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Reviews for The Arrangement

By : Maldoror
  • From on July 20, 2004
    Wow. This story is addictive! Not only does it have everything I like in a story, but it's also incredibly well written! It's also probably the most in-character Gundam Wing fanfiction I've ever seen. I love everything about it. I especially love all the little details and references. Like the JLA reference. That was so perfect. *sigh* Good ol' Justice League...actually, I think I have the T-shirt you described...
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  • From ANON - GoldenRat on July 19, 2004
    *laughs* Une knows! Is it going to affect her dealing w/ them?
    Did Heero really decide to keep the same house b/c he heard Wufei refer to it as home...things have really changed.
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  • From ANON - bluepixie13 on July 18, 2004
    yay you updated and it wwas good cant wait for the next part.
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  • From ANON - Race on July 18, 2004
    Ok, I'm a sap and I love the idea of Heero taking care of Wufei. In many ways, he's been taking care of Wufei for years. I adored the scene with Une... I suspect Heero's definition of partner included the "arrangement" that Une finally clued into and that his confusion was not that he wasn't getting the fact that Une was asking about them as a "couple" but that Heero had always thought it was obvious.
    My favorite part of this fic is Wufei's point of view, and how he just can't bring himself to believe that he loves Heero, or that Heero could love him.
    I wonder, is the refusal to sell the house because of Wufei calling it "home"?

    ::gathers kleenex and braces herself for the next chapters.::
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  • From ANON - amaryllis on July 15, 2004
    Wow...

    I really like the description and the way you make things flow when writing about a mission, especially with how it isn't rushed or over too quickly. This chapter was a really, really great example of that.

    Unfortunately, the semi-cliffhanger is...TORTURE. *sobs and mopes until the next chapter comes out*

    -amaryllis



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  • From ANON - Race on July 15, 2004
    Another wonderful chapter. I admire the way you handle the action scenes so much. Always from the tight point of view that gives the fic a edgy, realistic feel, and yet very clear on what's happening, so that the scene plays out like a movie in my mind's eye. Wonderful work.

    And for the details, I loved the tee shirts, Wufei walking into the pillar, Heero in the Ladies' Dressing room, poor Wufei getting hit by the car. Someday, some day, those boys will wake up and smell the romance, won't they?

    And I didn't review the Nash chapters due to technical difficulties, but they were wonderful. I think you have Trowa dead on, and his fear and loathing of Nash and the others was perfect. I'm glad he has Quatre and Duo, too.
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  • From ANON - GoldenRat on July 15, 2004
    So I'm guessing that after this section they will begin working on changing their arrangement?
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  • From ANON - PhoenixMage on July 14, 2004
    Damn! Why are the sexy, intelligent, sexy ones gay or otherwise unabtainable!?
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  • From ANON - Liz on June 27, 2004
    Hello.

    I would just like to say that I love the way you write. I have readr fir fics on the raygun site, and I think your stories are excellent. I like the accurate way you protray Heero and WuFei in your story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2004
    this fic rox. like totally. love the way you write from wufei's pov and how you keep the characters IN character. this rox. update soon! =D
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  • From ANON - kira on June 27, 2004
    Thank you for another great chapter of great story ^___^ Heero's actions are screeming with something more than their arrangement contains, but Wufei is so unaware... good that he starts to see his own emotions, even if he minimize them. I'm glad that you'll soon write the part from Heero's poin of view, and I hope for bit of lemon too ^________^ I'm also happy than you didn't leave Trowa alone... hmm... threesome, I like it!
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  • From ANON - untidyclaws on June 24, 2004
    Uhh...I really dun have much to say, but I wanted to point out that I'm reading your story and I care enough to leave a review, even if it doesn't say anything useful. :) ZaiJian!
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  • From ANON - rei_schneider on June 18, 2004
    I thought they would get together in the last chapter.... but it would be too easy! XDDD Those guys are VERY stubborn. I like A LOT your story, and I find it very interesting, what will happen with the 3 ex-gundam pilots? I want lemon!!! because: 1. I love the way you make that scenes 2. I love those two doin' "things"and 3. ..... yeah, I'm a pervert XDDDD
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  • From ANON - GoldenRat on June 09, 2004
    I have to admit part three was kinda anticlimatic. But it sounds like Preventer security, pretty much isn't.
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  • From ANON - Race on June 09, 2004
    I admit I was as disappointed as Wufie that he and Heero didn't get to play house. Although, honestly, I couldn't see any good coming from it. Great action scenes as always. I love this fic and the wonderful job you've done on Wufei's sweet helpless cluelessness.
    Hey! Didn't Duo warn them about Althea? Why wasn't anything done?
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