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Reviews for Kiss from a rose

By : Hecate

From ANON - bob on July 24, 2005
you should update now cuz its been like a really long time and its a really good story!
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From ANON - StapleKitten on January 14, 2005
Good so far. Keeping Goku's bakaness and Vegeta's coldness in check! I like so far but I ~need~ 'fun'. If you get my drift.
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From ANON - Kahlan Nightwing on July 09, 2004
I reviewed? Why don't I remember reviewing? Was I drunk? Heehee, I just quoted Chuquita's Veggie.... Ok...I really have no idea what your comment is referencing. *giggles* I even tried to go back and find my review--and it's not there. So I am freaked. lol

But, I do know I like this story, so it didn't surprie the that I would review it. ^__________^ Hm, something is wrong with Veggie...but whatever is it? Is he angsting over forbidden feelings for Kakay? Poor dear. But--it seems Kakay's pressed a button. I don't think the water will old old once Veggie gets in there with his temper. l
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I can't wait for more! Bring it on, woman!
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on May 05, 2004
Excellent chappie,

That�s what he felt when a foot collided with his nose: �Ouch!?!� --Lmao...hehe I loved that...all while trying to calculate Vegeta's next move he gets kicked in the nose...

The earth raised Saiyan almost fell out the sky. It was a question that betrayed Vegeta�s sadistic nature, but it also held a childlike curiosity.--LMAO! while I did laugh because Goku almost fell out of the sky I thought the childlike part was really adorable.

Let me see!� The Prince demanded--I loved that line...Vegeta is just so cute. Shows that he does care or at least wants to see if he caused some real damage.I loved when he touched Goku's nose and was gentle about it.

�Kakarot! You�re not really considering going in there are you?�--*gasp* where did he come from? For a moment I thought he came of his own accord, I hope that no one sent him...and I wonder why he got all upset when Goku asked why Bulma made him come get Goku...wonder what she said...

�Wha�what are you doing here Vegeta?� His teeth were chattering so hard he could hardly form a sentence.--Vegeta should have ran over there and warmed him up. hehe ^.~

Prince was doubling over in fits of laughter--aww he made Vegeta laugh! Thats a good sign.

�Want to go for a swim Vegeta?�--@_@ is he crazy!!! hehe...*shakes head* will Kakarot never learn...

Goku without pausing jumped into the lake, shivering as spasms of cold ran up his spine,--LMAO!!! How can he swim in that!! I loved how you described it...very nice.

^_^ I love this ficcie sad that there are only a few more chaps...

But I think the developing relationship between these two is so wonderful. You are doing a great job!

^.*

-MB-

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From ANON - macha on May 04, 2004
Where in HFIL have you been? I had to go back and reread the second chapter just to get my bairings. (not sure if that's spelled right) I really like this story.

That water has got to be cold. Even I would stand on the shore line and call Goku 'baka'. He could redicule me all he wanted, and I still wouldn't get in.

I suppose there has to be a reason the Prince is going to let him get under his skin though, otherwise, I don't think that there will be any lemons anytime soon.
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From ANON - Card on May 04, 2004
Oh no! Kakarot! don't go in that cold water! Don't you know what cold water can do to your precious nether parts?

*Goku looks alarmed *

Lol. Poor Prince. (I would have liked to walk up and see Goku jumping into water naked. ;) )I wonder what he was supposed to be telling Goku. (Really, really hopes that was not in the past chapter and she has forgotten it. Because if that is the way of it, she will now hang her head and review in disguse.)

Looooove it. More now.

~Card!~
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From ANON - Webtester01 on May 04, 2004
Interesting story.

I am sure things will be heating up a bit more than a few degrees after the lake event.

Keep it up.
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From ANON - jaygoose on May 04, 2004
Aww...that was cute. Vegeta is acting a little strangely though. I am wondering what is up with him. I can't wait for more.

:) I see you deciced to take up MB's invitation. It should be fun don't you think.
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From ANON - Card on April 19, 2004
Heen. I think Bra is so cute. *Hugs precocious chilAnd And I've said it before, but it's worthy to say again: I loved that whole conversation with Bulma and Goku. He's just so oblivious sometimes. Its cute.

Poor 'Geta. *hopes to see more of him soon, and in the meantime pets him*

Keep a-writing~!

Card. :)
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 19, 2004
I am soooooooo sorry took me 4 ever to review. But I am still trapped out of town with hellish reletives....Our flight had some scheduling problems and there is only one computer at my cousins house and my chances to get on are very rare and this is one of the rare moments so I am trying to take full advantage of it....I am afraid to get off the comp...I may never see it again...

In other words; if Bulma had offered him breakfast he would have flat out refused.--rofl...hehe that is so mean...j/k I would refuse to... x_X

He looked at her oddly for a moment not sure how to answer, it could have been one of those reeto...rhetori� question thingies. --LoL that is sooo Goku, kawaii...

Goku stood and decided to be honest with her, his oldest friend. �Well there was this one time after sparring; I was kinda hungry so we went back to my house to look for food. Chi-chi was home and she cooked us both lunch. Vegeta told me not to tell you and we came back here and had lunch again.�---oh gods!!!! That is freaking hilarious!!!! Loved how he was completely honest with his best friend...so cute! ^.^

�When you�ve finished with my wife Kakarot, maybe we can get going.�--LoL *is worried about Vegeta* I wonder why the Prince is training himself into a slow oblivion? And Goku is so worried about him, I love that! *completly ignores that Bulma is worried too* Oh yeah and the blue haired on is worried...wooo *sarcastically* Goku help the Prince! Find out what is wrong, dont let him slowly kill himself!!!!!!

This chap was a bit slow� Ok very slow--nothing wrong with slow, and in fact this chap was extremely good. I loved it! and can't wait for you next update. This fic seems to be shaping up rather nicely.

^.*

-MB-

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From Pixelgoddess on April 18, 2004
Slow is good - I like slow. Take your time and develop and build up all the little things...it makes a nice picture when it is done. I can't wait to find out why Vegeta is torturing himself (it has to be love, right? *g* Lucky you - capturing Card...
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From ANON - jaygoose on April 18, 2004
What a loverly surprise...and you were right, it was needed. Believe me, I know how important a filler chapter is.

I love how you described the relationship between Bulma and Goku. And the discription of my poor beaten down prince was simple but perfect. I liked this chapter a lot. And Bra...I can just imagine how cute she is. I really liked this chappie you should really give yourself more credit.
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From ANON - macha on April 18, 2004
I really do like this story. I liked the honest answer that Goku gave. It didn't necessarily aleaviate (spelling?)Bulma's fears, but at least she knows that he is on the up and up.

Update soon please.
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From ANON - Getarian on April 06, 2004
I'm really liking what I see so far :-)

I really liked the opening scenes when Goku had obviously asked Vegeta something along the lines of travelling out in space and Vegeta's reponse whilst still delivering punches and kicks was simplndernderful:

"~�what would be the point Kakarot, there�s nothing out there for me. Besides I�d probably have to drag you along with me, I don�t think I�ll find another one like you out there.�~"

I was a little sad for Goku when his pleasure at these words were quickly doused by this:

�Kakarot, not that I�m planning to travel the universe anytime soon, but I don�t think a sparring session with Bulma would be quite as effective as one with you.�

At this point I have no idea whether Vegeta's earlier comment was a subconscious release of a deeper emotion or whether he was simply talking about a sparring partner, but it's obvious that the sparring partner choice is what hit Goku at Vegeta's second comment, and my heart sort of dropped a little with his. However, Vegeta's somewhat abrupt departure after that flash of hurt, shows that maybe it was a subconscious release after all. Oh, the angst.

Oh Godse tee teddy bear scene was hilarious. Goku's reaction was a sheer joy :-D

"He just beamed proudly puffing out his chest, �I do Chi-chi, I saved up, from all that money Bulma gave me from helping her out with remoulding her lab!�"

Damn, you just make me want to seriously hug this guy :-)

I love that Goku is looking for a present for Vegeta, I really hope that Vegeta gets him one as well.

Really looking forward to the next chapter :-)

"A/n- The �teddy bear� is undoubtedly real�It looked so cute then I was like �Ahhh my eyes!�-"

LOL! Love the "my eyes" comment. It alwayscks cks me up when I see this :-D

Gahhh, A teddy bear with an erection...that's just not right.

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From ANON - Santurion on April 06, 2004
Aww, Goku buying present for Vegeta! Isn't it cute? I really like your story! It's very good! And sweet! ^^ Please continue soon!
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