Click Here!

Reviews for Feather light

By : Madhatter
  • From ANON - Solitaire on April 22, 2004
    WOW!!! I can't wait for more. Wings, huh? That will be a bitch to dress!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - yuikey on April 22, 2004
    great story! your doing fine!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - neoorA on April 22, 2004
    wow WOW WOW OH DID I SAY WOW! THAT WAS A GREAT CHIPPY BUT IF U COULD MAKE THEM LONGER THANKS OYEA I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHIPPY
    Report Review

  • From ANON - devilkitty on April 20, 2004
    Aside from the fact that you seem to be 'rushing' the story, its good.
    More development in the hospital and the raid on the labs would have been nice.
    But the mental image of G running away was nice.
    Minor misspelli but but its not your first language and English is weird at times with tense and spelling.
    Looking forward to the next installment to see what it was the professor was doing to Duo.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Raven\'s Light on April 20, 2004
    Yay!!! It's about time. ^_^ I love it. Maaaaahhh please let Duo be okay. *sniff sniff* Update soon!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - leemax^_^ on April 20, 2004
    ^_^ Wonderful keep it up. Can't wait till you get more parts out for your stories. I want you to finish them all. Love them all so much. @_@ Waiting!!!!!!!!

    Report Review

  • From ANON - AikoNamika on April 20, 2004
    Hmmm...Interesting plot. *smiles* I can't wait to see what happens next.

    On a purely grammatical critique...Please, please, please keep track of your verb tenses! Having things like "It had been a long time and Heero hasn't seen Duo" *is only paraphrasing* is really, really really bloody irritating! I can read it, but you're driving me up the wall! *whimpers*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jander on April 19, 2004
    You definitely got my attention!! Please update as soon as POSSIBLE! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what you have in store for everyone - the characters and the readers!! I'm waiting on the edge of my seat, so please hurry and bring on the next chapter before I fall off!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Solitaire on April 19, 2004
    First I want to say that I enjoy all of your stories. Secondly I want to say ARE YOU MEAN OR WHAT???? How can you just write one chapter and then stop. I have been waiting sooooo long for more of this story. If you will write more very soon I will bake you a chocolate cake. Pweeeeese. Blessings, Solitaire
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Amanda on April 14, 2004
    I really like the story so far and would really enjoy getting to read what happens next, so please post the next chapter soon! =D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mistress of Anime on April 14, 2004
    Wow, i love the idea for the story plot....I want to read more! please???
    Report Review

  • From ANON - shikaru on April 06, 2004
    you have to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    duo:oh for my sake just write the second chapter goddammit or i will be forced to use the tranquilizer on your bloody readers!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Solitaire on April 04, 2004
    Do you have a meant streak??? What a cliff hanger. I'll give you all my Easter candy if you will write more very soon. Thanks, Solitaire
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Raven\'s Light on April 04, 2004
    I like it. But oh... Duo Duo-kun. ;_; Please update soon! Duo must be saved!!!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - aspara on April 04, 2004
    Totally fun!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!