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Reviews for Uncharted Waters

By : Makota2112
  • From ANON - Mehla Seraphim on May 16, 2004
    Wow. I actually felt the dread when Trunks phone rang ^^;;;. I'm so happy you updated and yeah I'd be surprised if your next chapter wasn't long. So everything comes out in the open then? Oh man poor Piccolo. More guilt and make up sex for him then ^^;.

    I can't wait! I'm so excited to see this. Oh and the fan art! Always have to check out the competition n_n.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2004
    Oh yes, the moment of truth is about to arrive for Trunks! Goku better hope that Piccolo can hold Vegeta back when he's told the truth! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on May 16, 2004
    Woohoo! Another beautiful chapter! I'm also burning with anticipation for the next chapter. Yes! I love it when the shit hits the fan. AGH! I'm so hyper after reading that chapter. I wonder just how Vegeta will react. Hmm..it might be scary *hides in corner*, but then again it might not. I would love to see Gohan get his for being a snitch. Grr...all tim time Piccolo spent trying to hide it from Vegeta and Gohan ruined it. Anywho, keep up the good work and update soon.

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 16, 2004
    Yeah, it was short but it was really good. You write excellent dialogue. I was on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for more...update soon...please?
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  • From ANON - Jupitor Knight on April 29, 2004
    wow that was just...wow. I cant wat to see the reaction vegteta is going to have to Goku and Trunks. of oourse there isn'th heh he can do about it is there. I wonder if g/v chapters will become common or will you give them their own story?
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  • From ANON - Mehla Seraphim on April 28, 2004
    Lol! You know maybe I shouldn't read fanfics so early in the morning. I read the warning at the begining of 16 and thought, "Orgy? Must just be kidding around." I somehow completely forgot he could use tri form. Very creative ^^. Vejiita does seem to have an overactive imagination.

    Ah! Five more days still. I can't wait to see the confrontation. It should be a very powerful chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2004
    Trunks better tell Vegeta what happened before Gohan does! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From Kira on April 28, 2004
    An excellent story so far! Yours was the first fic I came across when I first joined AFF (which wasn't long ago). I loved this one so much that I went back and read the story that preceeded it. You are an amazing writer. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - Mehla Seraphim on April 21, 2004
    Woo. I hadn't checked your fic since saturday and already there's more chapters? ^^. This brightened my day. I'm just itching to see Vegeta's reaction. Piccolo's was...Hm..What's the word. Oh yeah. Terrifying. I can see why they'd pretty much cower from his rage. I'm so looking foward to see how the next couple of chapters pan out. ^^.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on April 21, 2004
    That was supercalifragalisticexpealadocious! Did I spell that right? Anyway, I loved seeing things from Goku and Trunks point of view. Wonderful. I am glad that there is another couple in this fic now. You never can have too much man on man action.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2004
    Goku and Trunks are just as bad as Bulma! They didn't think about anyone, but themselves and that was very selfish! I don't blame Goten or Piccolo about how they feel! Boy, Vegeta will be screaming for vengence when he finds out. Will Trunks really tell his parents or will he be the coward like we know he is and not say anything? Knowing Trunks, he won't say anything and Piccolo will have to tell Vegeta or Goten will. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - JupiKnigKnight on April 20, 2004
    well maybe i over reacted....just a bit....I see that you've got the situation well in hand for this. Perhaps trunks will be happy with goku. although goku is only slightly younger then his father. but in the world of fanfiction anything can happen right. Good job can't wait for you to update thats for the note saying that you have.
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  • From ANON - Jupitor Knight on April 17, 2004
    WHAT??????? YOU GOT TO BE OUT OF YOUR MIND.... GOKU......GOKU!!!!!!! i THINK I SHALL NOW FAINT and then to leave it like that you need to update. SOON. thats not a request.
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  • From ANON - Mehla Seraphim on April 16, 2004
    Yay!! I found your stories again at long last. I always wondered if you ever wrote a sequel for Unconditional Bonds. Now I see you have, and with an evil little chapter 12 chiffhanger as well. ^^. You are the reason I started to write dbz fanfics actually. Ever since I saw your other fic on Smoochies a few years ago. I'm glad to see you still have wonderful writing skills. I can't wait to see where this story is going. I mean I thought Goku might be in that situation. But then blamo. There it is. I was still shocked by it. Vegeta will probably go ballistic ^^;;.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2004
    NANI?! This is not good at all! Goten will be heartbroken when he finds out! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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