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From ANON - Getarian on April 30, 2004
Loved Vegeta's thoughts on the calm pregnant Trunks. Really loved this:

"But Trunks was completely rationale. Three and a half months pregnant and completely rational. Disturbingly rational. Normal, almost."

"Gina agreed with him. �Yeah, Mummy, I do find it a bit strange. Maybe Goten�s drugging him or something.�"

LOL! Wouldn't put it past Goten, but no, I don't think so... but still, very funny how Vegeta and Gina, are completely puzzled by this. Maybe Trunks is enjoying the break from the constant banging. :-D

"(Of course, Vegeta thought this, but Goten pointed out that just because she was born powerful did not mean that she would necessarily grow more powerful.)"

He could have a point, she is unique in the sense of being the only Saiyan to be born as per per Saiyan. But on the other hand, Vegeta's reflections are pretty natural too, after all, Brolli got more powerful, but then again, he wasn't actually born in Super Saiyan form. Hmm, interesting.

"�Go find out what your brother did to his mate.� And while Vegeta had gone to investigate whether or not his brother was drugging his mate, he had given his mother a weird look."

LOL! Gotta love that Vegeta seems to be truly concerned about Trunks. Gotta love that he has no faith in Goten, in this area... then again... pink hair... LOL! Love the look that 'Geta gave his 'mum' :-D

"He was afraid he�d walk into the kitchen one of these days and find Trunks sporting an apron and a wooden spoon making dinner for his dear �matey-poo� that had to work all day. That thought was unnerving (funny, but unnerving.)"

ROTFL! God, I love Vegeta's inner thoughts and sense of humour. :-D

"Trunks was actually a very passive pregnant person�highly unusual for Saiyans."

Wonder if this has anything to do with his human genes?

�He became the King�s concubine. What the hell, are you two stupid or something? King Vegeta claimed Kakarot before he destroyed the king. Kakarot�s been his little consort ever since.�

Oh, sort of feel sorry for Kakarot, Presta didn't sound too respectful. I hope this isn't how Vegeta sees him. :-(

"...And Chichi (somehow, although none of us can figure out why) seduced our father into marrying her, then she took advantage of his trusting nature to have really bad sex with him and thusly there was a child borohanohan. Then she proceeded to ruin him by making him read and write and learn shit.�"

LOL! Loved the 'Tale of the last of the harpies"

"�Lets get this train wreck on the way!� Goten said."
"�That�s extremely comforting,� Presta said."

*Chuckle* Presta sounds very like Vegeta, when he first came to Earth. :-)

"(That was just as well, because the poor old woman�Chichi�had been the focus of some of Goten�s pranks, including one that altered her hair color permanently and she now had lime green hair.)"

LOL! Poor ChiChi... no, not really, she's a bitch in this. But I sure am glad that they used a different formula for their 'mum' :-D

"They had kids (a girl named Pan, he thought, and a boy named Spoon or something. Maybe Pot or Kettle or something.)"

ROTFL!

"�I�m Pan!� she said."

"�Good for you,� Presta replied."

LOL! Gods, I'm really liking Presta more and more :-)

Really loved the family get together. Loved Goten's lip-licking when ChiChi popped up, and her quick about-face. Gotta admit, loved the way Gohan was with everyone. Loved this:

�And I thought Dad would have had the sense to sterilize you two.�

LOL! Sarcasm from Gohan... cool! :-)

Really enjoyed this chapter, and looking forward to the next. :-)

"There will be less to catch up on. I�ve finished Never Before�and its staying without a sequel�and I�ve got the last chapter of A Prince Among Men all set up to be finished."

Yes, I did a final review on "Never Before" Going to miss it, but I really did like where you ended it. Really loved it! Mmm, yeah, it makes sense that "A Prince Among Men" is finishing up, since they're very close to facing up against the King. I'm going to be sorry to see that end. :-(

Yeah, want to discuss MLS with you, wanted to do it today, but couldn't, but when I get down to e-mail you tomorrow, I'll talk about it then. Nothing horrible or to get worried over or anything, and it's nothing to do with the actual story either... just something I want to discuss. So I'm glad that it's going to be an epic, will hopefully give me a chance to catch up nicely... I haven't got around to reading any further yet.

"*shudders at thought of marshmallow cr�me * I don�t like marshmallow. *shudder some more * Or melon. *shudder even more * Other than that�sounds yummy."

LOL! So just the cream then? :-D

"I�m just the one that follows him around and writes about his sex life.) ~Oi, that made me sound like a freak. Oh well~"

LOL!... and may you never change... keep on following that sex obsessed Saiyan :-)

Re: Opinion Poll:

My favourite Goten T-shirt is: "No, it�s not a Banana in my Pocket." :-D

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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 30, 2004
Hilarious chapter...

Gina agreed with him. �Yeah, Mummy, I do find it a bit strange. be Gbe Goten�s drugging him or something.�--O_O LoL I hope not...

Trunks was, he grabbed his oldest son and pointed him in the pregnant one�s general direction with the imperative of �Go find out what your brother did to his mate.�--rofl, gosh Vegeta really wants to know what is wrong with Trunks...sheesh.

�He thinks I�m insane now,� Vegeta said--lol I would think he was insane too...hehe crazy ppl won wondering and staring at him. Then Vegeta sending hon ion in there to ask wis wis wrong with him...yeah strange. But from everyone elses pov I can understand why they think it is strange...a calm saiyajin pregnancy has never been the norm.

He was holding his beautiful daughter by her leg, dangling her upside down over the roaring ocean, --rofl, oh parent child bonding is such a wonderful thing...

And Chichi (somehow, although none of us can figure out why)--lol, yeah I am still trying to figure that one out myself...

�Lets get this train wreck on the way!� Goten said.
�That�s extremely comforting,� Presta said--hehe, ahh its good to know that her father can comfort her with such soothwordwords...-_-

(a girl named Pan, he thought, and a boy named Spoon or something. Maybe Pot or Kettle or something.) --ROFL..*grabs sides* oh geez...spoon?!?!?!

�Good for you,� Presta replied--lol you can tell this kid has the blood of Veget ain her...hehe

I wonder why they decided to visit Gohan out of the blue...well I guess that is their brother...don't really need a reason to visit your brother...

Oh, LMAO that means Laughing my ass off...hehe an I was indeed doing just that throughout this chapter...

And As for a Goten shirt I am going to go with--hm..its really hard to decide. I think I will go with the: I hate people shirt...yeah..

Although this shirt doesn't count, I just want to give it honorable mention... �Virgin?� --lol that is what Trunks shirt said..but that was freaking hilarious.

^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - Elenek on April 29, 2004
I have been catching up on your therapy fics so I�ve been putting off this review. I likur cur characters. I really like the twins. I just have one MAJOR issue. GOHAN. You make very few direct references to him. �(And he kept his opinions about his long-lost older half-brother to himself.),� Goku afraid of holding his grandson because he once dropped Gohan on his head, Goku sparing with Gohan back in the first one. You are writing this WONDERFUL fic about family and the bonds formed between parents and children, siblings, and mates. Yet you have somehow managed to ostracize and ignore Goku�s first born child. He is a member of the family who is probably 4-5 years older than the twins (basing this estimation on the twins being old enough to fight the androids and that trunks having not been conceived yet). You have previously mentioned that he doesn�t have a problem with Goku�s and Vegeta�s relationship, he was probably too young to develop a problem with it. So why are you ignoring him? Goku is such a family guy th do do not see him allowing Gohan NOT to be a part of the family; especially if he sees him on a regular basis. Gohan should have been there. He needed to be there for the birth of his siblings. He should have been supporting his family when he became an uncle. I say this because I come from a close knit family. This is how that family dynamic should be working.

Just from your other fics and comments I understand that you don�t like Gohan. I understand where you are cominom. om. In many cases he can be a pansy ass wuss boy. BUT�. That�s one of the beauties of writing an AU fic. Suddenly your characters have this whole world of new experiences that tdidndidn�t have in the Anime or Manga. You get to make them over into someone you do like. Why not, you did it with Trunks in this one. Thinkthrothrough. I�m sure you could come up with numbers of experiences that would have changed Gohan�s character. For example, in your world they killed the androids with that thing on the hand. Which in turn means that they didn�t get absorbed by cell, which means that cell got killed off in his first form, which means no cell games or Hercule stealing people�s thunder which means no reason for Gohan to hide his identity or skill which means NO SAIYAMAN (god I love your world). If he were to actually visit his dad every so often, maybe even stayed over on weekends, imagine the influence Vegeta could have had. Not to mention that he has the chibi twins from hell as his brothers. Your twins are hell oeryoeryone else yet they leave their Older Brother alone? If my sister had had a partner in crime my brother and I would have so suffered. All I�m saying is give him a break. It�s not supposed to go this way, let him into the family.

Ok I wrote most of this before I got to Chapter 18 but it still holds true.

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 29, 2004
Opps...forgot to vote...I adored the "I�m handing out Ass-whuppin�s Want one?" shirt...in fact I liked it so much that Kalika has a modified version of it in the next chapter of my fic.

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 29, 2004
Ahhhh! That was soo good. I love it when wierd slightly disfunctional families get together. They should soo all move in a house together! It would be hilarious. Poor Pan, Presta is going to kick her spoiled little ass.

You know I really hadn't noticed how calm Trunks was during his pregnancy. Okay, so I'm a little slow on the uptake.

...would probably write more, but I am late for class...I decided I should go this time. Last day and all...:)
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From ANON - Mechancial Butterfly on April 28, 2004
Poor little Bardock...subject to such cruelty..hehe

.� G.� Goten replied, �Besides, I didn�t sneak up on him, he stumbled over me. I was the one that was lying there, all nice and cozy.�
�Covered in blood��OFL!OFL! well doesn't that sound cozy...and creepy.

So, Goten was just lying around somewhere, covered in blood when a seven-month-old Bardock stumbled across his brother�s body�probably in the dark. And as if that wasn�t enough trauma for the kid, Goten had then somehow scared him. --O_O oh, that is so mean. Poor little Bardock haveing to walk in on that and in the dark! That is way scary! ANd only 7 months old! awwww poor guy...

Reached across the bed, to the table on his side of it, and got the small container of fragrant oil. Dribbled it onto his mate�s chest�thats a very nice way to wake up.

Stared right into his eyes�just to give him the full extent of the �seduction� here��Fuck me?�--*still dead from all the wonderful lemons yesterday* hehe...that is very sweet of him. I was actually waiting for him to ahat.hat...^.^

Part of Goku assumed that Vegeta took some sort of sadistic pleasure out of it,--^.^ ...I love sadistic pleasure...well just Vegeta's sadistic pleasure...it always yum.

Grit his teeth and shook a bit�because Goku did not often like to have this sort of sex.--ROFL!!! oh but that is so sweet of him to have 'this kind' of sex. But yeah I agree with Goku I am a fan of a delicous Goku on top. But this is very good too...very...

He tipped his head back aowleowled out his mate�s name. (Loved the way that made his sons all jittery and twitchy.) ---LMAO..that is just cruel.

Hn. That wasn�t exactly great news. But it was better than bad news.--O_O That is disturbing news!!!! Although I really did love the explantion to why saiyajins twins dont live as long. It was very good. And I do hope they never get seperated. but then again...I guess they still don't know what would happen either way. It is a very scary thought. Does everyone in the household know about this life expectancy thing?

You know, I think I should run a poll on which of Goten�s shirts is everyone�s favorite. --YEAH!!! you should! I love polls!

Here�s a nice oxygen mask for when you read.--THANKS!!!! *puts on oxygen mask happily* Even though I look very uncool at least I will be able to read through lemons with dying and stuff...unless I start to squeeze the oxygen tubes and the air is cut off....hehe

^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 28, 2004
Poor Trunksee Poo was worried about his mate. It was so sweet. I love the way you always manage to exhibit the 'normalacy' of Saiyan home life. In actuality it isn't that different from my life. But I have lived in a house that was over flowing with cousins, siblings, aunts, and parents. It was reallly fun when I was about ten but now I would probably go crazy. *Sigh* Now I feel all nastalgic.
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From Lenora on April 28, 2004
I loved the last two chapters. I now have the stories current on my disk, now all i have to do is remember to get it before leaving the library. lol i forgot it on monday! I'm such a spaz. I can't wait for more! Give the twins my love!
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From ANON - Getarian on April 28, 2004
Oops. Completely forgot, in my haste to post the catch-up reviews, [probably also because I'm in a different world...wanted to get back into it all, starting with the happier stuff ] :-) But yeah, I got your e-mail, thanks for that by the way, only wish I could respond straight away, but I will find my way to the internet cafe as soon as I honestly can, it's not easy for me to get to, (time and travelling wise, my car recently died on me, and public transport is a complete pain). But yeah, Ileasleased that you're happy for me to stay. :-)

Thought I'd read and review this, before I start on the others, seeing as how you updated again. So much to catch up on, that I don't want to fall behind on this story again in the process. :-)

Reviewing now...

Loved that opening scene with Gina discovering the joys of being Saiyan. Love that she is discovering the merits of having a tail, although I have a strong suspicion that she may already have discovered some of the really pleasant aspects of having one. :-)

Very glad that's she seems to have accepted the change in her boob size, without too much sense of loss.

Really love the way that Prestacks cks up for Bardock... sometimes, I forget that he is so young, although I did think he was older than seven months...was that a typo, or was Goten recounting some moments from the past?

Goten can be a real bastard at times to poor ol' Bardock...is this why he has such control over him?
Would make sense...don't know whether to laugh at Goten's antics, or give in to my Aww, 'Bardock needs a cuddle' mood...think I'll go with both :-D

"...eating marshmallow cr�me and honey dew melons. He gave her a sticky smile and went right back to scoop the stuff into his mouth."

"Dis-gust-ing."

LOL! Okay call me strange, but that sounds kinda yummy. :-)

"Otherwise, he mostly rolled over, crawled on top of Vegeta and proceeded to wake his mate up to get his morning nookie."

I love the way this whole opening scene between Vegeta and Goku read, it felt real, I could definitely picture this, feel the warmth in the room, and the image of a sleepy eyed Goku rolling over onto his mate, with the desire for morning nookie, is heady stuff.

"Vegeta was already perfectly naked."

Mmmm, perfectly naked Vegeta. Can never get enough of this image. :-)

Totally love Goku's 'waking up Vegeta' technique, absolutely erotic. Loved this:

"...Pressed his thumb into it, and looked up at Vegeta. Saw those dark eyes looking at him and grinned."

Totally sexy! Those beautiful, aroused, and deeply interested eyes, watching his mate worship his body...hot. :-)

"He was a fan of all sex, but mostly he kept this one set aside for when he screwed up or when he felt that he loved Vegeta very much and wanted to express it."

Oh wow, I really love that Goku sets this type of lovemaking aside for these two special occassions, and Vegeta would prpbably always know which reason it is...the idea of the second reason, sometimes being the case, is so, loving and sweet. was was very touching.

Totally hot lemon! Loved this:

"He tipped his head back and howled out his mate�s name. (Loved the way that made his sons all jittery and twitchy.) "

LOL! Goku can be such an evil bastard sometimes...love that. :-)

"Trunks woke up (that night after Goku had informed them all that his mate was god when it came to sex,..."

Whoo hoo! Vegeta is a sex God...'course, I already knew that, but it's always good to hear it anyway ;-)

Ahh, interesting fact about why twins' life expectancy is noticably reduced in relation to other Saiyans. Damn, those Saiyans can be cruel bastards...glad that this should hopefully not apply to ours. s. Wondering if this is why they need to sleep so close to each other, sort of a built in instinct to never be separated from each other, even in sleep.

Goten should have warned Trunks about what he was going to be reading... sometimes, he definitely needs an arse kicking for messing with peoples heads. :-D

Looking forward to the next chapter. :-)

LOL! Yes, I can see that the twins were just completely heartbroken. :-D Although, for Goten to take even a few moments to look sad, when he could be doing better things, such as boinking Trunks, I should feel honoured. ;-) Very funny Card. I enjoyed that :-)

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From ANON - Getarian on April 28, 2004
Review for: Chapter 16

Really liked this:
"(That happened to him a lot since he became a �mother� and it never ceased to make him wonder just what the hell had happened to the Vegeta of the past that wanted nothing more than to defeat Kakarot and reclaim his rightful place ae rue ruler of the pack.)"

I agree that motherhood definitely mellowed Vegeta, and it definitely goes hand in hand with the more positive emotions that his time with Goku would have brought about.

Vegeta has never in his life been a part of anything even remotely loving or caring, (I am going somewhere with this...) Not even his own father gave a rat's arse what happened to him. All he was ever subjected to were the negative emotions, basically his lifs ths the pitts. His time with Freiza was more than likely, nearly soul destroying (and I don't mean that I believe the somewhat common belief that Freiza or the others abused him in a sexual manner, because frankly, I don't.) But I imagine that his pride; in himself, his race, and his heritage, was subjected to alot of torment and testing, for one thing...probably other shit as well...taunts about him being weak for one... anyway, before I wander any further off track...(here's where I was heading)...

I believe that being mated to Goku and having a family with him, forming a friendship bond with Bulma, all of these would have given him a different reason for wanting to fight and stay strong, other than that of needing to be the strongest, for survival purposes, and a natural Saiyan need to be the best... not to mention his need as the Prince. He would have found that his pride in himself, and his heritage, had found a home with his family, and Ie the that he can sit back and reflect on this and not experience any regret for this change in him, that he can look back on his past self and wonder what the hell happened to that Vegeta... that he can wonder at thazinazing change his life has taken, and be totally content with that. Love is definitely an amazing emotion. I love that you incorporate these things into your story, it's things like this that give it that realistic feel. :-)

Totally love the scene where Vegeta felt that he wasn't getting enough of Goku's attention, and decided to show his mate, just what he wanted. Loved Goku's knowing 'innocent' question, when he asked Vegeta, what was up. Completely loved the way they interacted with each other, Vegeta's teasing moves, his smile, as he realised how he was affecting his mate, and Goku's completely distracted order to the kids to �Stay out of trouble.� Extremely well done, loved the entire atmosphere of seduction, playfulness and lust. ;-)

Another wonderful lemon... juicy ;-)

Wondering where Goten is heading, when he asked Trunks if he ever wanted to have sex with a female... curiouser and curiouser.

Love the Tru Trunks and Gina, have that little support thing going with each other... it's sweet. :-)

Enjoyed the end dialogue :-)

Well, all caught up on this story... onto the next... have things to do though... so I'll catch up on another, a little later tonight. :-)

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From ANON - Getarian on April 28, 2004
Review for: Chapter 15.

Can't help but feel sympathy for Gina's loss of boob size, a small reduction be be shrugged off, but a significant one is definitely something that would need coming to terms with. Still, as a wonderful counter, she does have a tail. Cool :-)

Love the counter views between Goku and Vegeta the following morning. Goku's openly grinning demeanour, heralding the fact that he had mind numbing sex is so Goku. However; I never realised that Vegeta held that sort of expression back when his kids were around. Love that! Definitely the 'mother' in him :-)

Ah, Goten is so going to be tingting dad. I could be wrong, but something tells me that he's going to be a different sort of father to Presta than he is to the child he has with Trunks. Now don't get me wrong, I certainly believe that there will be no difference in the strength of his love between his children, I think that'll be the same. But Presta is a born Super Saiyan, and a full blood, and she is from a different world, so yeah, I see him dealiith ith her in a more Saiyan fashion, whereas I can honestly seeing him being a bit like Vegeta is with Bardock, with the child he is going to have with Trunks. 'Course, I could be totally wrong... but that's what I got out of the way he was thinking about Trunks and how he was reacting to the fact that his mate was carrying his child. Really sweet :-)

Loved the argument between Goten and Presta, about when she is allowed to have sex. Can even see Goten upping the age limit oshe she reaches fifteen :-D The chastity belt comment was hilarious :-D

Loved this:

"He nodded. �Sure.� Smiled like a dork, and saw that she could smile just as dorkily. (Thought that was a comfort, because his twins both grinned like their mother.)"

Just the way he accepted that he smiled in a dorky fashion, and was pleased to see that Presta was equalorkyorky, just cracked me up. I liked the "Who cares" attitude. :-)

�Trunks, when it comes to you, breathing is sexy.�

Man, this has to be the most rtic tic thing ever said on the face of the Earth. Either that,or I have been severely gypped in the romance department.

�Lets go tell your Mom that we�re leaving for a little while. Presta is training, so Goku can�t get too pissed we�re making his mate busy.�

LOL! Love the way everyone understands that Vegeta is to be left available for Goku's attentions :-D

Totally loved the hug that Goten gave his 'mum', loved that there ere both surprised by it, but completely comfortable about it. I'm wondering what it's all about, (not that I'm complaining, I love it) sort of figure that it could have something to do with the fact that Goten's relating more to his mother, now that he's a parent himself :-)

Loved this chapter...on to the next. :-)

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From ANON - Getarian on April 28, 2004
Review for: Chapter 14

Ahh, it's good to get back to this. Didn't realise just how much I missed these guys. :-)

I'll be catching up one story at a time. A lot of chapters to review.

Totally loved the opening scene. Could picture it beautifully. Loved the fact that Vegeta was holding Masuyo, had Bardock on his shoulder and he was smirking at his mate. Loved that everyone else was enjoying the joke, and I could definitely picture Goku's stunned expression, and if Trunks hadn't intervened I could see it turning to rage pretty quickly. I mean the poor Guy has been flying all around the world, dreaming of the moment when he could get home to his mate, and he's smacked in the jaw with the news that they're babysitting Masuyo... a real passion killer. Could sympathise with his disbelief, but damn, it was an hilarious leg-pull. Go Vegeta! :-D

"Bardock jumped off Goten and ran over to hide behind Trunks."

LOL! Are we ever going to know Goten's secret? Or, is this to remain, one of the mysteries of life? ;-)

�Oh shit,� Goten said. Looke his his own hand-found that he too had gone Super Saiyan. �I hope Mom and Gina are okay.�

Hmm, that's interesting. I always assumed that the dominant went Super Saiyan if there was a chance that their mate could be in trouble. I didn't realise that this applied to all dominants when a submissive was, what? Vegeta and Gina are certainly not in danger from their mates, so, trying hard to figure this out... pause... okay, I'm going to have to say, 'extra roughed up', makes the only sense to me, considering I've read this whole chapter and Goku's being pretty dominant with Vegeta... by the way... Mmmm, nice :-) But yeah, sort of makes the privacy level for these moments drop a bit... not that, that's ever been an issue with Goku. :-D

�With the earrings. There is no powering down for her. This is her base power level.�

Constant Super Saiyan, ouchies, sort of the Saiyan equivalent for a hyperactive child... just with a lot more potential for damage. I figure that sooner or later, she'll be glad for those earrings.

Yay for 'Geta, he finally got to have sex. Saiyan style to boot. I think, sort of skimmed. Just assumed with Gina being Saiyan an' all. :-)

Oh Gods, how I missed your lemons. Wonderful stuff! Can never get enough of G/V action, or the possessive Goku, and this was as amazing as ever. :-)

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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 28, 2004
Had gotten sick of telling her the same things over and over because she wasn�t listening, because her mate was standing around with their son.--LoL that's kinda funny...Gina being all distracted...while trying to learn to fly. Poor Vegeta very annoyed that she isn't paying attention...but who would ever be able to pay attention around all of these gorgeous saiyajins?

Vegeta was annoyed. Rather annoyed actually. And horny. Never the best mix in the universe, --rofl..sounds like a rather dangerous mix if you ask me...

�Oh! Gross! Put me down!� --Rofl!!!!! Poor lil Bardock... he knew what would was going to happen...hehe he is so cute!

Loving the whole meaningful stare and what Vegeta's tail was doing...definately beyond drool worthy. And now I really feel bad for Bardock for having to witness that...ok I am lying I don't feel bad at all. I luvs it all!!!!

the one that bore the rather old scar from Vegeta�as if to ask why it was that his mate was not biting him.--love their language of sex and yes that does pose an interesting question. Well, question was just answered so nevermind...hehe

�Kakarot��
�Mine.�
Yes. Life was fucking perfect.--yes just like this story...I will never get tired of hearing Goku say that. It always drives my mind wild!!!! as if it isncrazcrazy enough already.

(wearing an orange shirt that read: Why YES You can Blow Me) ---ROFL!!!!

�Hey, Trunks, do you want to have sex with a woman?�--O_O hehe oh to be Goten's mate...what a rollercoaster ride...

She made a face at them�a rather scary face�LoL aww poor Gina. I love this family so much, but I do wonder what Goten was up to...but then again I always wonder what he is up to.

Gk: Kami, I hope not. There was this one time, (at band camp) in this other fic where I had to sleep with Chichi and I�m still paying psychiatrist bills! *waves bills around wildly*--*dies laughing* gods...that was to much can't breathe...

Goten: Nothing. *angel halo appears, propped up by devil horns and the sky goes red and fire and brimstone appear *--heeellllpppp!!!! to much laughing going to explode...your end notes totally killed me...

Another hilarious chapter in which I almost lost all ability to breathe....

^.*

-MB-

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 27, 2004
This fic should soo be a TV show. It is hilarious...and slightly pornographic...but hey, you could put in HBO or something. You could give Queer as Folk a run for its money.

Okay is Trunk's ass really that nice, because I never really got a good view of it?
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 27, 2004
@_@ !!!!!!! A special suprise for me to read at the end of this fic! *dances*

It was wrapped around her elbow and it was more than obvious she wasn�t used to controlling it.--LoL, she's learning. I like how she is sitting at the table...hehe

�Different because people don�t stick things inside�SHUT UP VEGETA!� --ok by the time I got here...air was not an option I was simply reading off of adrenaline I was laughing so hard. Presta and Goten's conversation!!! Looks like Goten definately has his hands full...

�Goten making chastity belts�that would be a hoot.�--ROFL!!! yes that would be a hoot...
Hey,Hey,� �Geta said, �It would be funny. Just who would you test it out on anyway?�--be careful what you say Geta or before you know Gina will have one of those things slapped on her...

He nodded. �Sure.� Smiled like a dork, and saw that she could smile just as dorkily. --this is the cutest of exchange of looks...hehe I love this family!

�I guess we can keep training now. I want to finish this crap so Dad will stop telling me to �have patience.� Whatever.�--LoL oh the patience of a child, isn't it wonderful? I don't think Presta will ever have pace..ce...at least not a lot.

�Why, Trunks, are you asking me out on a date?�--How cute! and Trunks response even cuter!

And the part with Vegeta teaching Bardock his letters...I nearly died. That was so adorable...and AH! I loved it. Vegeta teaching his little one how to sound out letters..patiently...

(My, my, thoughts are rising�what a coincidence other things are RISING too!)--rofl *dies* awww they are too perfect for each other.
And another wonderfully hilarious chappie. Can't believe Presta dropped her power so low it bordered almost being black.
The end notes were hilarious..

yeah you are right legend says every 1000 yrs a super saiyajin is born. In the Brolly movie, Brolly was just born with black hair...but a very high power level I think 10,000. Anywho I like your version...like that she was actually born a super saiyajin, blonde hair and all.

AHHHHH! *gasp* what is this I see...The twins...something I have been dying to read about...

Goten made a strange humming noise, shifted, lifted himself up and sat on Vegeta�s lap. --you are trying to kill me...I know it, or else that would have never been written. ^.^

But he moved it, like he was stroking, and that made the drooling idiots drool all the hard-*is-*is one of the drooling idiots*

Oh gods...how I loved that...cherished every word. *hugs you* Thank you SO much!!! I didn't want it to end...seriosuly I got to the end and I was like :(
I can never thank you enough! It was all just so freaking hot! and yeah I am a hentai freak...because I freaking loved that so much...my dreams are going to be soooo nice...
That just rox my sox...*is ever so happy*
And Loved how Goten ended it all with that flashy dare...hehe

Thanks again....*drools*

^.*
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