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Reviews for The Arrangement

By : Maldoror
  • From ANON - Rei Schneider on June 08, 2004
    RAMMSTEIN!!! ........ XDDD well, I just wanna tell u that your story is awesome. I just found it yesterday and I couldn't stop reading it! Hope you can update soon, I can't wait to read what will happen ^^
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  • From ANON - Dancing wolf on June 04, 2004
    Hey.
    I just wanted to tell you how much i love your y, iy, it is truely a work of art. You blend humour, action, sex, character development, and a se toe touch of angst wonderfully. You are amazingly talanted!
    This is actually the first GW fic i've read on AFF.net, so far i've just been looking around FF.net, where i write, and i stumbled across the link. Now i'm so glad i did. I love the way you write Wufei, i've been attempting him myself and he is bloody difficult to write! I have a fascination with complex characters and the way you wrote him was/is simply perfect.
    I haven't finished reading the last chapter yet, so i'm gonna head off and do that now i hope you update this soon i can't wait to see how you conclude this story, hopefully there will be a sequal, ne?
    Oops, brother is yelling for the computer, gotta run.
    Later.
    (ps. please excuse spelling mistakes, my spelling is atrocious i know)
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  • From ANON - amaryllis on June 03, 2004
    Final part next chapter, or did I get it in the wrong context? I hope there's a sequel...T_T

    And I think I get the song. Brothers-in-arms. ;)


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  • From ANON - GoldenRat on June 03, 2004
    Wow! That is hot. I'm guessing it definately caught Exeter's attention but fast. Are they invited in already? That doesn't seem very likely.
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  • From ANON - amaryllis on June 01, 2004
    I'm normally a 1x2, 3x4, keep-with-the-masses reader when it comes to Gundam Wing, which is why I avoided reading this fic for awhile. But this story just kept coming up on the screen when browsing, because of all the good and speedy updates, and I finally clicked on it. I was so drawn in by the second chapter that I closed every other window on my computer and spent a good amount of time catching up. I was halfway througfiltfiltration II last night when I called it quits, having read the last five chapters consecutively and also because I was reluctant to wait fhe nhe next update after finishing. When I came back from class today, lo and behold, there was another chapter! XD

    Anyway, after finishing the whole thing, I'd like to compliment on your characterization, among (many) other things. Heero and Wufei are both very much in character (which is really hard for most authors) throughout the whole story, and the consistency they keep along with the storyline is excellent. The background research with the plot is also very well done, with all the military concepts and the guns and practically everything about Wufei. o-o

    In conclusion to this fangirl rant,

    PLZ UPDATE!!11!

    -amaryllis



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  • From ANON - PhoenixMageFire on May 20, 2004
    This fic is flipping AWESOME!!
    Do you have any idea how long I've waited to read a really GOOD WuFei POV?

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  • From ANON - Sally Mishima on May 15, 2004
    Maldoror,
    I'm afraid I can't offer you a great deal of help in writing 'The Arrangement,' but I do hope to give you some encouragement. This story you're writing I believe is very good, and is one I immediately go to when I see it's been updated. Your protrayal of Wufei and Heero are, in my mind, quite believeable. I've attempted to see a story through Wufei's eyes and I admit, it's quite difficult. I'm glad, however, that you haven't decide hav have him blabber on about justice, as many lesser authors stereotypically potray him. I say to you bravo and I do expect more for this story.

    As for constructive criticism, I'm afraid I'm bad at offering that. I either love a story or hate it, and so I can't easily find flaws with it. However, I do want to see Heero's POV, hopefully an entire chapter of it.

    I hope this helped boost your muse. Again, thank you for the story.

    Sally Mishima
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  • From ANON - Sorcha on May 13, 2004
    ::whimper:: This story has officially gone beyond my ability to review it. It would be like...like... reviewing Ernest Hemmingway or Robert Frost. You use of sensory imput is beyond perfect. Descriptions and action are perfectly balanced, and the overarcthemthemes continue to be sustained in the smallest nuances. Even the details, like the well-thought-out chapter titles, are a work of art. The quotes which begin each chapter add to the richness of the story. And the literary tags, woven through a tapestry of repetition are suberb. "Breathe. In. Out. Now." I can't even be jealous, all I can do is read in sincere awe and wait in breathless anticipation for a new chapter.
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  • From ANON - Yohji on May 04, 2004
    It was great! To bad Wu-chan didnt join the preventers? What is he going to do? Where will he go?
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  • From ANON - Yohji on May 03, 2004
    Ohhh I wonder whats going to happen!!! I Just love this story!! Oh yeah now I remember! I was on mediaminer.org and I saw that you had so mucorieories!! And you had that one-shot fic with Heero and Wufei!! That is so evil *cries*
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  • From ANON - Yohji on May 03, 2004
    I loved it. Where do you get theses ideas?? They are so orginal!!! Hvae you ever thought about making your own story and having your own characters? I think you should. Your so great!
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  • From ANON - Wolf Wing on May 02, 2004
    God, that was intense. This whole fic has been absolutely incredible heading from one great self-discovering high to the next!
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  • From ANON - Yohji on April 28, 2004
    Finally! I thought it was so cute that Wufei was embarrassed because of his inexperience!! I love this story!!
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  • From ANON - Yohji on April 28, 2004
    Why is Duo sooo flirty?? Lol though I like him like that! I love the way Heero rescued them!!
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  • From ANON - Yohji on April 28, 2004
    Why is Duo sooo flirty?? Lol though I like him like that! I love the way Heero rescued them!!
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