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From ANON - Getarian on April 22, 2004
Okay, Poor Trunks. Not a good way to find out that your mate has a child. Don't blame Goten for the way he acted before he went to get Presta. He couldn't tell Trunks about her, because he didn't remember (am wondering if 'Geta forgot as well), and when he remembered, the sense of urgency was too great for him to sit his mate down and give him the details, but for someone (who we now know) can show deep concern and respect for loved ones, he sure wasn't doing too well by Trunks after he returned.

"A little red? She didn�t look red."

LOL! Loved Trunks' annoyed confusion.

�Red is Grandma�s name�uh, Goku�s mom. Apparently Pinkie�s just like her.�

Okay, a little confused by this. Why is he calling his dad 'Goku' I know that they can't call him by his name (and am assuming that they think of him as Kakarot, as that is what their mum calls him) I'm just surprised at the use of his Earth name is all, and so, is very curious.

�I still don�t understand how you�re going to get a man pregnant. But I guess it�s none of my business.�

LOL! Kinda liking Presta. :-)

"Ha. As if Goten was going to get within five fucking feet of him, much less get close enough to get him pregnant. Asshole. Just let him suffer. No sex ever again."

LOL! I really love this...He and Vegeta could hold a little competition, play Goten and Goku's game, see who can hold out on their threats the longest? :-D

"Bardock scrambled over from his mother to Trunks, climbed up onto his shoulder and whispered in his ear: �I don�t like her either.� Nodded solemnly."

LOL! Ah, Bardock baby, so sweet, so young, so jealous...gotta love the little guy. Loved the imagery. :-D

Totally loved the way 'Geta was with Trunks. Loved that he took him away from everything and tried to comfort him with telling him how much he really means to Goten. Loved this:

�...Once he found you he didn�t even think about anything else.�

"�That�s a huge fucking comfort. I�m glad my ass provided so many hours of happy reflection for him,� Trunks snapped."*chu*chuckle* That's the spirit Trunks. I like the fact that Trunks is not so angsty in this fic, like that he is even a little awed still, by this lot, even Gina I think...(I can sense his amazement still, over their somewhat carefree attitudes) but I am deeply pleased that he's settling down enough, allowing the blistered emotions of his past to heal enough, that he is now starting to stand up for his rights. Goten does need an arse-kick for this.

"�I hope he really enjoys thinking about it.� There was the understood �because he�s never touching it again� and he had to pause and wonder just how many times his mother had told his father the same thing. That never worked out."

LOL! I know, but it's so sweet that they actually believe it at the time they say it. :-D

Thought that 'Geta was right in telling Trunks what was to be Presta's fate, if he and Goten hadn'terfterfered. Really liked the way he was with Trunks...and it doesn't surprise me that 'Geta secretly admires Trunks...I sort of get a Piccolo/Vegeta friendship type of thing, between these two.

"Would give her a few days to get over the �must giggle at Goku� thing before he got annoyed."

LOL! Totally love Goku's thoughts. I'm hoping for some fun here. :-)

�Oh, well the they say, you ain�t seen nothing yet.�

Yup! That should stop the giggling.)

)

Totally loved Bardock growling and sneering at Presta from up on his mother's shoulders and Loved Vegeta's amusement at it all. Had a wonderful picture of it in my minds eye. :-)

"Presta�he didn�t think he would call her Pink despite what she said�"

Yup! Very Vegeta. Like this. :-)

Loved the scene with Bardock, Presta and the stones. amazed that he seemed to be looking for permission from his mother - that definitely seems like a first - but it was cute, I liked it. :-)

"But then again, in her universe, Vegeta was the King and you didn�t go around dissing the king."

Ooo, King. Yeah! Love how you show the Saiyan respect for their monarchy, (although the previous King didn't bloody deserve it). Hopefully this means that our Vegeta is doing good. ;-)

"He looked at Vegeta and thought that Vegeta would be a great King...."

Love Goku's thoughts about Vegeta and his heritage...loved his description of his mate. :-)

Enjoyed this part at the end of his thoughts...

"...To strip away all the robes of office and see that underneath it all he was still the same Vegeta that moaned his name and felt so� Weren�t those damn kids gone yet?"

LOL! Can't keep his mind from wandering back to his favourite activity...gotta love that. :-D

"(Goten and Trunks were actually in the middle of a fistfight just a mile or so away.)"

Yeah, time to show that you're still a warrior ks. ks. :-)

"Yeah, yeah, whatever, Goku thought, you can object all you want. We both know you don�t mean a word of it."

LOL! Don't often see this side of Goku. He's usually too horny to think straight, I kinda liked this.

"Another groan rumbled out of the chest under him, and he felt Vegeta�s hips lift up against him, felt legs go around him, and was pulled in deeper and grinned at that."

Damnit! That Vegeta is one sexy, highly responsive Saiyan. :-)
ovedoved the lemon. Short but sweet. Very nice. :-)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Loved the end dialogue. :-)

"Hopefully Trunks� reaction was humorous."

Yes, I thought so anyway. Really liked how he took it actually. Most of his anger was born out of confusion, and a small sense of betrayal, so it was totally understandable that he was pissed, but I loved his thoughts and sarcastic responses to 'Geta...Now there's that bit of his father, that I loo muo much :-)

"And sorry if my responses seemed rushed, haven�t written the chapter to The Meaning of Pride yet (bad me) and I need to do that. *runs off *"

Even more impressed with just how quickly you can write out a chapter, and it never fails to please...can understand the speed, if it sucked, but yours never do...very impressed. :-)

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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 22, 2004
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Great chappie!

�Because I�m a little Red.�--hehe that is cute...

Apparently Pinkie�s just like her.�
�It�s just Pink,� she hissed. ---spicy little thing isn't she? Hehe, our dogs name is Pink and we call her Pinkie all the time oh and Pinko...not that you care but that just reminded me...

No sex ever again. --Poor Trunks...I really do feel badly for him, but I was laughing at the same time. Because of when he said Goten probably has another mate stored away somewhere...but still sad. I don't want him to feel that way.

I�m glad my ass provided so many hours of happy reflection for him,� Trunks snapped.--LoL...awww I hope he isn't upset for long. Although he has a right to be...

�Him?� she demanded, �You cannot be serious.�--hehe omg! *slaps forehead* This kid has no idea what she is talking about...it's cute. And I love how she was giggling and calling him Kaki and he was getting annoyed....
�Did you think you were the only Super Saiyan here?� ---rofl!!!! She thought she was 1 of only 3 super saiyajins? I luv her!

Weren�t those damn kids gone yet?--rofl!!!! Impatient...

And sorry if my responses seemed rushed, haven�t written the cha to to The Meaning of Pride yet (bad me) and I need to do that. *runs off *--you need not worry about that...look at how many fics your handling. I just hope you are getting enough sleep and stuff...
But thank you for a wonderful chap...

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 21, 2004
Hmm...I don't know if I would be as upset as Trunks is in this situation...but of course and unfortunately I am not a Saiyan. *Pouts and looks generally sadt tht there was banging at the end! :)
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From ANON - Getarian on April 21, 2004
A dark chapter. Horrified that those bastards would rape an eight year old girl, and so very glad that the twins went back further in time and prevented it from ever happening. Really touched by this:

"Knew they were going back to the Time Machine, knew they could stop this before it happened, and still hated that he was being pulled away."

Can completely symapathize with Goten's desire to stay with his broken child, even though he knew they were going back to make sure that this version of his daughter, never existed, but it must have been so heartbreaking for him to leave her when she so obviously needed him. He must have felt as if he was abandoning her. Such a tragic moment. :-(

Actually felt quite sad to find that Saima was still dead when they went back further in time, was sort of thinking that she had died at the same time as her daughter was raped. Still, wasn't overly surprised, bcause I knew that Presta came home with her father, but yeah, still a little sad.

Totally loved the twins revenge! Bastards. Yeah, can't see Bardock or Red allowing them to be cut away from the trees...let them rot!

Loved that Goten decked his grandfather, definitely deserved it for not keeping an eye on his great granddaughter, but liked the fact that Goten took time out to make sure that no-one else was around to see...do love that respect factor :-)

Love that Goten told Presta that she had no say in the fact that she is returning with him, knew he would make a good father :-)

Hoping that Trunks will be okay with this. I think he will, but it's still going to be fun watching his initial reaction...I think ;-)

Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

Enjoyed the end dialogue. :-)

"I always say things of that vein and people look at me like I�m nuts and say: �Uh�couldn�t you just be normal?�"

LOL! Exactly! Who wants to be normal anyway? Sooo ng. ng. :-)

About the twins, yeah, 'responsible' does seem like such an alien word when coupled with themt tht that's mainly Goten's fault :-D Still, we're seeing a new side to him lately, and I have to admit, I like it :-)

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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 21, 2004
Wonderful....

I really, really, love Goten as a father.
I was like O_O when I read that part about those four jerk wads raping Presta. I am so glad that it didn't happen. How did Saima die?

She was borsupesuper saiyajin? Rad. Goten really moved me, the guy who never seems to feel anything, felt a lot in this chapter and it made me sad, but happy. He is a wonderful dad, and I say that b/c he left Vegeta's side so fast that his brother didn't have time to IT with him....loved that.

I listen to music when I read fics because I dunno makes me feel like I am watching a movie or video or something, but I was listening to Nickelback's, Chad Kroeger's Hero...and I was like awww I'm gonna cry b/c Goten is so rad. I loved the cruel treatement those 4 guys got I think they deserve every bit of the pain and torment they will recieve. If they were going to rape a 8 yr old...*shakes head* They deserve to die, but death is the easy way out so yeah torture is best.

Anyway this was a very touching chapter...*wipes eyes*
Oh yeah I laughed slightly when Goten knocked Bardock to floor, and also chuckled at how Presta found out Goten was her dad. I like Presta! ^.~

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 21, 2004
Sorry about yesterday's review. My brain was tired and complete mush. It's congealing nicely today. I loved this chapter. It was dark, but I am a fan of dark. Me liked bunches. Goten is not so carefree and happy is he? At least I think so anyway.
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From ANON - Getarian on April 20, 2004
Felt really sorry for Gina, she seems to be feeling a little lost and out of place. It would be nice if twinswins could at least find a way to sleep in separate rooms, so she could have an area to call her own. Felt bad that she couldn't connect, via the claiming bite, with Vegeta, in the same way that Trunks could with Goten. She should definitely say yes to going Saiyan :-)

"Because Goten did not get angry. He got revenge and he tormented and harassed and destroyed things, but he did not get angry."

This sums up Goten pretty well. He has always kept his emotions pretty well in check, and I imagine his revenge is something a person does not want to be a recipient off, and whilst usually, cold, clinical revenge is a lot more frightening than red-faced anger... in Goten's case, I've not seen anything or or clinical in his revenge, he's always used an impish precision in everything he does, so...his anger would, I imagine, be a frightening thing indeed.

"Looked at Vegeta again. Reached his arm out and let Bardock crawl from his mother onto his father. Felt his son wrap his arms around his neck and hold onto him."

Loved the imagery this presented to my mind. So close, all of them...love it! :-)

"He had threatened his Mother�s life because his Mom had said he wished Goten would have all girls."

Ah, so that's what it was allut. ut. :-D

Good to see Bulma poke her head out of the door. :-)

Loved the way Bardock reacted when Goten returned, wonderful image of him climbing up on his mother's shoulders...Loved this:

"Which did not make Bardock happy because he was the little one here, and his father damn-well better remember that."

Ah, poor Bardock is feeling left out with the new arrival. *chuckle* Gotta love the little guy :-)

Wondering why Goten's daughter has to wear the ki earrings until Trunks falls pregnant.

Interestihapthapter and looking forward to the next one. :-)

"Anyone desperately confused?"

Oh hell yeah, :-D Hoping that the next chapter will bring some enlightenment. Wondering where Saima is and why Goten has returned with his daughter?

"And I was worried that I would hopelessly confuse people and they would just be like �forget this� and leave my story all alone and then I would have to sob brokenly for many months."

*chuckle* Can't see me ever being so conf tha that I would not wao reo read your stories, and judging by everyone else's reactions, the same would go for them I imagine :-) Besides, a little confusion, in the short term, is good anyway, makes people think, scratch their heads and wonder what the hell you've got up your sleeve...way better than being predictable ;-)

"Ahhh�You have gleaned that Goten *will* replace his mother�s Ki rings, but he had not *yet* done that in A Prince Among Men. So, you�re gleaning is correct,"

ROTFL! Okay, this so reminds me of my son...I remember when I bought a packet of Ritz crackers in the shopping, and when I got home, I found that the inside packet was open...so I took it back and told the manager that 'the packet had been compromised' when I went to get a replacement packet, my son asked me 'why I couldn't just say that it was open, like a normal person would' I pointed out that is was patently obvious that it was open, what they didn't know was that I had not opened it myself...my son just shook his head, walked away from me (still looking embarrassed) and pretended that he didn't know the strange woman with the compromised crackers...

Sorry for that...I just cracked up so much when I read what you wrote and it reminded me of that time with the crackers. :-D

"(It�s still weird when everyone is comforted by the Twins arrival as opposed to worried what ruckus they are going to cause.)"

Yeah, scary stuff...but they are an amazingly comfor pre presence in this story. Must be one crazy universe, if the twins are the sober, responsible ones. :-)

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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 20, 2004
Loved this chapter...

I can hardly wait to see what happens when they go see Trunks. What will happen!?!?!
I can not believe that Goten is a father...it seems so strange but so normal at the same time. Its adorable really. I could just picture Goku's face when he says "Dad?" and looks at Goten ... hehe

Asshole, Bardock thought, how dare he just sit there and laugh---ROFL!!!! I was laughing for sog whg when I read this. I love Bardock he is so cute and soooo smart! jeez he is amazing. When Goten kept laughing I was like he is so psycho but very funny. I don't think I was confused I pr muc much understood the chap. Thought it was very good.
And gosh sorry for this crappy review * is truly ashamed* but I am soooooo beyond tired. I feel zombified. I am going to sleep all day tomorrow and enjoy dreaming.

And I wouldn't have thought it mean if you asked where I was. I don't get embarressed or offended easily at all.

Anyway thanks for the rad chappie
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From ANON - jaygoose on April 19, 2004
Owww...that was soo good. I wasn't confused at all. I love it when you get all complicated on me. Cool. I can not believe that Goten is a dad though. Wow. I can't wait for more. Time Travel is so fun isn't it. I'm gonna have time travel in my fic too. So there! :)
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From ANON - Getarian on April 19, 2004
Reviewing Interlude 'The Memory'

Very interested in Goten's thoughts in regards to his first real taste of the more primal side of the Saiyan, and yes, I can well imagine that it must indeed be a real eye-opener for him, only ever having known his Earth raised father and (for want of a better definition) his somewhat enigmatic mother.

I did enjoy this:

"Warriors and warriors did not sit around at home and wait for something interesting to come on TV."

LOL! No, and it would be a very dangerous medium for them to possess...I can just imagine the pandemonium that would occur if a Saiyans favourite character was ever killed off :-D

Loved Goten's thoughts about his relatives, particularly Radditz's hair. :-D

Now the w ki ki repressor rings are still a bit of a mystery to me, don't know if it's because I'm still not thinking with a clear head or what, but if what I have managed to glean from this interlude is correct, then Goten has removed the ki suppres frs from his mother and replaced them with similar looking ones that actually help him to concentate his ki?

If this is so, I am wondering two things...

(1) Does Vegeta know about this? and (2) When was this done?

Hopefully, all this will be clarified during the course of the story 'A Prince Among Men', so I'm not necessarily asking for immediate answers...just letting you wha what's going through my mind as I read this. :-)

Interesting to note that Goten is not particularly impressed with his father in this dimension, makes me wonder, if things are going to work out between Kakarot and Vegeta.

"(And �Geta let him know that was never going to happen again by beating the crap out of him for it.)"

LOL! Poor Goten, he was just trying to help :-D

"(Ew, ew, ew. By the way, that was his mother and he had to pin the Prince to a cot and suck on his chest until the stupid ass things came off."

ROTFL! Can I second that Ew? Still, nice to know he loves his mum enough to go through this :-)

"Replaced them with his version of the technology that would power the Prince up quickly eff efficiently, and it allowed him to fight the jerks of the camp that made his Mother�s life hell. (Namely, Kakarot.)"

Ah, I love this kid! Knew there was a reason I felt comforted at the twins arrival :-)

"He (privately) called them Bo, Do, So and Memphis."

LOL! Love the 'Memphis' addition :-D

Poor Goten, I can only imagine how terrifying the attempted rape must have been for him, was deeply glad that 'Geta got to him in time and really loved 'Geta'vengvenge. The choice he gave those bastards had a poetic quality to it. :-)

Bardock and Red definitely seem pissed, I'm guessing this is where Red's revenge is going to show?

�Figure out how the hell we�re going to get back to our own time. This world fucking sucks.�
�Yeah,� Goten said, �It really does sometimes.�

Love this. It really shows how deeply disturbed thins ins are feeling about this world, particularly Goten, who normally possesses a really laid-back, risk-taking personality. I understand Vegeta's deep desire to return home, back in 'Cross-eyed' a lot more now.

Thanks for writing this interlude. It has cleared up some questions, created a couple more and was a good read :-)

Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 19, 2004
Ok wow!
I feel like I have been gone for months or something...
*sobs* I haven't...butm oum out of town was supposed to be back home already...but we had flight troubles...my schedule is jacked!!!!!!!!!!! -_- But I have found time to get back on my cousins computer!!! yay!!!! I am using it wisely...by reading your lovely fics!!!!!

Chapter 6

�ALRIGHT ASSHOLE!� that was Vegeta, appearing in a haze of yellow light. �I got it. I�m up. Leave me alone while I have my kid, okay?� ---rofl! Gotta love these brothers, and I do.

�If I want to have sex in a hospital� he shuddered at this point �Then I don�t see why you wouldn�t want to! Sex is great everywhere!�--hehe I like that. Like that Goku is acting on his former idea of reminding Vegeta whoo the dominant one is in the relationship...very nice.

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, more than willing to admit to Goku that he was the master of all things sex, that yes, every single inch of Vegeta�s body did in fact belong to the baka, --hehe awww I luvs that! Go Goku!!!!

panted even more to know that he was watching himself.--ok I am going to have to say that this lemon was one of the hottest lemons I have read in the history of lemons

�We�ll tell them that its been too many months since you got laid and we�re going back in time to get you some before you have a cow and we have to raise it and milk it and shit like that. --rofl

The twins were gone and Trunks was standing next to Vegeta blinking as the tips of their hair fizzled a bit.--rofl! yes I wonder where they could have gone? hm...hehe

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Geta�who looked like he had stuck his face into a fire because of the spiking of ki burning his skin around the repressors pierced into his mouth. ---rofl...that is kinda sad but it is also funny

So he used his mouth. (And �Geta let him know that was never going to happen again by beating the crap out of him for it.) --LoL *cheers* woo yay!!! aww too bad it will never happen again...it was good while it lasted...

(Ew, ew, ew. By the way, that was his mother and he had to pin the Prince to a cot and suck on his chest until the stupid ass things came off.---rofl!!!!

His mind drifted away from that thought as clouds covered the sun, and he sighed, closed his eyes, thought of Saima. Pregnant. With his child.--O_O omg what? she is preggo!!
Ran
Ran his slimy�literally slimy�hands over Goten�s stomach.---ugh! That is soooo gross!!! I really hate those guys!

Because if his pants slipped even another centimeter lower he was going to start puking on them.---LoL

This was a excellent chap and very emotional. Loved the way it was written and I also love the protectiveness of Vegeta for his brother, I just love their relationship in general. I think it is very cool how you seem to link all of your stories together! That is awesome!

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From ANON - Getarian on April 18, 2004
Whew! What a way to kick off a chapter! A stunning lemon! Very hot!

Vegeta's thoughts as he was held by Goku, whilst Goku sucked on Vegeta's finger was very well done, the whole scene was very erotic. Vegeta's growing need for a more intimate touch was extremely well written, and his (very successful) attempt to get Goku to move along to better things was amazingly written. Your description of the very sexy, highly responsive Prince is exceptionally portrayed.

Really loved this:
"..."...Let it rumble out of him, and felt the interest as the hardness pressed against his back. Haha. He had his ways too."

LOL! A moment of triumph for his Highness :-)

Gods, Vegeta really does have his ways doesn't he? Only you, could write a scene where someone *ahem* plays with themself in a female region and I find it amazingly sexy...I know that it's because it's Vegeta, but still...very spicy stuff. :-)

Oh Gods, the mirror...oh deary, deary me...*blushes* Verery.ery...lusty! (fans herself) Gods, I sound like a prude...I'm not, but that was...unexpected...These two men are bloody amazing together, absolutely no fear of their sex life getting dull...Very hot!

Truly wonderful lemon!

Okay, the rest of it...confusing, but I guess that this is how it is meant to be at this point. I've got that Goten (at least) also had ki ski suppressed (I imagine at the same time as his mother) I'm going to assume at this point, that this happened just after their rescue of Vegeta, from Freiza. This has me thinking that maybe King Vegeta is involved, but as to how he managed to suppress, not only Vegeta, but the Super Saiyan twins, is puzzling...assuming that it was King Vegeta.

Goten, seemed to be affected by the memories of his near rape not long after Gina had her baby, and the fact that he thought of Saima, and mentions just remembering something that he forgot, not only has me confused, as I have no idea what this is all about, but I know that I am more than a little worried...I'm not a fan of Saima, but I don't want her to lose her baby or anything.

Really like the way you are linking this story to "A Prince Among Men"

This was one very interesting chapter, a bit of everything...passion, lust, wanton displays :-D intrigue, and suspense...and you had to post this on a saturday...you are truly evil :-D

Looking forward to Monday. :-)

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 17, 2004
Yes, that was a little on the confusing side. Far too confusing for my poor tired brain to handle at the moment. Finals are coming up...hope that expl thi things a little.

I really apprieciated your second review for THOK. It made me feel all warm and tingly inside. The next chapter unfortunately is coming along slowly, but I am trying to fit in.
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From ANON - Getarian on April 17, 2004
Really love the way this family operates. Goku grabbing Trunks like that, telling him to wake Goten up, like he's been a part of the family all along...really thi this! No shy, getting to know each other crap :-)

Really loved this:
"�Gina�s in labor,� Goku said. �I�ve got to take �Geta to the hospital� He shivered here and cringed"

LOL! I see that he still hasn't gotten over his needle phobia, I love his reaction to needles...and Vegeta's reaction to worms...LOL!

Poor Trunks...He was just getting some much needed rest and all.

Ooo, Goten called Trunks 'the demi', Trunks seemed so hurt. I wonder if Goten realises what he said?

"Pulled his shirt on. (No, it�s not a Banana in my Pocket.)"

ROTFL! Okay, you finally got me on the t-shirt sayings, the others have always made me smile but this one... Loved it! :-D

"�Oh, go fuck yourself,� Trunks said. Stood up and crossed his arms over his chest."

Yeah! You tell him Trunks :-)

Loved the whole waiting room scene with Goku, Vegeta and Bardock. Loved the conversation between Goku and Vegeta, it flowed nicely, and I loved the topic of conversation and inner thoughts, loved it when Bardock asked his mommy what he was thinking and curled up in Vegeta's lap...it was very nicely done.

Waiting to see what all this is about...

"�I�m going to kill you mom,� he said."

Curioser and curioser :-)

And welcome to little Masuyo...okay, is this pronounced 'mass-ee-oh' 'mas-soo-yoh' or something else entirely?

Loved the scene when Gina was waiting for her baby to be handed back to her, loved how Vegeta had a little hold, loved why Goku declined to hold the baby :-D Really loved it when Goku was getting all annoyed with Vegeta because he refused to have sex in the hospital, and loved how Vegeta stood his ground...really love those two guys together :-)

Looking forwar mor more :-)

If it's any consolation...I enjoyed the chapter :-)

Loved the end dialogue :-)

"Yeah, I love the way Goku�s mind works. Such a beautiful lust-driven thing. *sighs happily* And Of course Vegeta would use Goten as a threat to his youngest. He is the master of battle strategy after all. (Wink. )"

Yes indeedy :-) But somehow his battle strategy becomes useless when it comes to handling Goku and his 'appetites'...goes to prove that lust is much stronger than logic :-D

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 16, 2004
Of course the fact that you update everyday makes up for the fact that you were gone.

Anyway, it is wierd that you didn't like this chapter, I thought it was good. But of course there have been chapters that I have written that I absolutely hated...so go figure. Unfortunately now I will probably spend the rest of the day trying to pronounce the new baby's name and fail miserbly...Thanks a lot for that...I can just see my roommate looking at me funny already. ;)
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