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Reviews for Uncharted Waters

By : Makota2112

From Iggymama27 on December 02, 2011
O_O OMG! Goku and...OMG! I read your last story Unconditonal Bonds and I loved it as well. This fic definitely does not disappoint. I love the extra drama in this fic and the pacing of the plot is spot on. I actually find the Goku/Trunks pairing to be refreshing from the common pairings (what can I say I like pairings that aren't as conventional). I can't wait to read what happens next.

TTYL ^.*
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From IuvenesL on August 03, 2009
Wow, I'm glad I decided to read this series, even though it's unfinished and sadly looks like it will never be finished. And it was only out of boredom that I read it, because I'm usually not fond of any pairings involving Nameks at all. But wow! This was really awesome! And I'm extremely picky, too...I don't just toss out compliments like that randomly. I'm reviewing on this volume because it was undoubtedly the best of the three - the first was good, but fairly uneventful and....normal. The third was unfinished and therefore a bit disappointing. But this volume was Pure Win. The Goku/Trunks surprise was epic (though I really, really wanted a Goku/Trunks lemon and never got one), and the ending was just crazy. I'm a G/V fan, too, so it's amazing that I enjoyed it so much. I felt like you were teasing with the possibility of bringing Goku in on the P/V action in the beginning of this volume, and you probably did that on purpose, but wow, I didn't expect where it went - and amazingly, I was far from disappointed. Also, the amazingly kinky P/V sex in this fic was HAWT. I've seen so many people try to do split-form sex, and do it badly, but that was awesome - same goes for the violent sex from earlier.

If you ever revive this fic, I think I will gasm in happiness.
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From MasterofPie on March 27, 2008
wow that was an amazing fic! So sad that it is over, and that Vegeta left ... but for some reason i do not feel truly sad that he left ... maybe as you said, it fits his personality ... it sucks, but no tears were shed ... Anwyho, just an amazing story ^__^
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From MasterofPie on March 21, 2008
haha i liked Goten's and Trunk's mockery of Vegeta and Piccolo ^__^
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From MasterofPie on March 20, 2008
wow what a steamy sex scene! I really cannot say more than that ... wow
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From MasterofPie on March 20, 2008
i love your intro to this chapter - the whole crazy shopper malls and those damn annoying kids! God the bug me to no idea
Hahah Vegeta holdings grudges, no way ... hahah
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From Rowina on June 18, 2007
I am SO glad I found this story too late to follow it chapter by chapter, because I think I would have died of a suspense-related breakdown...

To begin with the ending, I like it. I'm glad there's a sequel (gods, am I glad!), but I think it's very plausible and fitting that V would transform and rage, then regret and try to make amends by sparing Goku and leaving P. This last chapter was spectacular, a worthy culmination of all that had gone before. It did not disappoint, but it was heartbreaking to me, so very sad.

V wasn't the only one disturbed by the Goku/T get-together... For myself, it's a 'what in the hell does T see in him?' kind of questioning. It seems to be more of a distraction from his obligations/rebellion against his cloistered upbringing, more than a genuine 'found my soulmate' kind of relationship. Goku is obviously still totally screwed up by Chichi's death, so his falling for T is completely understandable. Might I say, I just don't like your Goku--he gets on my nerves, poor guy...

How in the hell did V take Nail and Kami, and where did they go? How do you kill or banish a psychic presence? That part just doesn't make sense to me, and I like to think that they aren't gone forever... I have to think so, for P's sake.

I can't believe Gohan! What a jerk! and poor Goten! He can't get a break, can he?

The lemons were, um, stupendously licentious and debauched. Bravo! Needless to say, I was almost too distracted by the plot to pay them much attention at all. But V and P and very good together, very good indeed. *fans self*

So, onto the third part...I am frankly petrified, knowing it's not finished. How will I cope, if it's anywhere near as good as this? Oh well, if I die of suspense, it will be a good death. :-) Thanks so much for this!
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From ANON - Pic\'s Pixie on September 18, 2005
yeah i was just rereading this story and i remembered something i really wanted to know about...what did vegeta do to piccolo's cape and turban that he doesn't wear them anymore? u mention that it was a fond memory of vegeta's but i'm so curious, i gotta know :P great story though i love it
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From ANON - Lee on April 09, 2005
speechless...
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From ANON - colt on March 28, 2005
hay i revied ur last dbz fic were piccolo and vegeta go together. i loved it and this one too. its great all around i aplode u being a big dbz fan and fic fan myself. the male on male interaction was truly the best i have ever seen and i was completly greatful that my girlfriend was here to help out after reading some of them. i hope to see more fan fics frome u in the futre. thanks for the great stories it only took my 3 days to read them both.

colt
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From ANON - Achillona77 on February 03, 2005
Very disturbing. Left more questions than answers. What an aftermath.

The curse that Vegeta placed on his son...His mate Piccolo destroyed...The hatred of Gohan towards Trunks...and Goten's wrath towards his father? And what of that father, Goku? Does this fool remain the village idiot? Or does he turn into Kakarrot a true Sayian and avenge his mate? Vegeta cursed and disowned his son, said he won't enter into the Sayian version of the afterlife. Strange, one would think he would have cursed Kakarrot as well...instead he's just going to kill him. Oh! the possibilities! Confrontation: Part Deux!

...And what of Piccolo? How mad will he be driven? To have lost both Kami and Nail? They were his family! Sudden death plus losing a mate? If he isn't pushed to the brink of madness...Will he turn renegade and blow up the planet? Talk about devastion!

So many issues, so much angst. Trilogy, Sequel, Epic...Whatever you choose to call it, this SAGA isn't over yet. Please continue...this work is too important to leave unfinished.

[Safe Journey]
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From ANON - Achillona77 on February 03, 2005
Very disturbing. Left more questions than answers. What an aftermath.

The curse that Vegeta placed on his son...His mate Piccolo destroyed...The hatred of Gohan towards Trunks...and Goten's wrath towards his father? And what of that father, Goku? Does this fool remain the village idiot? Or does he turn into Kakarrot a true Sayian and avenge his mate? Vegeta cursed and disowned his son, said he won't enter into the Sayian version of the afterlife. Strange, one would think he would have cursed Kakarrot as well...instead he's just going to kill him. Oh! the possibilities! Confrontation: Part Deux!

...And what of Piccolo? How mad will he be driven? To have lost both Kami and Nail? They were his family! Sudden death plus losing a mate? If he isn't pushed to the brink of madness...Will he turn renegade and blow up the planet? Talk about devastion!

So many issues, so much angst. Trilogy, Sequel, Epic...Whatever you choose to call it, this SAGA isn't over yet. Please continue...this work is too important to leave unfinished.

[Safe Journey]
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From on June 15, 2004
Waaaa! The end?? Such a sad ending too. I do like the sudden ssj4. I wasn't even thinking about that as a possiblity of what coulda have happened. Oh poor Nail and Kami. And yes very sudden. But at least it dos leave it more or less open. I've really enjoyed your fanfics. *cries* Well I do hope you find the time nspinspiration to write a 3rd part of this series. And I so will be sending you art ^^. And finishing up my V/P, S/P fanfics. But..*sniffles* Now I'm going to have to searh the net forever to find more V/P fics to tide me over.
Hehee there's more I wanna say but I just can't think of it. Plus I have a feeling I'd ramble forever ^^;;
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From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on June 15, 2004
That feeling has overcome me. That swirling mixture of emotions that comes at the end of a truly great story. Sadness, relief, anger, happiness...they are all in there among others. So the first fic I ever stumbled across at this site has come to a close, but an ending was inevitable. You are a truly evil, yet brilliant writer. Thankyou for writing this fic. *showers Makota with gifts* Have fun in England. *prays Makota finds time to write while there and prays for sequel*

~Kira~

P.S.
I loved the ending. It kinda whacked me hard and knocked the breath out of me but, I loved it. I know this was the final chapter and all but, Post again soon. (for a new fic.)
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From ANON - kitkat on June 15, 2004
yes you're right, this chapter was really strong for me. But i agree with you when you say it is Vegeta's reaction, i really believe he would react this way. Poor Goku! And poor Vegeta also, he might have suffered a LOT with the confession to trigger the SSJ4 tranformation and to snap at Piccolo the way he did. Even being a Goku fan i liked (weird ne??) the end of the story. hope to read more from you in the future.

see ya.

PS: oh! and you're rigth once again, i left my first review in one of the lists.
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