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By : vegetagoddess
  • From vegetagoddess on January 29, 2006
    Okay, I have some things that I'd like to say to the people who feel the need to have a verbal fit in their reviews...and people who have said something that caught my eye.


    To Camaro,

    You rock the Casbah, Love. I've never read any of your stories but I know by reputation..no wait, I think I read one called Monster. Bad memory...I can't be sure.

    I have such respect for you. Thank you for your kind words. I've often found that any story that contains rape, n/c, yuri, yaoi or S&M is usually a target of homophobic bigots. So thanks. It's nice to know that I have the human version of a Panzer Tank backing me up ^_^


    To Qadar,

    I work two jobs, attend university full time and write articles on the side. I write for pleasure. I write because I want to. I don't, however, have time to re-read my chapters before I post them and I am far too impatient to get a beta reader. I'm sorry that my occasional spelling and grammatic errors ruin the story for you. I'm sorry that the content of my story is so offensive to you. You know what though? I don't tend to take notice of flames or flamers. Perhaps if you had such a busy life and knew anything about the real world in general then you'd know that fanfiction is perhaps the least of my worries these days.

    Oh, and I'm Australian. Many of the grammatical errors and spelling errors you've nattered on about are no doubt simply the Australian way of spelling things. Goku is spelt Goku over in Oz Land...although I don't believe I've even called Goku 'Goku' in this fic. I call him Kakarot. Sometimes I call the saiyans 'saiyans' other times it's 'saiyajins'. As I said, I don't worry too much about re-checking my work. I have to work, eat, sleep and live.

    Oh, and stop coming back to review if this site is so perverted.


    To The Flamers,

    I don't care that you don't like yuri or yaoi or the way the story is going. It's a V/B story, we all know it - it's what he summary says so for the love of God stop bugging me to get them back together. Stop whining about same sex sexual encounters and take a look at the world around you. Homosexuality exists. Dominance and Submission exists. Stop calling me 'sick and perverted' and grow up. It's annoying to read your flames. Really annoying. I have better things to be annoyed about so just go away. Go outside and get a life. Get a girlfriend or a boyfriend. Finish school. Finish university. Just stop whining...please.
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  • From ANON - Kianata on January 18, 2006
    Oh my funcking God! Wow...It's just...wow. Kinda makes one think of how wonderful that would be, huh? You are SO good. As for 'Geta...he's mine.
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  • From ANON - Kianata on January 18, 2006
    Well on the subject of your rave (the reviews) ...I LOVE your fiction. Now, don't get me wrong I love the nicer side of 'Geta but this fic puts into perspective of what he is (or would be) like. I also enjoy how we, the readers, are able to connect with Bulma. I know that for me, I would love the idea of being with 'Geta, (drools) but hate it at the same time.
    As to the readers who disliked the lemon, tough shit. You were warned. You could have just skipped it. You warned them and they didn’t head it. Again, tough shit. I myself loved it. I like to read half or a little more of the fic before I review, just to make sure that it is even worth it. Please continue with your work. It is amazing. Sadly I don’t have the ability that you do, but I do love imagining it. PLEASE keep it up.

    Your loyal reader~
    Kia
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  • From ANON - Lala on December 24, 2005
    That was a good fanfic. I kinda got mad that Vegeta didn't punish Bulma for leaving him...you should write more, about how Vegeta finally fines Bulma... I mean, just think about what Vegeta is going to do to the "lil human girl" ::Umm:: I can't wait till you write more on this fanfic. :)
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  • From ANON - vegetarae on December 15, 2005
    YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! im desperate to see what is next. keep up the great work and for a yaoi u did a good job. keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - Qader on November 23, 2005
    I actually think there is another story that i reviewed, when i think about it.........

    But.... I guess I deserved SOME of what you said to me.

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  • From ANON - Qader on November 23, 2005
    Gee! Calm the fuck down Camaro (Or how your name is spelled)

    You say my reviews is bad and you have seen severel of them, WELL I would like to see them because these are the only ones I have posted.
    And all I was saying, it is not right to demand that we should post (Of course I realize I didnīt say it in the best possible way, SO IM SORRY)

    AND YOU HAVENīT SEEN ONE OF MY STORIES HERE BECAUSE IM NOT A FUCKIN MEMBER OF THIS SICK PORNO PAGE!!!!

    And youe now probably thinking: "Then why the fuck is he reading the story?"

    The answer is: Because i didnīt know it was this kind of stories, untill I entered the page. (Well I kinda knew)

    So no my reviews isnīt plague, because they were my only ones and YES they are helpful as you said about one of them.

    Qader- drengen
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  • From ANON - charlotte on November 18, 2005
    I hate the way this story is going. what's with all the yaoi and yuri??? what is going on!!!! and why does bulma just have to have Frieza's child?? that is sooooo sick. everything is going in the wrong direction.
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  • From ANON - charlotte on November 18, 2005
    I can't believe they put Frieza's sperm into an embryo and stuck it in Bulma! SICK. that was so unnecessary and disturbing and it pissed me off
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  • From ANON - Camaro on November 12, 2005
    God DAMN Qader SHUT the FUCK UP! You are absolutely the most obnoxious reviewer I have seen around aff.net in a LONG time. Your reviews (while occasionally helpful) are most often outrageously obscene and useless. One of your reviews I noticed, that (by God, can you believe it) is actually even MORE stupid then those left for this story, was so pathetically unnecessary that I almost commented on it at the time.

    First of his name is Son-goku, not just Goku and he is a saiyajin, not a saiyan.

    Uh yeah, first OFF, there is absolutely no reason why anyone should feel the need to write Goku's name as Son-Goku. Also, Americans spell Saiyan in that way and should feel no obligation to alter that just because some new moron comes around insisting that they do. Where are YOUR stories might I ask? Oh... isn't that just coincidental? You don't have any! Therefore, as I've said many a time, your opinion is pretty much obsolete here and though you tend to spread it around like a bad case of herpes, it's really not necessary or wanted.

    Your reviews are comically trivial and for the better part of the time, rude and uncouth. And for someone as obviously incompetent as you are, I'd really suggest not calling other people names that could so easily describe the impression you have left on most of these review boards. As I stated before, simply shut the fuck up if you have nothing to add to the stories you read. God damn, do us all a favor.

    And before you go off on immature little tangents about "reviews" and whether or not people have a right to ask (or politely request in Vegeta Goddess's case) again, maybe you ought to do a tad bit of writing yourself.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Qader on November 11, 2005
    Are you STUPID or whaT!!!!!!!?????????

    You just donīt ask people to review your story, not like that.
    That is just so fucking stupid, idiot.
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  • From ANON - Qader on November 11, 2005
    This is a GREAT story....... You have one grammar mistake though (Well one i can remember), You wrote Ying and Yang..... Itīs spelled Yin and Yang
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  • From ANON - SSJGogeta on November 09, 2005
    Great Chapter even though i dont like the yaoi part
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  • From ANON - me_ninjakitty on November 08, 2005
    i've never been a big fan of yoai, mostly i try to avoid it but that was well done. simple but effective. i like it and i can't wait to see where the story heads after this chapter. cheers
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  • From ANON - Rowan on November 08, 2005
    cool. its okay. i'd really like to know what's going to happen to vegeta and bulma though.
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