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By : tinyvoice
  • From ANON - Eliztric on July 15, 2005
    Hm. Lemon, or no lemon?
    *grins* Tough choice, isn't it?

    Personally, I am very, very satisfied with the way the story has officially ended. Perhaps instead of including the lemon directly, you might introduce it as a sidestory, to...I don't know. Maybe the phrase I'm looking to use is keep the story from ending on a "cheesy" note - not that I think it would be a -bad- lemon, you must understand, it's that so many stories I've heard of have the fuel for several lemons but their addition just cheapens the original plot. I can say this, however - I would love to see a lemon for this fic, as I'm sure would many others. I just don't think it should necessarily be "Epilogue pt. II", as you suggested - it should be a completely different addition to the website. Who knows? Maybe you could start an arc of Punishing-related lemons? *grins*

    Continuing to be exceptionally pleased with the work that you've done,

    -Eliztric
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  • From ANON - Eliztric on July 15, 2005
    Hm. Lemon, or no lemon?
    *grins* Tough choice, isn't it?

    Personally, I am very, very satisfied with the way the story has officially ended. Perhaps instead of including the lemon directly, you might introduce it as a sidestory, to...I don't know. Maybe the phrase I'm looking to use is keep the story from ending on a "cheesy" note - not that I think it would be a -bad- lemon, you must understand, it's that so many stories I've heard of have the fuel for several lemons but their addition just cheapens the original plot. I can say this, however - I would love to see a lemon for this fic, as I'm sure would many others. I just don't think it should necessarily be "Epilogue pt. II", as you suggested - it should be a completely different addition to the website. Who knows? Maybe you could start an arc of Punishing-related lemons? *grins*

    Continuing to be exceptionally pleased with the work that you've done,

    -Eliztric
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  • From ANON - Eliztric on July 15, 2005
    Hm. Lemon, or no lemon?
    *grins* Tough choice, isn't it?

    Personally, I am very, very satisfied with the way the story has officially ended. Perhaps instead of including the lemon directly, you might introduce it as a sidestory, to...I don't know. Maybe the phrase I'm looking to use is keep the story from ending on a "cheesy" note - not that I think it would be a -bad- lemon, you must understand, it's that so many stories I've heard of have the fuel for several lemons but their addition just cheapens the original plot. I can say this, however - I would love to see a lemon for this fic, as I'm sure would many others. I just don't think it should necessarily be "Epilogue pt. II", as you suggested - it should be a completely different addition to the website. Who knows? Maybe you could start an arc of Punishing-related lemons? *grins*

    Continuing to be exceptionally pleased with the work that you've done,

    -Eliztric
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  • From ANON - SariL2 on July 15, 2005
    *deep breath* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Oh Allah of the universe! Good freakin jesus! I'm just... Im just..... OMG MATE! I'm 'OMGin'! i - I just dont know what to say. I was laughing and i was ... i was laughing harder --- and then.. then i got all heartfelt and my insides felt squishy... What have ye done to me?!?! I LOVED THE ENDING! HOLY MOLY! It was so precious! And i LOVED the little "and he grew up tp do...." "And her life sucked forever after...." things. LOVED THEM! I want to eat this up and have the essence of awesomeness in me forever! AYE! For I envy that awesomeness, for I shall give ye me own leg in exchange for such lovely swagg! hark! For ye shall rule the world someday with such pretty words! HUZZAH!!! AND WRITE THE DAMN EPILOUGE!!!!! DO IT NOW!!!!!! *hyperventilates* I LOVE THEE WITH A PASSION UNKNOWN TO MAN!!
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  • From JadeParker on July 14, 2005
    hmm...I wouldn't say this necessarily NEEDS an epilogue as this chapter serves as a fitting ending on its own. However, in a purely selfish act of hating to see such a good story end, I can say with all honesty that I certainly wouldn't mind seeing one. Either way, this was great!
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  • From ANON - Eliztric on July 13, 2005
    I've been following this story for a few chapters, and I must say, I am quite impressed. Very, very beautifully done - captivating and demanding. I have looked forward to the end of this fic and now that I have (well, what looks to be) it, I feel quite satisfied. Thank you for writing Punishing...is it odd to say that it's affected me? Because in all honesty, it has - shown me a higher standard to aspire towards myself, as should others. I apologize for not reviewing previously...but you most certainly deserve it. Lovely work - I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

    -Eliztric
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2005
    we definately need an epilogue.. with a lemon!!!
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  • From ANON - Stone on July 07, 2005
    IT LIVES!!!! i'm so happy T.T *cling* stone muffin luvs you! peace out ^_^
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  • From ANON - SariL2 on June 28, 2005
    Now if I was there... I woulda been Trowa, I woulda punched Trixie in the face (can you get in trouble for that?) and started screamin out Q-mans name and get him to sit his ass down for a looong talk. But I HOPE/BET you'll be doing that sooner or later so YAY!!!! I liked this chapter and the fact that she got less than what was offered. It happens some times. So go you! And now Im all excited for the next one! update soon!!! Love, love, love, love
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  • From ANON - fruits of Eos on June 23, 2005
    hooray for exams and jobs! ::twitches:: oh meooow you updated! poor Trowa, must know what happens next o___o
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  • From ANON - Bex Drake on April 08, 2005
    awesome couple of chapters :)
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  • From ANON - Tiny Rasa on April 03, 2005
    OOO! Oh how exciting! I can't wait to read the other chapters! I just got on Aff.net to go looking for fics and this had many reviews so I knew it to be good. Youre style of writing and characterization is so unique and very fun! bye!
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  • From Tashasaphi on March 30, 2005
    More more!

    It's like reading a novel in a computer!
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  • From ANON - Stone on March 28, 2005
    ^^ you're cool. i really like that the story has a solid plot and sticks to it not adding any unnecessary lemon that either doesn't work or is unappropiate. don't get me wrong i like lemony goodness:P but i also really like it with a story ^^ keep it up. i look forward to more chapters. eeeeeee i wannaknow what happens!!! ^____________^
    peace ^.^V
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  • From ANON - joycejanik on March 28, 2005
    Love at every sight for txq! Heheheh.. but I think that it was kinda too bold for Trowa to suddenly ask quatre if he loved him. I mean they just met a few times! Trowa should just have grabbed quatre and kissed him in the shower stall.
    Aww.. no trowa fighting for quatre with taylor??
    Anyways, good plot.

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