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By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Getarian on March 09, 2004
    Oh dear, it's about to beginn'tn't it? I'm tensing up already, but it's a good kind of tensing...sort of :-)

    The story has definitely rounded the corner to the dramatic, and you have handled the turn beautifully. I am definitely feeling a fear for my favourite Saiyan family.

    I love the way you have portrayed mirai Trunks; no longer connecting to anyone, distant and disturbed.

    "Something horrible had happened to the kid. Something Vegeta couldn’t prevent."

    If only he knew. The dramatic irony of Vegeta's thoughts definitely tugged at my heart.

    Bulma is sweet with Vegeta, I love those little moments :-)

    *Chuckle* Still loving horny Goku!

    "...And desperately wished that those stupid ass androids would show up today. So he could beat them into the ground and be done with it. Get back to the fucking part."

    LOL! Even with Death's fingers at his throat, sex with Vegeta is still Goku's number one priority...Yeah, that's the spirit Goku...never say die! :-)

    Oooh, tingles...Loved Vegeta trilling for Goku :-)

    I loved the 'military' line-up of the kiddies in the hallway. I can see Vegeta's hand in this :-)

    "Goku would kill whoever did it."

    Another wrench of the heart here. What would he do if he knew it was his mate, and two of their kids?

    The kitchen scene was a mixture of, warming domestication, and a chilling sense of dread.

    Gripping chest in readi for for next chapter.

    "Gk: Vegeta, If I’m going to die today I want sex first."

    LOL! Sounds like a plan to me :-)

    "Don’t be scared, silly. But yes, you can be. You shouldn’t be, but you can be. (does that make any sense?)"

    Actually, yes it does. LOL.


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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 09, 2004
    Yes, that was extremely angsty but I adore angst. Maybe even more than humor. Anyway, I love this story and I really hope that none of these horrible things happen but of course if something did happen it would make for a more interesting story. *Sigh* That's life. It's like watching a train wreck. You just can't look away. Damn now I'm depressed. He He.
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  • From ANON - Squall-sama on March 08, 2004
    *worried* this isn't going to be a total deathfic is it? like whoever dies DOESN'T get wished back? otherwise that would be very upsetting!-_-0 i've read this all the way through and i love it, but it would sad if any of them dies permanentally....
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  • From ANON - Luna on March 08, 2004
    o.o;;; What happens to Goku?o.o;;; I like Takashi and Gogeta! They're cool!Continue
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  • From ANON - Aarika on March 08, 2004
    shit shit shit! so much for a happy ending..i can't imagine the tiny saiyans being evil..though thats probably the opptimist in me..can't wait to read what happens!
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 08, 2004
    I am in awe of you...and fairly jealous as well. 4 fics and 3 of which you are currently juggling with what seems like perfection and ease...I couldn't do that if I tried, and I have 4 fics and 3 of which are currently on-going... I just don't know how you do it, to say I am impressed would be an understatement...

    Anyway about the fic, I loved it, and I love the suspense you keep the reader in...I can hardly wait to learn more about why Vegeta is the fall of Trunks future and I love the androids, so I can't wait for their appearence.

    Kudos to you!
    you are awesome.
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 08, 2004
    I am very intrigued but I must say that you are amazing. You are currently balancing three stories. Two of which are directly linked and as of yet you have not given away anything. I am extremely impressed. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Getarian on March 08, 2004
    Experienced a brief moment of disorientation and confn asn as I looked at the list and nothing was where it was supposed to be, I'm used to seeing, first 'Hormone therapy' and second 'More of us' I panicked briefly :-)

    Yay! Sequel!

    Ahhh, little Trunks and Goten are bonding. Goku's reaction was a hoot! I loved Vegeta's response. Very Vegeta.

    Loved the breakfast scene, loved Vegeta's reprimand of Bardock, Bulma's tinkering of her gadget, kids whining, food being scarfed...very family like :-)

    Love the way that Goku and Vegeta pick up their young by the tails if they're being a pain.

    Whew! Not just Goku dead in the near future, but Gohan, Goten, Gogeta and Takashi. Bulla sounds terrible, but then again Bardock and Vegeta don't exactly sound like people you want to meet in a dark alley either...or a well lit one for that matter.

    Vegeta's interaction with mirai Trunks was classic stuff :-)

    Nooo, I hate the fact that Trunks no longer loves his father, although, if he's as bad as it sounds, I can't really blame him...but I hate the thought :-(

    Goku's reaction to seeing mirai was good stuff, instant recognition that he wasn't just back to visit. Poor Vegeta, this must be eating at him...This has been his biggest fear for the past three years.

    I definitely want to read more, this is good stuff...but I adI admit to being a little scared?
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