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By : CardDragonBall

From cueball2 on May 07, 2004
Very Interesting. Vegeta has been enlightened on how to love. And Goko has been enlightend on pride.

Vegeta has been enlightened on how to be at peace. Goku has been enlightend on the sex. LOL

I forsee Goku becoming more Saiyan. And Vegeta..... That's a tough one atm.

Remember you have enslaved yourself to your exuberant fans. Muahahahah.

Nah, take your time. Chapter six should be up by this afternoon, evening or tommorow morning.

Current time: 7:30 a.m. PDT (5-7-2004)
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on May 07, 2004
^_^

He had never tried it with Nappa, because same species or not, he and Nappa were just not compatible in that respect.) --LMAO!!! good, b/c that is just gross. I wonder if there are any Vegeta/Nappa fics out there...I have never come across one.

and stared down at Vegeta�grinning�pinned his wrist to the left side of his body,--so far I am REALLY liking this fight. hehe

went Super Saiyan and grinned all the brighter, tightened his hold on the hands.
�Got you.�--LOVE IT!!! I love when Goku goes super saiyajin...he is so yum!!!!

Rubbed against it until Vegeta was gasping for breath and with that same smirk his lover said: �Understand?�--um...*dies* that was so sexy!!!!

Kakarot kept his one hand wrapped around both of his wrists --he only has one hand on both wrists...X_X *dies again*

Vegeta. Check. Sweating. Check. Trapped under him. Check. Naked. Not so check. --LoL, oh we have to work on that last one. We need nakedness!!!

and his throat was bruising, but that didn�t bother Goku too much, other than it made his mate�s voice huskier, scratchier and that was shiver-worthy. --hell yeah that is shiver worthy!!! *shivers*

Or moaning or groaning or possibly all three. --ALL THREE!!!!!! *cross fingers* please oh please let all 3 happen.

�You need to prepare yourself.� --*wind blows and lemons roll by b/c I am still dead* That is just..gosh you and lemons...damn you!!! you rule the lemon world!!!!

looked at Vegeta and saw his head tipped back, neck bared, shining in the light and bronzed, bruised lightly. With his fingers. Marked by him.
His.
All his.--I love when Goku thinks like this. I just love everything that is happening right now.

(Hard enough that Goku was worried he might be missing a patch of hair.)--lmao!!!!! aww poor Goku. *hands him some rogaine*

We�re still on day one of the �Saiyan enlightement.� --*gasp* really, wow!!! This shall get very interesting indeed.

end notes lol!!!

That lemon was beyon amazing!!!! Beyond I tell you!!!!! I loved it and I will be drooling for days. You rock! I still love their relationship and I love what Goku is learning so far about how to be saiyajin.

^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - Getarian on May 07, 2004
Loved this. :-)

"...He had never tried it with Nappa, because same species or not, he and Nappa were just not compatible in that respect.)"

LOL! Ya think? :-D

Love the 'foreplay' - Goku caught on pretty quick I see. :-) Love this:

�Got you.�

Ooo, very sexy. :-)

"There were those weird ass feelings in his chest again"

Wondering about this... did I miss something earlier? 'Weird ass feelings in the chest', are usually not good... I'm wondering if Vegeta is experiencing some sense of panic that he is not yet fully aware of. Hmm, either that, or I'm reading too much into this. :-)

"...(and admittedly much lower) he smirked right back up at Kakarot and lifted his leg�slowly, so as not to get his whole body pinned to the ground�and he rubbed his thigh between Kakarot�s,"

Oh, very sensual! I loved this scene. :-)

LOL! Loved Goku's response to Vegeta's question of "Understand?" He cracks me up sometimes. :-D

�Is the next lesson what I�m supposed to do with you now?�
"Lesson? Right. Lesson."

LOL! Now who's the baka? I love that Vegeta got so distracted by what Goku was doing that he forgot he was supposed to be teaching him about Saiyan instincts... although, on second thoughts... he was sort of showing him some Saiyan instincts. :-D

"...was still moving his hips in jerking little thrusts against him and he asked �what next?�"

"As if."

LOL! I'm so loving these lessons... I don't know if I'm reading this correctly, but I definitely saw that as Goku teasing him at this point. Gotta love that. :-)

Loved Goku's checklist. :-)

"...Still, Vegeta was not naked. And they were out in the open. (Not really that large of a problem, but considering this was just a lesson and not the real thing, he figured they should move inside.)"

Hmm, interesting... could be very interesting. I like that at this point he is still following his 'Earth raised' conventions, but is already aware on some level, that this may not always be the case... some part of me is a little worried about that, whilst at the same time, I find myself being deeply interested in finding out just who Goku will be by the time he finishes his lessons. Suspenseful. :-)

Something tells me that Vegeta doesn't really have to teach Goku anything, he seems to already know... I think what he really needed was someone to coax the Saiyan ou him him... and Vegeta is definitely the one for that... Godoku oku has some hentai little thoughts... Yeah! Go Kakarot! :-)

"This earned him a slightly amused look from his mate. �Impatient?�"

"�For you, always,� he replied."

Oh, I loved this! So loving. :-)

Amazing lemon! The way you write these two together is incredible. Loved it. :-)

Wonderful chapter... looking forward to the next.

Loved the end dialogue :-D

"...that ficcie, Never Before, I wrote so I could �see� what Vegeta and Bulma were like, how close they were at one point. It�s not a �prequel� to this, but that was one of the reasons I wrote it. ;)"

Well all I can say is that, you have amazing vision... because that was one of the best B/V get-togethers that I have ever read... and trust me, I've read *alot* :-)

"And you know folks, I was thinking of breaking this fic off when it got to like chapter 40 or 45 and starting a new �story.� I might not. But I might. Just so this one doesn�t get too large. �whatcha dink?"

There is no such thing as too large when the story is this good! If you still have more to tell then I would love to see this keep going. If however; you have an idea to branch this story into an entirely new direction, then yes... a sequel would work... as with your other universes. But, if you're asking... "More of this, or something new entirely?" then I vote for 'More of this' - I love this story. :-)

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From ANON - macha on May 06, 2004
Ah, an agressive Goku lemon chappie. I loved it. The fact tGokuGoku was still thinking it was a lesson has me concerned for the Prince later on.

Any way, I think that Goku has a much better hobby, Vegeta! Oh, and becoming more sayian.

I'll stay really quite and not cheer. (although I want to.) *Watches as Goku IT's the two of them somewhere else and sighs* I can't IT, I guess reading the fic. will have to suffice for the rest of the show.
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From ANON - Fruity Cheerios on May 06, 2004
Oy... "Onomotopia" not "Onompetia" *shrugs* Oh well, not like I'm gonna use the same name each time.... :D That would be too easy.

^_^ Dunno what Goku's so freaked out about... I'm all for them having sex in all the chapters.... ~_^ Smut is good! (No hooting and hollering, dancing monkeys though XD) *posts Pro-Goku and 'Geta sex signs all about the reviewing response space* Mwahahaha...

*sees Vegeta glaring at her purposefully with death in his eyes for encouraging the baka* O-o Eep! Uh... Keep up the good work, Card!!! *runs far away*
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From ANON - jaygoose on May 06, 2004
Now that fresfreshing. Yover ver can go wrong with two incredibly sexy Saiyans rolling around on the ground together getting all hot and sexy...the lemon was very good too. *Sighs dreamily* I envy Macha's view.
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From ANON - Ginia on May 06, 2004
'New story' as in sequel/continuation or completly independant? That makes a huge difference... I withhold my opinion until I'm better informed. I will tell you this tho- I - I will never vote for an END ending to this fic - just ain't gonna happen. I love your worlds to much to willingly lose one. New fics from you are always good *carefully ignores a certain monkey dance thing* and I dearly look forward to any new AU's you create. So... what kind of 'end this fic' did you mean?
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From on May 06, 2004
WOOO nice. ~Grins~ I have no words for perfection, hehe. I'm being corny ^_^ sorry! Well gotta go, Ja ne!
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From Shan on May 06, 2004
Large? This fic ain't that large. You could turn it into a sort of epic-size thing. Heh, 'Goku and the quest for sex', volume 25. Kind of has a ring to it.
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on May 06, 2004
I am glad that Bulma didn't seem upset when Vegeta said he had finally killed Tien.

And then she pointed out that it was about damn time, because Kakarot had been �rubbing off� on him for just about long enough.--thats an interesting way to look at it, although very true...

Because, he thought to himself, you wanted to strip me naked and fuck me until I was screaming your name. Of course he didn�t impart this to him, just gave him a dead-stare until Kakarot squirmed and gave up. (For now.) --Ah
whats so bad about that, sounds very inviting to me...But I understand where Vegeta is coming from....and I very much enjoyed that line...^.~

He looked a bit silly with the begging look on his face and the chest full of muscles just out in the open for anyone to come by and see. --silly eh...sounds more like a possesive Vegeta. That line was so cute.

Where was a brick wall when you needed one? --GAH!!!ROFL!!!! Aww but Vegeta is being VERY patient with Goku. I am very proud of the Prince, and proud of his restraint for not bashing his head in somewhere.

(Only because he knew that if Vegeta asked he would let him go and he wasn�t forcing him to do anything, just holding him down.)--I love that...^_^

Evil, evil Prince.--he is evil!!!! *hugs Vegeta* and I love it...loved the way he looked at Goku. And I really loved when Goku kept having flashes of holding Vegeta down. And wondering why that aroused him... WOO HOO HOT SAIYAJIN KNITTING IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! I can hardly wait!!!! I guess they should knit a bag or something to carry all of theirons ons in...

^.*
-MB-
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From ANON - Getarian on May 05, 2004
Loved Vegeta's thoughts on Kakarot and his emerging Saiyan nature. I loved how his thoughts travelled back to his latest conversation with Bulma. Loved this:

"...And then she pointed out that it was about damn time, because Kakarot had been �rubbing off� on him for just about long enough."

(smiles) I loved her loyalty to Vegeta. It's really nice. :-)

Love this:
"Saiyans, she seemed to think, were intense and somewhat violent. (Where she got these assumptions, he did not know.)"

LOL! He can't be serious. :-D

Enjoyed Vegeta's thoughts as he pondered over what to do about helping Kakarot bring out his Saiyan nature and understand it better. Totally loved this:

"What to do?"
"(This thought process would take him a while, considering that part of coaxing out the Saiyan would include violent fighting, angry sex and fighting for �dominance.�) (Whom was he kidding? He was a Saiyan, after all, one that had been trapped up in a box of nice behavior for too long and had just been offered a new playmate.)"

LOL! Yeah, this sounds very Vegeta-like, he's definitely going to want to enjoy his new playmate. :-)

Loved the question and answer scene between Goku and Vegeta. Vegeta's inner thoughts as he tried to patiently answer all of Goku's questions were very well done. I could definitely imagine him getting all annoyed at having to answer these type of questions when he'd rather not, but at the same time, acknowledge to himself that this is what he wanted... a more Saiyan Kakarot. I enjoyed this very much. :-)

(Chuckle) Poor Goku, I could feel his apprehension building as his need to keep asking these questions washed through him whilst noticing that Vegeta was getting less and less happy about answering them... what's an emerging Saiyan to do? :-)

Loved Goku's thoughts when Vegeta told him that they should work on his Saiyastinstincts. Particularly enjoyed his trip down memory lane when he had been confronted by his "so very nice and homicidal older brother" LOL!

Oh I so loved this:
"�So, where are we going to start?� Vegeta gave him an amused look, then he dropped his gaze from Goku�s eyes, down his chest to his �personal area.� Looked at him pointedly."
"Smirked. �Where would you like to start, Kakarot?�"
"Evil, evil Prince..."

(chuckle) Yes, evil... and very, very sexy. ;-)

I really enjoyed this chapter. Looks like where heading into a very interesting area, and I am very much lookingwardward to the next chapter... especially considering the way this one ended. ;-)

"I was considering scrapping the whole fight scene for a nice steamy lemon at that point. (wouldn�t have been realistic, but it would have been satisfying.)"

Oh yes, I agree... it most certainly would have been... *sigh*

"See? I wanted to say all that part about the Vegeta asked Goku �can you handle me� and now it was Vegeta�s turn to figure out if he could handle Goku two chapters ago when I was biting my tongue."

Ahh, well you're right, it was a very good question... worth the tongue biting. ;-)

"I often tell people that they argue like a �woman.� (Never mind I too am one.) But as my brother once told me Women tend to argue the �what ifs.� Poor Prince-y poo."

LOL! poor 'Prince-y poo' (love that) He probably thought he would be avoiding these sort of pitfalls pairing up with a Saiyan male... :-D

"...So I think Goku is looking for someone to tell him that he is *right * either as a �earthling� or a �Saiyan� and Vegeta is the man to go to if you want to be �Saiyan.� "

Of course, yeah... I was still thinking of him as thinking in human terms only... this makes sense. :-)

"(Can you tell I have theories abounding about Goku�s thought processes?)"

(chuckle) Yeah, but that's pretty normal... I could spend a lifetime pondering on the complexities that make up The Saiyan Prince. That's why we love them. :-)

"(Which is fine, I always like to see brand new baby reviews be born.)"

LOL!

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From ANON - macha on May 05, 2004
*sits quietly on pom poms while anticipating Vegeta's next 'Sayian Revelation'. Keeps one hand over mouth so that I don't interupt* Yah, I think that had I really been cheering Vegeta would have turned around and blasted me. Goku is so easily distracted!

What HAS Vegeta gotten himself into? He knows that Kakarott was raised on earth, and now he is going to teach him to be 'more' sayian. Ah, I can't wait to see what happens. (Do you think he's bitting off more than he can chew? It cinlyinly wouldn't be the first time.) So, we know that Goku was aroused by 'the incedent', but was Vegeta? He hasn't let on one way or another.

I hate tasteless boar. Ew. Who can think about sparring and lemons when you have tasteless boar taste in your mouth? I liked the fact they both thought the same thing about the meal (or did I read that incorrectly?)

So Goku hasn't found a new hobby in twisting off boars' heads? Ah, that's a shame. Maybe he'd find it more intertaining if you greased the pig first. (o.O)

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From ANON - MrsSesshoumaruJaganshi on May 05, 2004
Wow...nothing short of wow...t ret really say much else because of all of the hentai images of Goku and Vegeta "Knitting and crochetting" in the next chapter. MMMMMMM. rul rule, Your fics rule and your little char. notes remind me of the ones at the bottom of my InuYasha story..I have rambled enough...::Goes back to drooling at vegeta::
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From ANON - Michael Mercer (AKA Nyuushin ^_^) on May 05, 2004
OMFG!!!!!!

If I was straight, or if I was female and gay, I would force you to marry me, just so I could see you when you wrote these masterpieces!

cause that's what this story is, and nothing short of it. I don't want to make you feel like some there's some lvl of expectation either...but it is.

I read it all in one sitting, because every time I would turn to close it or go away, I had to rush right back and continue. Took me about 6 hours......but I did it! ^_^

all I have to say, bascially, is that THIS is one of those you read about and they make you want to cry cause they're so beautiful. Seriousl.I c.I could barely read half ot his, I was sobbing so hard at points. Its such an AWESOME fic.....and I'm a rabid Goku fan. ^_^

and you did what I didn't was possible. YOU MADE ME LIKE VEGETA!!!!!! XD

ya see, I used to HATE Vegeta. I was SOOO full of hatred for him. I dunno why, I jsut hated his char. Then you have to go and write this fic, and explain what his char is all about.....and it made SENSE!

so now I have no more anger.....just love. And 3-somes....*grabs Goku and Vegeta and carts them of_^
_^

well, that's all for now. Can't wait for more! I wanna see Saiyan-y, Aggressive Goku! ^_^

Loves ya!

Michael mercer (AKA Nyuushin)
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From on May 05, 2004
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, this is so exciting. I can't wait, and this chapter was so funny. Poor little anoyed Veggie. (sorry about the spelling) Well gotta go, Ja ne!
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