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Reviews for Routine Maintenance

By : ElfFromSpace
  • From on October 12, 2006
    Hmm.... I think I might have reviewed this before, but I wasn't sure if it was the same story. Now I'm sure and it's still great! I really enjoyed reading it both times (lol). :) (:
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  • From ANON - WS on October 11, 2006
    Good job on the story, while you over used the word IT a little to often, you managed to do so without sounding up-tight. Also, next time you write a story, you might want to slow your typing down a little bit
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2006
    This was a very nice story, although the repeated use of 'IT' ruined the mood for me every now and then. You should consider changing it to the actual body part- it is NC-17 after all. Other than that, it was great! I'll look forward to more from you. They were all very IC.
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  • From ANON - Raneynr Lerrqu on September 05, 2006
    I really liked it, good job. Keep up the good work, humor really needs to stay in this couple. Thanx
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  • From ANON - Miss Woodford on June 21, 2006
    I've been backtracking through the archives looking for EdxWin stories, and this is a great one. Good flow, Ed was especially in character with his attempts to deny his feelings. The humor was quite a nice touch too, most hentai fics are sooo serious. People! We write stories like this for fun, no one's trying to win the Nobel Prize for literature.
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  • From ANON - fang tomashy on December 30, 2005
    that was... FUCKING ASOME just a few errers but still cool
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2005
    This can't just be a oneshot!!!! It's too great for a oneshot!!!
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  • From ANON - Blackthorn on November 14, 2005
    Great Fic, the hurmor realy reminded me of the way the humor felt in FMA =D, I know it can be vary hard to keep people in charictor for a lemon, but you make it look easy xD
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  • From Shadowfan20 on October 21, 2005
    Excellent story me like! It had a few spelling errors that I picked up, but none the less it was still very well written and good! Keep up the good work:)
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  • From ANON - Buggy on October 07, 2005
    Loved your fic, but the reason I'm writing this is because this fic is gonna be deleted. This fic has no disclaimer, and according the main page, it says all fic with no disclaimer are gonna get earsed. I'm just writing this because your fic is too good to be deleted for such a small reason. Please, write a short one up quick, don't let future readers of this fic miss out on it cause of such a silly reason. Your story is too good to lose because of this little technicality.
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  • From ANON - Ronie on September 10, 2005
    um...continue please....tell me what happens!!!!! i hate being left in the dark
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  • From ANON - Aloe on July 23, 2005
    What a cute fic ... very sweet ... well done, indeed.
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  • From ANON - dojomistressachan on July 05, 2005
    Serously kick ass fic and you kept both of them very much in character. And yeah I think Winry does have some problems with obsessing with automail but oh well. ^^ Makes for some kinky fun. Anyway was wondering if you were thinking of a sequal, at the end it said something about her suprising him at central...not a bad idea. Anyway just a thought, loved the fic.
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  • From ANON - Sorenol on June 27, 2005
    That was adorable!! I've wanted to make those two get together for a really long time. But hey...you should write a Roy and Riza fic too!! LOL. That would be awsome!!!LOL. Keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - Nymphetamine Girl on June 03, 2005
    Sexy! XD First smut I decided to read and with my luck it ends up being this well written one! Woot! This place needs more EdxWinry smut fics... with any luck, more luke yours!! This was both hot and hysterical at the same time. And despite the situation, they were both wonderfully in character. I loved seeing Winry take the action! That was in character for her, I think. Ed being a bit reluctant was also just like him. Anywho, I loved it. I would love to see more EdxWinry smut from ya!
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