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Reviews for Mental Therapy

By : CardDragonBall

From ANON - Getarian on March 18, 2004
Why is there only 7 reviews? This story is worthy of so much more!

Really enjoyed this! Poor Kakarot...no sex today...damn those pesky kids :-)

Loved the whole fighting scene, with Goten surrounded by 60 humans and young Vegeta, Kakarot and Vegeta all standing there casually watching...God I love Saiyans :-)

Cracked up at this:

“When I am talking to my fucking mother you will WAIT.”

LOL! Not a female in sight! Must have confused a number of the humans :-)

Loved this:

"Then cleared his throat. Pointed his finger at the ground under their feet and started shooting small ki blasts at them. “He said Go Away.”"

That's my Vegeta ;-)

“I was trying to have sex,” Kakarot said, “And you’re stupid little fighterrterrupted me.”

LOL! Still hasn't quite got that discretion thing under control has he :-) I love your portrayal of Goku!

"Kakarot turned to look at him. “It’s my turn isn’t it?”
"Vegeta nodded."
LOL! Really loved this.

I got a kick out of that walking away scene with Vegeta and his first born. There's a real closeness in this family that I really love :-)

Loved Vegeta's thoughts on Gina, but it's kind of sad to think that he will far outlive her because of our pathetic human lifespan.

“I asked her that too, and she just laughed and said that Mom used to be quite mouthy when it came to how much he hated Dad.”

Yeah, and they get to meet that version of Vegeta and Goku too! LOL!

Great story...I love these guys! Definitely looking forward to next chapter and lemon :-)

“No, not even twins can sense their brother’s mating bond.”

That's right, shit! I completely forgot about that! As for Goten being able to order Gina about, I'm sure Vegeta will put a stop to that very rapidly :-)

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From ANON - Getarian on March 17, 2004
I really do enjoy conversations between the twins :-) I truly enjoyed Goten's comment at the end:

"Goten sighed. “Of course you do. I got all the brains and you got stuck with the bad-temper and attitude." LOL!

Another juicy lemon :-) also loved this:

“It’s not your body,” he said, felt himself hardening—ah, bless Saiyan constitution—again. “Its all mine.” *chuckles* Love this side of Goku :-)

“OH, shit,” was the interruption, “I thought we all sat down and had that lovely discussion about how you two were only supposed to fuck in your room.”

ROTFL! Okay this was funny enough for me to not mind in the slightest that the lovely lemon had been interrupted. Would have loved to have been present to have heard that particular discussion :-)

The final paragraph of the lemon was delicious as well as funny...loved how neither of them broke off what they were doing when the twins popped up and Vegeta took time out briefly to scowl and hope that the next pregnancy yielded just the one child, LOL!

Hmm, so young Vegeta is already mated? I wonder why Goten doesn't know about her...isn't the twin connection supposed to link mates to the bond?

Loved this chapter! Looking forward to the next :-)

"Yep. And I have every intention of keeping it a laugh-riot. (I like humor.) Plus, the twins are in this, so you know there’s going to henahenanigans afoot. Oh, and lemons. Oh, and Goku & Vegeta going at it like bunny rabbits! Yeah! Smut! Yeah! Humor!"

Yeah! Sounds good to me! Bring it on! :-)

"(I’m insane. It’s allright.)"

Of course it is...sanity is boring :-)

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From ANON - Mechanical Butter¨ 8 on February 22, 2004
Alrighty!! I loved it!
Love, love, love the relationship of this family.
They are all so funny
and so...lil Geta did claim someone *sobs* no! j/k He is very secrative though.
I'm not worried about the twins taking over the story...although I do love my Gokd Ved Vegeta,
but the twins are terrific, and I think that if they were real chter ter on DBZ they would have been an instant hit!
^.*
-MB-
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From ANON - jaygoose on March 17, 2004
Vegeta claimed someone *g Hmm Hmm...this looks like its going to be interesting.

So are Vegeta and Goku going to have another boy or will it be a girl this time? A girl would be great. I could just see those two trying to raise a girl. Hilarious.
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From ANON - jaygoose on March 16, 2004
Of course I love this one too. I missed happy Geta and Kakarot banging and Geta getting knocked... He's always funnier knocked, that Geta.
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 16, 2004
*does a dance* YEAH sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much!!! *hugs you*

It got to the point where asking “what are you doing” was more dangerous than jumping in front of Buu covered in chocolate. --Gah!!! *falls over* That is a great description! That would be evry dangerous!

When asked why he had used toilet paper to stock the capsule system, Goten had told his mother that ‘last time I used nickels, and when it exploded it hurt like shit and put holes through everything.’ Thus the decision to use something soft, and it also explained where the cities’ supply of TP had gone to. --Very creative, yet dangerous using nickels...ouch. Not to mention the picture that painted in my mind is hilarious!

He was wearing a black shirt that said “Been there, fucked that.” --yep that sounds like the Goten I know and love..lol

The Prince of All Saiyans. The Great Vegeta. The Super Saiyan. Mommy. --awww it's ok Geta, he is a very sexy mommy though.

Deranged children.--I loved the paragraph before this, and having it topped off with this line was excellent!

Kakarot had come home. He pointed out the door and looked directly at his other son (the oldest Twin.) “OUT!” he shouted. “NOW!”--Sounds just like a father of teens...and it's also cute to picture him yelling like that.

Vegeta (the young one) ducked past his father and went to continue beating his brother. He was much louder than the average person, so his angry yells DO YDO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO FOCUS ON FUCKING WHEN RE CRE CONSTANTLY TOUCHING YOUR OWN DAMN HAND?!” and “ANNOYING PRICK.” And “WAIT UNTIL I DO IT TO YOU, BASTARD!”--ROFL oh I died when I read this...Goten is just evil!

There was a scowl. A look of disdain. “No, I was not having bad sex. I’m not you.” --theres that brotherly love, that I yearn to see!

Was wearing a shirt that said: “I HATE PEOPLE.” --me too..just kidding. I think the shirts they wear are so adorable. Adds to their already colorful personalities.
ten ten snorted. “Have you met us?” --Nice insight to why Goku and Veggie don't have more kids.

“I guess you fucked the gay right out of him,” Vegeta said. --rofl hee hee that is so funny!

Gk: Except mine and Gohans. We’re all Go-somethings--LoL aww I awnt to be a go something..since my name is Mia I will be Gomia!!! woo hoo!!

I wonder why they can't bite anyone???? Why??? I need answers, it's driving me crazy. When I read that in Cross Eyed I was thinking the same thing. I was like what now...he bites Trunks...is it just b/c they will be forever connected to that person??
I really love this ficcie, and I am glad Goku is trying to have more kids with the Ouji!
^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - Getarian on March 16, 2004
Yeah! Sequel! Does a happy little dance...well in my head anyway. I loved "Hormone Therapy" so much, and now...I get more :-)

"It got to the point where asking “what are you doing” was more dangerous than jumping in front of Buu covered in chocolate."

LOL! Loved this...very funny :-)

"‘last time I used nickels, and when it exploded it hurt like shit and put holes through everything.’"

LOL! I love how you portray these characters, I only wish this stuad bad been put on the screen instead of what we got!

Loved Goten's T-shirt...I bet he makes his 'mom' proud with that attitude of his :-)

Oh man! I absolutely loved this:

"Kakarot haughaught them that. It was their first word. Mommy. For six years he had been Mommy. The Prince of All Saiyans. The Great Vegeta. The Super Saiyan. Mommy."

Was having a drink of coca cola at the time - went from nearly choking to having a major coughing fit. This was incredibly funny...loved it!

"What lovely Saiyan children he had."

There ya go...I knew he'd be proud. :-)

Loved the scenes with the twins yelling and fighting, Kakarot turning up, ordering them out and young Vegeta ducking around his dad...so cute and I loved seeing Kakarot in the 'stern father' role...nice change :-)

Love that Kakarot has been trying to get Vegeta pregnant. Yeah! Go get him Goku :-)

Oh God, I love how Vegeta often considers putting up a fight but never does...come on Vegeta, admit it...you love it as much as we do :-)

"Vegeta spread his legs, pushed his feet to the bed, and lifted his hips up, used his own hands to push his pants down, wiggled one leg out of them, and then was stilled when a third finger pushed into him."

Gods! Have I mentioned how much I love your lemons? :-)

“Sucks that there aren’t more Saiyans. I bet sex would be a ton better with other saiyans.”
“Just don’t say that around Dad. Trust me. I’ve heard that conversation and it’s not pretty.”

LOL! Did they get the ChiChi story, followed by the sexy Vegeta story?

“Why hasn’t he had any since us?”
"Goten snorted. “Have you met us?”

LOL! Good answer! I love the twins!

Ooh, not even male, but still winces at Vegeta's threat sh the the twins impregnate anyone. Can totally hear him saying it and although I highly doubt he would do it, you'd still sit up and take notice. LOL!

Very menjoenjoyed this! Big smile on my face...as much as I'm enjoying the drama of the "More of us" universe...I am always up for a good laugh and the "Hormone Therapy" universe provides that in bucket loads. Not to mention, sexy, 'writhy' 'moany' Vegeta :-)

Thank-you for the sequel :-)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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From ANON - Ladylupin on March 16, 2004
That was great! I was SO hoping for a sequal! Will it be more multiples?
By the way, I let my sister read More Of Us. She said to tell you your a creative genious.
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