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By : CardDragonBall

From ANON - Talon on April 26, 2004
Just incase no one's said anythinga bout Trunks' purple hair, I will.

*coughs*

He gets it from his grandfather. Hop outta kin sorta thing. Yes, I have done extensive research on this matter. Why yes, I AM an expert when it comes to demi-Saiyajins.

Why is everyone looking at me like that...
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From ANON - jaygoose on April 26, 2004
This story does have a point...to make me laugh! HA! Okay so it wasn't clever. I'm tired okay. I love the warm Saiyan family that you have going here. He He. I love it! I can't wait for more babies! :)

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From Lenora on April 26, 2004
HA! loved it!!! Thought you should know that i have all of the Therapy series on my laptop at home and i'm getting ready to put the more of us ss ons on there too. i have a nice little folder named CardDragonBall in my My Documents folder. Your stories are the only dbz stories i have on my computer, minus mine which i havent even typed up yet. I loved the twin's side story and their forays into your stories were great. though i will say this, i will not read the bulma/veggie story. nothing against her, i just dont like reading about a straight veggie.
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From ANON - Webtester01 on April 26, 2004
Anther ecelent chapter!!

Now all Goten has to do is build someting (Headband with flexible ciruitry? (Has to be comfy. I think anyway.))
to extend the range of the bond, so they dont't have to sleep with their backs against the cold hard wall.
I know I wouldn't like that.

Goten better keep on his toes. Presta might give him an intersting challenge.

Btw, I am working on chapter three of the story. I didn't get to the word count I wanted in the second chapter.
The third one will be longer.
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From ANON - jaygoose on April 25, 2004
HA! I thought that it was hilarious when Gina asked about her boobs. I agree...I just don't think Saiyan women went around fighting while sporting DD's. My Saiyan girl, Kalika didn't have to go throught the truama though, she was born with small ones. *looks down at her boobs and sighs* I understand Gina's pain though...I don't know what I would do if I ever lost them.
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 24, 2004
WOO!!!

Lemons galore *dances*

�lets everyone grin and laugh at the father because he was just informed that his mate decided to take care of a baby and you couldn�t fuck your mate while he was holding a newborn.� --rofl...poor Goku. Heds sds sex!

�I wanted to fight YESTERDAY!� --LoL, I love that little girl.

�Because dominant mates go Super Saiyan when they feel any sort of threat.� --oh really...that sounds interesting at least for Vegeta, Goku, Gina and Vegeta...they should have some fun ^.^

�So, anyway, lets get this fight started. I want to kick your butt so you�ll sleep.� --she doesn't sleep? LoL oh gosh that is so funny...It seems as though he is really getting a dose of what he was like when he was that young...

�With the earrings. There is no powering down for her. This is her base power level.� --O_O she IS very powerful. Is there a reason she is so powerful or is it just because she is full blooded saiyajin and these things just happen sometimes? I think that is such a cool idea...and that is just her base power level...sheesh that girl is dangerous!

The teeth came out of his shoulder again, and Kakarot pulled back, moved one hand up to his shoulder to pull his whole body back against him harder. �Mine!� he said, �Mine!� ---Seems powering up for the 'threat' has made him extremely possesive!

And thank you for such delicous lemons...they were very yummy.

And I think I might have actually worked up the nerve to do it, if you still wanted to read.)--@_@ AH!!!! *does a dance and flips* ARE YOU KIDDING?!?!?!? DO you EVEN have to ASK!?!?!?!!? of COURSE I WANT TO READ IT!!!!! I have been dying to read about the twins kiss!!! *drools* You are so very awesome....you have no idea... *hugs you* YAY!!!!
*eyes sparkle with pure delight*

^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - Ginia on April 24, 2004
After five hours in a computer lab working on a school project - this was pure heaven to come home to! Yummmm-mmy!
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 24, 2004
Great!

Besides, since Goku really wanted to be able to get back to his mate and sex, it was just added incentive for him to hurry up and find all of the damn balls --*coughs* That's just too easy...hehe you know my hentai mind..at work again...

Which is why he hated all of them. Which was why he was flying around in rain storm trying to find the damn dragon balls. --LoL aww he is flying around in a rainstorm...thats very nice of him to continue to search for them in such weather.

(Yes, she paid him for his brilliance, and he spent that money on nothing except to gloat about how he had money.) --rofl! How wonderful that must be, I wish I could do that.

�Yes I was.� Look at THAT, his mate was listening. --yes he was, and he shot that back very quickly he must have been listening intently...LoL that was so cute how he was pretending not to listen, even through the attack of lima beans...hehe

I LOVE the interaction between Presta and Goten, I was rofl...during their little conversation. Presryinrying to find something that Goten had no anser to and of course Goten having all the answers...and I liked that he said she will certainly be the last to know...very funny.

Aww I loved the interaction of Vegeta and Bardock...I thought he would hear his sons crys. So cute when he curled into Vegeta...^.^

Presta huffed. �You guys are boring.� --ROFL she just wants to fight,doesn't she?

He had to sleep with his back against the wall�I found that very interesting and very touching that both the twins have to sleep like that. I am glad that they are able to fall asleep though.

So Gina is going to become a saiyajin? I can't wait to see this...it's been building up for a while. Now the time has arrived. She already reminds of saiyajin, she definately has the attitude of one! ^.~

Gk: *takes Masuyo and hands him to Goten * I DO NOT THINK SO.--hehe that's right Goku, you tell him!

Wonderful chappy as always!!!!

Thank you!
^.*
-MB-
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From ANON - jaygoose on April 23, 2004
Sometimes a nice little informative chapter is cool...but there will be banging, right? Soon?
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From Lenora on April 23, 2004
I'm reviewing this because I figured that I should review at least one of your stories since you're my fave dbz goku/veggie writer. the twins have just stolen my heart and veggie and trunks already had it so i think you're safe there. Bardock is so cute. i can't wait to see the reaction to a Saiyan Gina. but alas i will have to wait until monday to see the new updates. . Le.
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From ANON - Getarian on April 23, 2004
Goku's thoughts as he was flying around looking for the dragonballs was hilarious. I wonder if he grumbled the whole time? :-D Loved this bit best of all:

"His mate had just better be expecting to not leave their room for many, many, many, many, many hours. Days."
"Hell, maybe weeks."
"Maybe MONTHS."

LOL! Goku's so funny when he's horny. He cracks me up :-)

Really enjoyed the scene with Goten and Presta. Love how he's trying to work and she keeps bothering him with questions about training, and he's fully aware that all of this is probably amusing the hell out of his mother.

Loved this:
�What about Grandma?�

Grandma. LOL! Not quite how I picture the delectable Vegeta...but hilarious nonetheless :-D

Ah, Bardock is simply the cutest. Loved how he got all scared up on that top shelf and then Vegeta came in and got him down and patted his head to reassure him. Loved how Bardock curled up all happy and safe in his mother's arms. Just too sweet for words :-)

"Presta huffed. �You guys are boring.�"

ROTFL! Yeah, I guess after the third class troops she grew up around, this lot would look a bit tame. Who'da thought :-D

Loved 'Geta's thoughts as he pondered his current life and lack of sexual activity therein. Really loved this:

"Gina did, but she would just give him a sad little pat and say that she was really happy he was being so patient. Yeah. Right. Whatever."

LOL! to to see that he's being so patient and good natured about it. :-D

�Mom said she�d watch him.�

She? LOL!

So, soon Gina will be a Saiyan. Interested in seeing how she adapts. Really enjoyed this chapter.

Looking forward to the next. :-)

Loved the end dialogue. Especially this:

"Lil�Geta: HATE. Card HATES me. I never get laid."
"Gk: Me either."
"Lil�Geta: OH WHATEVER!"

ROTFL! Goku is a complete crack-up :-D

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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 23, 2004
Vegeta and Gina are such a sweet couple. I really loved when he said he wouldn't have done anything anyway and he really meant it...awww.

I am so very glad that Presta is ok and equally as glad the th twins decided to mettle with the time machine in the first place.

Wanted to bang his head into the ground and find some brilliant way to get around this hurdle.---LoL, No there is no way out! I am glad he explained to Trunks, and I am glad they made up and hopefully Trunks is now pregnant.

Wondered just what the hell he was going to do with a brood of daughters. (Probably spend a great deal of time keeping them locked up in a basement where they could not even think of boys much less date them.)--ROFL...spoken like a true father...I think that it is so great that Goten will have all girls.

�Apparently you are a different sort of person entirely in the other world.� There was a smirk there, because there had been some very crude jokes about �Kaki� who was Kakarot (as he would have been if he had never left the Saiyan culture, apparently.)--Glad that Vegeta can still for the most part understand his native tongue. It's fun to see them react to hearing about their alternate selves..so strange. Especially for Goku...seeing that Kakarott from the other dimension is totally different from Goku!

�Because in her world, I am the King.�
And this made the pout turn back into a lechs grs grin. �Mmmmm. King.� --LoL, aww that is so cute...he deserves sex. How can Vegeta say no to him?

Lil�Geta: That was five minutes ago.--LoL

(You know, one day Goku�s going to figure out how to do this and poor Vegeta will have to regret his words.)--rofl *gasp* I hope he never figures that out.

^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - Webtester01 on April 22, 2004
It seems Presta and Bardock are getting along quite well.

Since Trunks is currently a demi (have they used the dragonballs on Gina yet?), and Goten's going the get him
pregnant, I bet Goten would be surprised to have a boy, sinceis gis going to have all girls, VegeVegeta Jr. is
goinghavehave all boys. (Or is he?) Hehe.
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From ANON - Getarian on April 22, 2004
Pleased to see that Gina and Vegeta seem to have their own room. I really liked the atmosphere you created as they stood looking out the window at the activities below, whilst they quietly spoke together of the recent events. It had (for want of a better expression) an 'after the storm' feel to it.

Glad that Goten gave Trunks the chance to work through his anger, and that everything is right between them again. Knew that Trunks wouldn't hold out for long...just like his dad :-D

Ooo, yeah! I do believe that we have a pregnant Trunks. :-)

Always love the G/V moments. Love Goku's reaction when he found out that Vegeta was King in Presta's universe...

"And this made the pout turn back into a lecherous grin. �Mmmmm. King.�"

LOL! I see that Goku is remembering his previous fantasy :-D

"Instead of getting up the old fashion way and crossing the whole FOUR FOOT, the idiot IT�ed right next to him, wrapped his arms around him and smiled like the lecherous demon he was. �But, Veeegeeetaaaa,� he whined."

LOL! Well it's a whole four foot and his energy is needed eherehere. ;-)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Enjoyed the end dialogue :-)

"...Goten should have said �Dad�s mom� but I messed it up and put GOKU there! *continues to sob * I�m so sorry!
*composure is instantly regained. * Anywho, I�m glad you�re kind of liking Presta."

LOL! Yeah, Presta seems pretty nice and a good companion for Bardock. :-)

Very interested in how you can weave an entire chapter or story around a single sentence or scene. I find that pretty amazing. I need to have an idea of what I'm looking for and then I go go from there, but the amount of times, I find myself having to go back and fix up a scene or something is one of the many reasons I don't plan on posting until I finish. So yeah, I am deeply impressed that you can just keep going and never need to go back, because you can just keep it flowing...and sometimes, just from a single sentence. Deeply, deeply impressed. :-)

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 22, 2004
That thing you told Getarian about having one line it writing a whole chapter never happens to me. I always end up writing like fourths of a chapter at a time. Like right now I have to a half of chapter 13 and half of chapter 14. It's taking me so long to finish them that I am going to have to post them at the same time as to not piss people off. *Sigh*

Anyway, enought about me. I loved this fic. Everything is as it should be. You know I didn't even notice the Goku thing...hmm...
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