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Reviews for Salvation

By : Makota2112
  • From ANON - desertblue on November 09, 2006
    please up date this story i would love to see what happens next, there is something that intrigues me about this story. I also want to know more abotu these religions thankyou for your wonderful writings
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  • From ANON - ichy on January 09, 2006
    you suck uyou left me wanting to reed the reast of the story hurry up and finish
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ ^_~ on September 27, 2005
    Krillen?! that was krillen and 18?! I wonder what the Saiyan Prince and his Princess are gonna do? This is very exciting!!! It challenges the mind and the imagination!!

    [took a religion in america course and am just disappointed you didn't use a voodo ceremony...or a Native american one...or since this is about aliens...the railean one...but this is great!!! and gutsy!!!]

    I really do love your writings...and this took guts...you definitely have my attention!! Many blessings on your creativity!!!


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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on September 27, 2005
    very interesting piece...please by all means...continue!!! started reading this on another site [SHA] and am very glad you decided to finishish it....definitely glad! defiantly so!!! Looking foward to the next chapters!!! Don't believe in organised religion myself, but i did go to catholic school and am a confirmed baptist by choice: baptist born, baptist bread, and when i die: i'll be a baptist dead!!! ;)

    Ya doin' great kid!!! {Don't get me wrong: the creator does exhist! man just got perverted along the way and twisted a few things!} Wonderful idea...btw!
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  • From ANON - deepoet on September 22, 2005
    Good to see you've finally decided to continue this story, its great. I definitely enjoyed the last chapter however shocking it was...hope you post the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Macha on September 19, 2005
    I can't wait for part four. This story is great! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Macha on September 19, 2005
    YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Now on to part 3
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  • From ANON - jenna on August 02, 2005
    Good story. Kinda freaky but then... so am I lol Waiting on next chap!

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  • From ANON - Lee on April 10, 2005
    GrEaT!
    yamcha thing was odd but im hoping the next chappie will hav lots of Veggie, lol
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  • From ANON - deepoet on March 13, 2005
    Oh my goodness! where is all the reviews for this masterpiece!!! this story was so damn educational, i really was literally ignorant to every theme in the story! this is one of the best things i've ever read! C'mon makota! you've got to finish this story or i will surely die!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on September 24, 2004
    Oww...you know that was a perfect place to stop. And I don't care how long it takes for the next part as long as s ass as decriptive and amazing as the rest of the story so far. Humm...I am very interested in where this is leading. Learning is fun. Heh heh.
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  • From ANON - macha on September 23, 2004
    I was absolutely estactic (pardon my spelling please) when I saw this posted here on AFF. I had read the first three chapters on sayianhideaway. I have to say, I love this story. I guess I am just a hentai freak, huh?

    I am glad for all the warnings you have put up concerning this story. It makes it a whole lot easier to not have to worry that you will get discouraged by flamers. I would hate to see you not complete it because someone wasn't warned about the contents. Now that they are warned, if they read and flame, it's their own damned fault.

    I am looking forward to your next installment.
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  • From ANON - Camaro on July 31, 2004
    Wow, I'mI'm SERIOUSLY impressed... of course, I'm easily amused by just about any fanfiction that takes that extra leap and goes into the oh-so-taboo subject of religion. I mean come on... we HAMMER the ideal of sex, gore, hatred, battle, blood, guts and ass penetration... but a little religion? Something that can, in a sense, alter our entire life's course? We barely mention it, yet it plays a vital role in our lives as humans, as I'm certain belief or curiosity regarding a force greater than ourselves is instilled in every human creature.

    Regardless of all that, this is written extremely well, it sounds remarkably original and interesting, the characters are reaic aic and likeable and you as an author... well, I find you intriguing just for the fact that you've gone that extra mile. Its captivating to be honest. And the whole idea of ACTUALLY learning about another tradition or religion.. well, I think thats something that every person should do at some point in our lives. I mean, lets face it.. from our births we're all brainwashed in a sense by the religious choice or preference that our parents took... Is it a betrayal to Go we we explore possibilities that contradict those we've been taught? I dont think so and you've shown a great deal of this in your own writing.. (or perhaps I'm being presumptuous)

    Either way, I agreed somewhat with Goten when he remarked about the hypocracy of it all. Very true. I mean, honestly.. what religion doesn't at some point base its own roots on a seperation from another belief? And dont they all to some extent bring themselves up by degrading another religion? Showing ITS "faults" in comparison to their own?

    Anyways, I'm rambling. But thats good see! Because if people like ME are brought to the point of being blubbering fools on a topic, it means you've got me thinking. And thats the whole goal of writing as I see it. To make people think and expand their minds. This is an amazing fic so far. I'm truly captured both by the storyline, the characters, the underlyning topics.. and you of course. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

    Love
    Camaro
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 28, 2004
    I thought that this chapter was quite brave. I don't know if i would have had the nerve to go there. I live in Mississippi and my friends all are "religious" I am not of course and enjoy challenging them constantly. If they knew that there was something like this out there they probably would be horrified. But me on the other hand enjoy it emensely. And once again my interest is peaked. Yamcha eh...I think you made the right choice. Though it is hard to shallow (I was not trying to be funny). You got me all geared up for the next chapter. What's up with Vegeta and Bulma anyway.

    I have been tossing around the idea of taking a religion course. I really think I will now though.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 04, 2004
    Owww...that was really good. Poor Goten, being forced to watch all the beautiful boy on boy action and not being able to do a thing about it. Lucky for him Trunks came to save the day. I love the way the religions are handled in this fic. I learn something new everyday. :)
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