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Reviews for Slave

By : vegetagoddess
  • From ANON - vegetalover on July 27, 2006
    I have to admit that reading the rape scene in the first chapter initially made me literally faint (I mean it, I actually lost consciousness). However, despite the psychological trauma, I returned later and read the rest of the fic and it turned out to be pretty good. I'm just impressed that you've managed to write so much. What's your secret? It seems you've kept this up for about two years. I just have to say WOW.
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  • From ANON - Zaya on July 24, 2006
    I understand your pain. Here's a review!! So far, I'm loving this story and it's lemons! They're so delicious!! Awesome story and keep up the good work I'll be watching out for more of your stories!

    Fan Fiction.net UserName= Akaida-Felinjin
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  • From ANON - Sphinx on July 24, 2006
    Hey, just started reading your story today. Quite sadistic I must say, I've read all you've got post today and though I do find some of it a bit creepy and sadistic I still find it to be an excellent story! I hope you post again soon! And hey its like they say who am I to judge? I'm open minded so keep it up however you want!
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  • From ANON - Maru on July 21, 2006
    i relly like ur story! plse update asap! ur story relly captivates me. i may b 14 but i write this kinda stuff. b4 readin ur story i had never written a dbz story now i hav one posted on quizilla nd ppl r messageing me all the time 2 tell me dat they like it. i thank u 4 bing my insperation nd hope u update soon.
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  • From Makota2112 on July 18, 2006
    Wow.

    As you said yourself this is certainly not the run of the mill 'slave fic'. It's dark, gritty, frightful sometimes downright disturbing, and realistic.

    I like it.

    Admittedly, the chapter entitled 'Depraved' squicked me out a bit, but I think it was necessary. Just as I was beginning to cheer for Frieza and his daughter you threw that gem in which made me recoil. I had to re-think the fic. Most usually there are sides or characters readers will 'root' for, but not this one. Both are dark and equally disturbing and as readers we are but helpless to watch the new tortures laid out for Bulma and wait with baited breath to see if she will survive to the next chapter.

    As I said to you earlier, you are among my fav authors due to your mastery of 'the dark fic'. I can't wait for the next chapter of "Slave" or "The Pain of Pleasure".

    Well done.

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  • From ANON - cw on July 12, 2006
    hey, not a bad story, I feel really sorry for Bulma. I can't wait till she and vegeta meet again. Um, not trying to criticize, but i think the whole Ilandra and Bulma thing was kinda........ew. Anyways, keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - AraInu on June 14, 2006
    Oh......please update! I want Veggie to get with Bulma! Happy Late B-Day!
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  • From ANON - GGL on February 13, 2006
    This is... This entire story is... incredible. You seemed to have tapped into a real part of Vegeta's personality and I must say that I respect you for that. And 44 chapters! Wow! I'm very excited with how the story is turning out, and I'm eagerly looking forward to finding out what will happen when Bulma and Vegeta meet up again.

    Being a writer myself, I understand very well the agony of writer's block. I'm writing a DBZ fanfic myself (only I've always been proned to Vegeta/Original Character writings since I hold quite the dislike for Bulma), and I'm also having trouble finding the right way to put my ideas onto paper (or in this case, a big chunk of data. =P ). It's tough because you want it to turn out just right and not risk going OOC, or in my case for original character, a Mary-Sue. It's a tough road we trek, but keep you're spirits up girl! You rock! Keep fighting the good fight and keep up the awesome work.

    It's refreshing to find another author who shares a similar taste in Vegeta's "older" personality, and with such an original plot too. Well. Hope you update soon, and don't feel pressure. As a fellow writer and lover of the art, I know how things have a 50/50 chance to go bad when rushed. The past three days I've spent reading this between classes and work has been fun and I'm hoping for more, so again, hang in there! ^_^

    GGL
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  • From ANON - Sierra Gold on February 12, 2006
    awesome update please update again soon
    your doing awesome so far
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  • From ANON - buubaby26 on February 01, 2006
    i really like this story. lots of action, and romance. I love the fact that Bardock and Brolly are present as well as the very sexy Prince Vegeta. Keep writing and don't listen when people try to flame you. Their just mad because no one likes their stories. LOL
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  • From ANON - Faith on February 01, 2006
    hey could you maybe send me some more lemons on Freeza and Ilandra??
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  • From ANON - Faith on February 01, 2006
    okay.......that kinda really really turned me on a lot!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2006
    continue
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  • From ANON - kyoslover on January 29, 2006
    Oh I beg of you to pleaseeeee pleaseeeeeee continue with this fic! It is one of the best I have read! You are a great author!
    p.s HAPPY BIRTHDAY ON FEB 4TH!
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  • From ANON - kyoslover on January 29, 2006
    Oh I beg of you to pleaseeeee pleaseeeeeee continue with this fic! It is one of the best I have read! You are a great author!
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