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Reviews for Routine Maintenance

By : ElfFromSpace
  • From Ameban on June 03, 2005
    Even if I'm not really found on Edo/Winry (mostly because Edo is too closed minded for everything new besides his cure), this piece is wonderful wrote. I can heard Winry and Edo's chats as they were talking in my head. They're very in character. Besides, I found amusing the kinki stuff of Winry towars Edo's machine parts.
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  • From ANON - Truth44 not logged in on May 27, 2005
    Wow... that's all I can say. I laughed, I got hot, I laughed some more--I loved it. I really mean it; this was awesome. I loved the situation, characterization and dialogue. I've never read a FMA fic like this, and I though that this was sheer perfection. Fantastic work with this. It was great!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 24, 2005
    Is it just me, or does this seem like something that Winry would actually do? I swear she has metal fever (like jungle fever, only it applies to mechanical things).
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  • From ANON - Christopher on April 20, 2005
    This is a great story! This has to be one of the best Full Metal Alchemist stories that I have ever read anywhere. Only thing wrong with it was that there were a few spelling and grammar errors, but those were easily overlooked.
    I really hope that you will make a sequel to this story, maybe situated in the time after the series ends. Or just as a OOC story. Either one would rock!
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  • From ANON - christal-chan on March 06, 2005
    this was great there needs to be more like it
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  • From ANON - ectweak2004 on March 01, 2005
    wow... that was great! definitely the best FMA fic on this site! would like to see what else you got in store if you ever feel up to writing again!

    5/5
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  • From ANON - Shiba-chan on January 25, 2005
    How cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it, it was soooooooooooo adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm not a big fan on Winrey tho...but I absoutly love Ed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was awesome!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shizu Kuwabara (not logged in) on January 14, 2005
    XD That was great. To me, it's pretty rare to find where the female's dominant. Tee hee. I love EdxWinry (or WinryxEd) and this was pretty damn good. ^^
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  • From ANON - drake220 on December 30, 2004
    i liked this a lot!!!! bravo to you! and your name is hysterical! have you ever read Tanya Huff's Valor series? they do have elves from space there (sex crazed maniacs too. invented cocunut rubbing oil before the wheel. interesting species, those Taykans....fun too!) write more!!
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  • From ANON - Loner on December 12, 2004
    I'm hoping that thar is going to be another chater to this. Because I'm realy impressed and that's a vary hard thing to do.
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  • From ANON - me! on December 07, 2004
    "Very good" save for the fact that the kemon is pretty taken from a douj, isn't it?
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  • From Mic123 on November 25, 2004
    Very well done, I give it 10,000,000,000,000 stars and a A++++++++++ rating just exelent, one of my favs for shure lol, need another chapter to this or a sequil, don't let us wait any longer, I hate Clifhangers!!!! lol, exelently done and concived, * aplouads and bowes * your a master writer
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  • From on November 15, 2004
    I am absolutely in love with this story. I love the way it was written and the way you wrote Winry seems true to her character. Great job!
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  • From akuseru on September 16, 2004
    a good read the only thing that bugged me is that if you're labelling it NC-17 why not go ahead and say penis instead of "IT"?
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  • From ANON - knives2nd on September 13, 2004
    this was a good story. the only thing that threw me off alot was the use of the words "it" and "them" to describe ed's body parts. it's pretty obvious what you're talking about so you might as well go on and say penis or balls or whatever terminology you want. it'll make the sentences flow better.
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