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Reviews for Uncharted Waters

By : Makota2112
  • From ANON - ywomywoman on June 14, 2004
    Wow, that was abrupt. I'm so used to happy endings...ah well, you were right, it was realistic. (Although I personally adore Vegeta being kittenish and weak, it makes me think of tying him up and doing incredibly depraved things to him, he, he). I like your SS4 better than the one in GT as well. I totally anticipated him disowning Trunks, because that's what I'd do and Vegeta's mucre cre concerned about pride than I am. All in all, good story, worth the time.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2004
    Awesome ending, but is it really end?end? I mean, will Vegeta really abandon Piccolo? Will you start a new series after this one?
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 14, 2004
    When I first saw your update and the fact that the story was now complete I was in shock. I couldn't believe it. How in the world seeing how the last chapter had ended could the story be over...already. The first thing that came mind was that Goku had to be dead. And I got a bit excited at that. No one kills off Goku. Well I did in my new fic, but that is beside the point. My morbid self being, I wanted it to be true. But I understand that it is terrible mean to do so. *sigh* Anyway, the ending worked. I don't know how but it did. Vegeta has never been a good guy, let's face it. He just cared for his family and damn everyone else. But when Trunks went against the laws that the Prince had always believed in it was just too much I suppose. It's cool though, Vegeta did eventually become stronger than Goku. *grins*

    I'm sad that its over but all good things must end. I hope to see you around again. I really enjoyed myself.
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  • From ANON - Berni on June 14, 2004
    AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are my favourite writter and now you stop? You can´t do that to me! Please continue! And if you continue in a few months it doesn´t matter to me , but please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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  • From ANON - kitkat on June 09, 2004
    hummm... decided to review again because i feel the way i described Piccolo and Vegeta in my previous review was kinda harsh, i just meant to show that IF there are reasons for prejudice towards Gk/T relationship then there are also reasons for people (Goku's friends) to not accept V/P, specially 'cause they were the enemies before they got to the "good side" even if they proved their lty lty later... anyway, i think i said too much already. I'm just trying to undo any bad feelings that comment may have created.

    ja ne.
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  • From ANON - dobela on June 09, 2004
    ARGH!!!! cruel! update please asap!
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  • From ANON - kitkat on June 09, 2004
    hey! very nice story. i reviwed before right after goku and trunks got together, but that was by e-mail. Now i'm here to say i kept reading more attentivelly after that because i just love the pairing (prefer Mirai Trunks/Goku). Well i can't wait to see how you will write the next chapter. How Vegeta will confront Goku and Trunks cause i don't need to wonder if he liked the "confession", the "Booom!" was clear enough. ^^ I just ask (beg?) you not make Goku and Trunks give up their love because of some dumb uncalled prejudice.

    But seriously, all the fuss is because of the diference in age? C'mon HOW can they (everybody) be creeped out by something so ridiculous like this? i believe seeing vegeta and piccolo, two gay aliens of diferent species, together would be much more disturbing (i have nothing at all against it) than a simple twenty years diference in the age of two people who love each other. Besides if people (Goku's friends) analize things better they will realize they were the first to say "Goku never grew up" so his mental age, in spite of having kids and grandkids, is younger than anyone i can think of. Anyway this was just a thought i fi hai had to register.

    ja ne.
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  • From jaygoose on June 08, 2004
    Ahhhh...*falls out of the chair and rolls on the floor in hysterics* Oh my god! I can't wait to see what happens next. You should try suspense novels. You have natural talent. :)
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on June 08, 2004
    *BOOM* haha...reminded me of what happened to my dinner in the microwave last night. oh the lovely 'splosions. I wonder if Trunks actually told him or if Vegeta just erupted from impatience...I can definitely picture somethin' like that with the giant mushroom cloud rising through the roof of Capsule Corp. into the sky. Hahaha...Piccolo's probably not going to get 'any' for a month after this. Oh crap...I forgot about Goku...Vegeta is going to KILL him, wish him back to life, KILL him again, track him down in Other World, and kill him yet again. It seems I'll need more than a raincoat for this...maybe a metal umbrella to protect myself from Goku's bloody body parts that will rain from the sky when Vegeta's done with him.

    On another note, I'm glad you like my comments. Squee! *feels special* Update soon!

    ~Kira~
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  • From Shan on June 08, 2004
    >.< Don't like cliffhangers! Well, I did until just then. I think this is my first review for this story. I just read it all at once and I have to say I love the smut where there are 3 Piccolos and 1 Vegeta. Mmmm.....
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  • From on June 08, 2004
    Woo hooooo! Updated! Lol. Man it was a really bad idea to bring Vegeta there ^^;;. *cries* Cliffhangers are evil. But excellent chapter, well worth the wait. Poor Piccolo. If he survived the blast and Vegeta is done beating Trunks down, he's probably in a a lot of trouble for lying to him. Oh man hope Bulma surs ths that O_o.

    Er well I've been working of fanart for your fic since I first saw Unconditional bonds at Smoochies. Of course I was gonna get your permission first ^^; But I put it away and I'm not sure where it is now ^^; I need a scanner. So technically I'm not hoarding ^^.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2004
    Uh-oh!! Judging by the way this chapter ended, Vegeta is pissed off! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - MrsSesshoumaruJaganshi on June 08, 2004
    Oh wow .... BOOM ! I soooo saw that one coming because if I was Vegeta it would be much much bigger than boom. Wonderful wonderful fic ! Very well written, and I am surprised because neither of the pairings in it are pairings I am originally a fan of but you do them justice. I can not wait for an update (which is selfish bec you you just did one while I was in the middle of chapter 15) PLEASE email me and let me know when chapter 19 gets here.
    ~Angel
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  • From ANON - Jupitor Knight on May 25, 2004
    when the shit hits the fan i'm running and ducking This is great update sooooon please i'm one of your loyal readers i promise i am. I'm eager like ne'se's business to see whats fixing to happen.
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  • From ANON - Berni on May 24, 2004
    This is the BEST DBZ storry I´ve ever read! PLEASE CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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