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Reviews for Uncharted Waters

By : Makota2112
  • From ANON - jaygoose on April 16, 2004
    Oh my fucking god! I can't believe you would do this to me! Haven't I been loyal to you and you go and do this. I have forgotten all the comments I was going to make thanks to that last little scene there. What the hell! Oh...my...God!
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  • From ANON - Jupitor Knight on April 12, 2004
    Hey I loved it. Ohh it's so gooooood. It's ok you forgot I"m glad you did remember in the end. I get so busy that i find myself onlndomndomly checking to see if certain stories get updated. What i need to do is to write down the titles of the ones i want to check once a week and then check them. HA like that's going to happen.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on April 11, 2004
    Whoa....that was interesting. I NEVER thought that I'd be forced to picture Piccolo and Vegeta that way...but I much say that it was rather entertaining. I liked it. Hmm...He He.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2004
    Wow!! That was a side to Vegeta and Piccolo I thought I would never see! Cool! Hurry with the next one!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2004
    I think Goten would be a great mate for Trunks! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on April 01, 2004
    That was an especially evil chapter. I love when the Prince gets all devious. He was also good with Pan too. Ahh, we get to see all side of the loverly Prince. Poor Piccolo, I must say that he is getting a lot more than he deserved though. I can't wait for the next part. Great fic, by the way.
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  • From ANON - Jupitor Knight on April 01, 2004
    Thank you Thank you Thank you for letting me know. This is goood. but will Piccollo be getting revenge against vegeta or is he just going to let vegeta have his way. I'm curious.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2004
    I'm glad Goku is back to normal. Him being like that was creepy. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Jupitor Knight on March 31, 2004
    ohhh likey likey. Is it going to become a V/P/K now? I'm curious. Also what happened to Chi Chi. Or are we going to leave it as a freak accident. Could you email me when you update?
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  • From ANON - jaygo¨ ‡ on February 26, 2004
    I loved the opener. I must admit I went on a search for this story and found it archived somewhere else. I have made it throught the firsven ven chapters already but I reread the three chapters and i must say that I have renewed appreciation for the way you opened the story.

    -A child’s kaleidoscope.

    Red and sparkle and swimming with white shell and gray catching the light...all swirling together.

    Peaking through the ribbon edged ice forming new facets, dimensions.

    The snow coming down...falling on the water, catching on her eyelashes.

    Like a china doll, glass eyes catch the sun, crimson floating from her hair… like satin.

    Suspended in a tube held up to the eye; turn her and maybe more will appear.

    The scenery is always changing.

    ... I never knew blood could preserve such beauty.-


    It makes alot of sense now. Lovely and so sad all at the same time.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 28, 2004
    Cool!! Totally awesome! It didn't take you long to post up the sequel at all. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Drea on March 28, 2004
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    *gigglegiggle* Cannot wait to read it!!!!!!!!I'm sooooooooo happy!!!!! *hugs Makota*
    I'll let U know my opinions!!!Anyway,I've waited for this for sooo long!!!!
    *smack*
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