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Reviews for Slave

By : vegetagoddess
  • From ANON - Camaro on November 07, 2005
    Hey, I actually haven't had time to look at your story since from the summary, it struck me as extremely cliche. But when I was told that I needed to take a look at some of your reviews, it struck me that that probably isn't the case. In fact, as a result of your apparent creativity, you've had quite the number of ignorant flamers on your hands.

    I just wanted to let you know that I've definitely been there and not to let it get you down, ever. For one, (especially in the case of this Julicia.. God, what a loser) most of your flamers are extraordinarily incompetent. I'd say the better part of your flamers are spoiled children who wanted the same old stupidity that fanfiction writers have been dissecting for years now, and when not essentially 'getting what they wanted', they lashed out like assholes in an attempt to get you down. I'm really glad to see that it never worked and that you've finished this regardless of the shit and hassles you were dealt in the process.

    But even looking at your other stories it really strikes me that you've had more than your share of dickheads and I just wanted to reassure you that if you ever need help or encouragement, that I'm more than happy to take care of that. Don't ever let it get you down and keep on writing.

    It seems that you have fans that genuinely care about you and felt the need to come to me with their concerns. At this point, I sincerely don't have time to read over your story but if there is one thing that I'm a sucker for, it's creativity and that seems to be the aspect you were attacked most frequently for. You should be proud that you don't fit the mold they wanted you to conform to and that you NEVER bowed down and wrote the story when and how they felt you ought to. Go you and if you ever need anything, let me know.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - jamie on November 07, 2005
    I have enjoyed what i have read so far (chapter 1-3) and i am looking forward to reading the rest. A very interesting take on the saiyans i must say though
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  • From ANON - QuickSilver on October 16, 2005
    It's there.
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  • From ANON - Nessis on October 07, 2005
    UPDATE! god! I have been reading this for 3 days strait and you cant just leave it like this. ;_;
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  • From ANON - when do there come a new chapter?? on September 28, 2005
    you have too update soon or els will i cry ^-^ and love your storie
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  • From ANON - when do there come a new chapter?? on September 18, 2005
    when do there come a new chapter??? we all have weit soo long! update soon
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  • From ANON - ..../. on September 05, 2005
    i dont no why the hell it takes u so long 2 keep writeing but keep going
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  • From ANON - Aye on September 01, 2005
    Heh, I can't say much against Slave, it certainly is unique. xD I seriously can't wait until Bulma and Vegeta meet again... o.o Mmm, I wonder if that makes me sadistic, since we all know what Veggie's gunna do when he gets a hold of poor Bulma. UNLESS he has a change of heart suddenly... Which sounds really doubtful to me. Ouu... I'm going to end up wondering this until you bring out the next chapter! Take your time, though. xD I have your other works to occupy me. This is just my favorite.

    Well, I'll be going now. This really is a wonderful fic. ^^

    - Aye
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  • From ANON - paloma =) on August 29, 2005
    Hey I really like this fanfic, would you mind writing more? It's such a great read! ^__^ I was wondering are Bulma and Vegeta really going to get together? Cause it seems that Brolly has plans to take Bulma for himself.. And I'm a little confused..did Kakkarot kill Bardock? @_@ Thanks for reading my review and keep writing those GREAT stories of yours! =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2005
    eeeek! eeeeee! ew! 5x ew! daughter and papi doing it! dat's just ew! ew! i wan momy...

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  • From ANON - Jennifer on July 24, 2005
    Excellant Fic
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  • From ANON - Keisha_MaKainn on July 23, 2005
    WOW!

    Its all I could sat to it... I never imagined... My mind went pop at it all... Insperation in its own... Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Winry on July 23, 2005
    Oh I like your story very much!
    Please write more!!
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  • From ANON - QuickSilver on July 20, 2005
    Well, chapter 42 was quite........ interesting. At least you're good at writing. And they aren't completely ugly. It's much easier to imagine beautiful people commiting incest than ugly, fat, 60 year old people.
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  • From ANON - miyu on July 20, 2005
    Sorry for the dubble post,
    And your doing wicked girl, and ignore people who tell you what you should write next, I know LOTs of us are already agreeing that your stories are far better then most fanfics out there.

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