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Reviews for Slave

By : vegetagoddess
  • From ANON - yuyu/dbz_girl on July 23, 2004
    i love the fic i think you should keep on writing i would loveto read the rest e mail me please and tell me when your going to put up the next chap.
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  • From ANON - Vladygasckgyn on July 08, 2004
    Hey, I love it. But...when are you going to UPDATE?! Hurry up! ^_~
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  • From ANON - fanaddict on May 27, 2004
    impatiently waiting for updates. i love the story so far. i wonder if there will be a yuri lemon, i dont like it so much but i can withstand it for a better turn out.
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on May 19, 2004
    Great fic so far. Keep it coming.

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - Chasity aka Chass on May 17, 2004
    Hey! ^^ I love this story OMG do you know how hard it was to get up to get something to eat??!! Man your an awesome writer. ^^ Keep up the super work and I hope to review you again once you have updated the other chapters. oh and a favor NO MORE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!! X.X *faints* j/k Teehehehe bye*
    Your freaky fan Chasity
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  • From ANON - Genasis on May 13, 2004
    GOOOODAMN!!!! Was that a good cliffy or what? Wooooweee! Please continue! I just started reading this story, who wouldn't want to be a sadist with VEGETA??? He's hot! Don't leave us hangin!
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  • From ANON - Goddess of fire on May 11, 2004
    wow, nice fic. I love how you captured the character of Bulma and Vegeta. Very nice! I will keep reviewing!
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  • From ANON - ryouki on May 05, 2004
    It is great how the story is coming together. Your story is amazing. I can wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous666 on April 19, 2004
    Wow...I mean...damn. I don't know quite what to say. Other than that this fanfic is TOTALLY Awesome! Its so dark, morbid, and twisted. And I love how you kept Vegeta in character. I hate it when he is all sappy and soft. It maybe okay in SOME cases but I definitely love how you have portrayed him. Bulma also. I have to admit that I am tending to lean toward these dark fics because of the intense sinisterness and gruesomeness. (Not to mention the kinky bondage usually included. ^_^ Can't be helped!) Another thing I MUST praise you on is how you are able to put so much lemon into this story without it becoming repetitive and boring. Alway a fesh new twist on their perverse sex lives. This is actually the one of the few stories that I have read that included S&M and you wrote it in a tasteful manner (Oxymorom, I know! XD). Most people are not brave eh toh to venture into the darkness but you have done one HELL of a job! I must say. I Also want to give you a pa the the back for originality. There are A LOT of A/U's out there were Vegeta-sei survived and Earth was purged, Bulma became Vegeta's pleasure slave, and so on and so forth. Most of them are alike but this one is VERY different, and in a good way. Some A/U's tend to get a little sloppy when keeping characters in...well...character (Vegeta mostly). They make him all gooey and lovey-dovey, only having Bulma's best interest in mind. Psshhht! Yeah...Right! You made it realistic. He bought her with only one intention in mind - to get his rocks off! And from there you build on their 'relationship' (if you can call it that). It is also going at a good pace. Not to fast and not too slow. Well, now that I have probably bored you to tears (I'm sorry!) all all of my ramblings I just want to tell you that you are a GREAT fanfic writer and to keep up the good work! (And Keep Updating X3)


    - Bye-Bye!
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  • From ANON - ry on April 15, 2004
    Your story is amazing! I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - RaineAnn on April 08, 2004
    Great story. Your writing is excelent and the plot is also. I can't wait for a update. The charaters are both convincing and consistant, witch is hard to find in most fanfiction. Thanks for a great story!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rach on April 04, 2004
    alright stop teasing us and give us what we want!!!!!!!!!!
    you're good btw, very very good..
    ;)

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  • From ANON - Skysong on April 03, 2004
    O_O All i can say is.... Oh my god. Never in my life have a read a Bulma/Vegeta story this good. Ever. I heart you. Alot. You rock my panties.
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  • From ANON - sage_of_music on March 28, 2004
    Wow. That was amazing, oh please keep writing!!!!
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  • From ANON - dudeguy on March 28, 2004
    two words - frickin'somesome.
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