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Reviews for The Arrangement

By : Maldoror
  • From ANON - Race on April 28, 2004
    I was deeply offended by FF.net's decision to delete your wonderful stories. However, I must say, it gave me the impetus to read your "enhanced" version and it was so good I'm ready to forgive them. The dynamic between WuFei and Heero is dang *hot*. I admire how you keep both so much in character and so true to their strong natures.
    And the lemon... woooo hoo!!! ::fans self:; very nice. Very, very nice. ohhh, yes.
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  • From ANON - Bluesake on April 27, 2004
    wow....I LOVED IT! continue!
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  • From ANON - Yohji on April 27, 2004
    Yaaay my Wu-man escaped! Is Duo going to find out about Heero and Wu-mans arrangement? LOl i liked that you made Wufei give Heero a massage!! It was great! And Quatre is soo cute! Yah know you should make Trowa speak more often lol. He is so quite!
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  • From ANON - Sorcha on April 27, 2004
    This story is a pleasure to read, I'm glad you are updating as frequently as you are. I think your strongest writing is at the end of each chapter, you tend to... I don't know if 'pay attention to the words' is more appropriate than 'get poetic', but the writing kicks up a notch near the end. Your phrasing becomes stronger. "A smear of fire and sirens lingered on the night behind them..." "...the way his subconscious mind occasionally dropped things like that upon the rails of his normally rigind thoughts...when it did it had a distinct American accent." *sigh* Exquisite. And that's just two of the more stunning ones from the last two chapters. The only thing I would mention as a (very) minor criticisim is that I think you went on a bit too long describing the hideout. Realistic details are good, but I found it went on a bit too long. I love this story, and can hardly wait to see what happens next.
    Thank you for sharing
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on April 25, 2004
    Omg this story has to be one of the best 1X5 ones out there. You keep them in character so well that it's almost scary to think that there could be people like that around. The relationship that they share has to be one of the oddest ones i have ever read about. The story isn't just full of fluff too. Your story has a sence of realisim that makes it easier to see also, and your description is just beatiful. you give them missions as well and actually go into detail what the missions are. The limes could be lemons, but that is just me
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  • From ANON - Yohji on April 25, 2004
    Im so glad you made this fic. 1/5 are so hard to find! Plus im kinda tired of 1/2 even though I love Duo and Heero so much! Anyway update!!!
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  • From ANON - Yohji on April 25, 2004
    Heero acts totally like a robot. You are sooo evil. Why wont you show his pov! Ne way I wonder who is going to start to like who first. This fic is so amazing and orginal. You have to keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Yohji on April 25, 2004
    Lol Duo is funny here. I just love him!! I cant blame him for trying to get Herro and Wu-man!
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  • From ANON - Yohji/Rolie on April 25, 2004
    Omg this story is so good! Lol Wufei is something else! I just love the way you make Heero act!
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  • From ANON - Nozomi on April 25, 2004
    I'm really getting into this story. You keep both Heero and WuFei in character very well.

    I hope to read more soon!
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  • From ANON - Jamethiel on April 25, 2004
    Chapter 4 was very intense, i 1x5 1x5 stories very much and your story has me coming back to the site everyday to check if you've updated and i usually only come here once a month.
    Please write more, you make my day.
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  • From ANON - Sorcha on April 23, 2004
    I really enjoy this story so far. When I read the summary, I was afraid the situation would end up feeling contrived, but you've managed to make me believe this could really happen. I love the battle/storm analogy. You have a nice way with words, some of the phrases you've used are very poetic. One of my favorite scenes is when they return from the initial encounter, and the reactions of everyone else in the room. I'm interested in seeing where this story is going. I don't usually enjoy massively multi-part stories, but in this case the time spent simply adds realism. I especially enjoy Wufei acknowledging his willing participation in the arrangement. Sometimes even self-introspective people like Wufei can fool themselves too, and you had him wait just long enough, any more would have seemed unrealistic, any less and it wouldn't have been effective. I look forward to reading the rest of this, thank you for sharing.
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