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Reviews for Learning To Ask For Help

By : Grevola
  • From ANON - gndmlvr01 on December 23, 2004
    I dunno if you intended to have a lemon in there, but I'd thought you had, so...well, /if/ you had, then aff.net cut it out of the fic by accident (it seems to do that often) and it's not in the story anymore. The only reason I'm bringing this up is because it seems to skip from Duo being eager about the whole thing to the, um, afterglow, or something like that (I'm not too clear. *shrugs*)
    Anyway, the fic looks great the way it is, but I'd like to know if I'm actually missing part of the fic or not!
    Seeya,
    gndmlvr01
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  • From ANON - HieiChan on April 30, 2004
    Awwww, awesome lemon I love BD and SM so it was wonderful *claps* sappy at the end was nice too ^.^ so sweet! your great! go you!
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  • From ANON - monkeyhat on April 18, 2004
    SO ...GOOD...oh man this story made me drool. no lie. i was leaning on my hand and my mouth was open and it was like BAM drool. it was kinda sick but this story was SO FRIGGEN AWESOME! definately one of the best i've read so far. i HEART G-Wing and Duo is just the best. Seeing him be all on top and dominating made my day. YAY ^^!

    P.S. write another PLZ.
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  • From ANON - vampireshinigami on April 16, 2004
    *claps* that was very good. ^_^ now your story made me addicted..I must go find more storys like this one!! *runs off*
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