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By : vegetagoddess
  • From ANON - Miyu on July 20, 2005
    Wow I really liked the story DETH, I like a store that is really outrages and violent. However I would love to read a story where the “slaves” were not Goth, but rather really pretty girls in bohemian dresses. Or dressed in beautiful Indian cloths…

    Lol because then I could relate to it more, but the fact is, its not really out there to fined. So I guess out of all the “slave” stories yours is by far the BEST. I like the fact that you plan on splitting the story up in to 3 parts, and that it will be so big, it feels like I am reading more of an armature novel rather then a fanfic on the inter net of some young girls little BDSM/rape fantasies. And it REALLY is in so much depth and I just love how there is a story in this,,… but I love even more the rape stories, I have loved them since I was little, that is the only way you keep me interested in the story…

    PS I AM working on a new drawing for you, for this story, but it will take me a long time to do it good, as I too am really busy. Do you still have the one I did a Bulma arms tied behind her back in chains and censored? I think this one will be better ^0^ I also love how my fav music inspires you to write, and I can’t want till you write a storied based on my fav NIN song “we’re in this together” don’t have a clue what you would do but I’m sure it will be good. Love the fact that this fanfic reaches out to me so personally in SO many ways PLEASE keep up the good work!

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  • From ANON - Miyu on July 20, 2005
    Wow I really liked the story DETH, I like a store that is really outrages and violent. However I would love to read a story where the “slaves” were not Goth, but rather really pretty girls in bohemian dresses. Or dressed in beautiful Indian cloths…

    Lol because then I could relate to it more, but the fact is, its not really out there to fined. So I guess out of all the “slave” stories yours is by far the BEST. I like the fact that you plan on splitting the story up in to 3 parts, and that it will be so big, it feels like I am reading more of an armature novel rather then a fanfic on the inter net of some young girls little BDSM/rape fantasies. And it REALLY is in so much depth and I just love how there is a story in this,,… but I love even more the rape stories, I have loved them since I was little, that is the only way you keep me interested in the story…
    Wow I really liked the story DETH, I like a store that is really outrages and violent. However I would love to read a story where the “slaves” were not Goth, but rather really pretty girls in bohemian dresses. Or dressed in beautiful Indian cloths…

    Lol because then I could relate to it more, but the fact is, its not really out there to fined. So I guess out of all the “slave” stories yours is by far the BEST. I like the fact that you plan on splitting the story up in to 3 parts, and that it will be so big, it feels like I am reading more of an armature novel rather then a fanfic on the inter net of some young girls little BDSM/rape fantasies. And it REALLY is in so much depth and I just love how there is a story in this,,… but I love even more the rape stories, I have loved them since I was little, that is the only way you keep me interested in the story…

    PS I AM working on a new drawing for you, for this story, but it will take me a long time to do it good, as I too am really busy. Do you still have the one I did a Bulma arms tied behind her back in chains and censored? I think this one will be better ^0^ I also love how my fav music inspires you to write, and I can’t want till you write a storied based on my fav NIN song “we’re in this together” don’t have a clue what you would do but I’m sure it will be good. Love the fact that this fanfic reaches out to me so personally in SO many ways PLEASE keep up the good work!


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  • From ANON - QuickSilver on July 19, 2005
    Well, I have read thus far not reviewing once before this review for one good reason. I wanted to know where this was truly going. I'm pretty sure I know where it is now, so I decided to review to you about your fanfic in general. Firstly, I would like to say that I've seen good fanfics, bad fanfics and ones that about made me go into convulsions on how horribly disgusting they were. Yours is truly impressive. The words you use, the detail in the scene that presents itself is truly amazing. The overall story was well thought out, (whether you just thought it off the top of your head or if you actually took the time to sit down and slowly come up with an idea.) The information on the characters and the events that happened was accurate.

    I would have to say that your main problem is your spelling. If you need someone to proofread your chapters, I would be happy to give it a shot. I am an excellent typist and I have very good grammer skills.

    Once again, i would have to say that this story is both written well, and told well. (In fact, it's kind of hard to tell whether you wrote it, or Akira Toriyama wrote it. But we all know that can't be true.)

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  • From ANON - ElysianJude on July 18, 2005
    Wow! I really, REALLY, want to hate your story but I can't! It's wrong for so many reasons but I love it! I'm dying to see Bulma and Vegeta together again but the story is getting better and better. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    LOL! Brolly's great! You should let him do a girl... that poor guy is in dier need of it! LOL!
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    Woot woot. Hm, I read that one pretty fast... YAY!!! Its not like me to read so fast... I like to imagine everything and portray voices and all.. Lol. Im not crazy I swear!
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    *Starts humming the Lord of the Rings theme song* Its getting pretty adventureous eh? Lol
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    Im a readin', and Im a likin'! Lol... That was pretty cheezy but I couldnt help it. Im running out of whitty things to say!
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    Woo WOOO!!! That was tasty man! Lol. Almost what my dreams are like... JK! LOL! To some extent.. :P
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    EWWWW!!! Poor Bulma being forced to have Frieza's baby! Yuck. At least she doesnt have to sleep with him... I guess.... *cringes*
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    Oooh, that kinda makes you like her more. Woot, more sex with other characters... not like theres anything wrong with sex... its a very beautiful thing... *spaces out*
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    Ooohhh. That would suck more than ever if it was one of the slave traders... eewwwwwww!!!!!! I hate Bulma to death, but because of this story, the way she is portrayed, I think I like her now. ONLY in this story though. *Smirks* Hehehe. Thanks.. I think.... 0.o;

    DA
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    We all get a little crazy sometimes Bulma.... Thats wut Vegeta is for... Lol. Im jk. OOOH! You should have Vegeta like jack off while thinking of Bulma... wait... Your probably already done with this story.. heh.. nevermind that... MUST GO ON! VOOT!

    DA
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    Ooooohhhh. I'd so do him... >D LOL!!!!
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  • From ANON - DA on July 14, 2005
    Very nicely done! Woot! If I were Bulma, I'd so suck up whatever I felt and just go back to Vegeta... come on, how can you not love that pain and pleasure when its coming from him!!!! MEEEEEOOOOWWW! >D

    On to the next chappy! Voot!

    DA
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