chapers on "Slave" Very well written!! I love it! Well that one chaper that you felt kinda weirded out on writting...Well is gos good dun worry! I dun know when i finished reading that i was amazed on how well it was written...And it was well written! ^^ Well i love to read some more...It a real nail bitting fan fiction...(The best i have read! In awhile!) -Waits for the next chapter as patiently as she can wait- >< I dun know if i can hold on anymore!! >
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on September 16, 2004
    I don't know how I fell behind in reading this story but I'm all caught up again now. I had to read through about a ten chapter marathon to catch up but I enjoyed it every step of the way. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.

    ~Kira~

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  • From ANON - Rae on September 15, 2004
    i check at least evryday of the week to see if youre updating. maybe ive become attached to your story. who knows? but i hope you update soon. i cant wait to see what zucchini is goin to do. please hurry im dyin to know. also this is the longest fanfic i read il thl the fanfics ive ever read. i review stories for my friend and most of them get writers block, but you are good at creating a storyline. keep up the good work! yours is the best i read so far. update soon and ill talk ta ya later. siyanara
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  • From ANON - Dark_Kaoru on September 13, 2004
    .. Man this fic is tottally blow-minded!, specially this last chapter. I, indeed saw Zuchinni as a ho' but, now I realize she also has a secret life.... and a secret lover too!haha.. I wonder if its Kakarot?? well, guess I'll have to wait till next chapter.

    Please dont take too long, I'll be waiting :) keep going, you're doing great.
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  • From ANON - Ikata on September 05, 2004
    Come on people, how do you flame an Alternate Universe story anyways?! #1. Heed the warnings. If two chicks start kissin, and you don't like that, skip the chapter! #2. If you made it this far in the story, and have a problem with the story as a whole, that's your problem. You should have stopped reading when you first found that you had a problem with it. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, suggestions.... Remember those? Which, I found a few of, but I still think it's a wonderful story. That mailing list you were talking about... Can you add me to it pretty please? How long have you been working on this story? It's long... You ever plan on ending it? LOL.
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  • From ANON - Harlequin on September 02, 2004
    Wow. I've never seen anyone do such a good job on stories like this. o.o I am in complete awe... I love your writing style, and how you have just enough kinky goodness in this story. The yuri was just awesome.. *.* Keep it up!! Seriously, this story is tasty. And NIN is awesome! I love their music.. *.* Alot of my more interesting stories appear when im listening to NIN. ^^;; But yah, much love from me, because this story rocks my panties. ~.^

    ~Harlequin
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  • From ANON - Ris on August 31, 2004
    OMG!!! FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE I HAVE TOW WHW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! A+ :-D
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  • From ANON - Juunanagou\'s Bitch on July 24, 2004
    Heh, I like this fic. Very well written. Nice plot, too. I love plots like these. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Cooey on July 23, 2004
    Just thought I'd better review this before I go and read the lot without saying anything! Great fic... the surprises keep coming and I'm never quite sure what the next chapter will bring. More please!
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  • From ANON - bul/ve_get/to on July 23, 2004
    PERFECT i love your pic ive reade it all hope ypu update ive been to your site to wonderful cannot waite till somemore freza bulma pics and 17/bra fics or goku 18 pics.
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