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By : Camaro
  • From ANON - Anji on March 13, 2005
    Dear Camaro...

    I must of read....every chapter twice....It changes so quickly....it's hard to keep up with soemtimes...Especially when I go and don't come back for a few month's...*slaps forhead*

    Thank you for adding me in your list of people to thank...I'm honored ^^ Very so...

    I can't wait for more, I go back to check your other site's...hoping there's other chapter's...hoping to see if youv'e written.

    Well, mainly...I just wanted you to know I'm still here....I may not be around...I'v been, busy...among other thing's, but that's no exuse for me being lazy. I havn't even updated MY OWN story lately.

    Well, I'm very happy to know your still around...I hope you feel the same. I'm also hoping that I'll have the strength and will to update my own story...you've given so much to us by sticking by your story, it gives me the will to, hope, that I can do the same.

    Thanx for being you...

    byebye~

    p.s.-since this is a review...your story is just a wonderful as I remembered...as I read it again...and again...
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  • From ANON - Vero-Chan on March 10, 2005
    about time I made it this far. Congratulations Camaro! This is indeed the pinicle of your story as goku has finnaly redeemed himself and become the man he alwyas was inside. The sin removed from the Monster he can now defeat that which had once been undeaftable! Now enough with acting all intelligent! I've greatly enjoyed this story and rue it's ending! I can't wait for the next chapter! I just now need to print out the rest and hole punch it and read it at school. "what? I'm not reading sex not at all I'm readign about sin!" hah!
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  • From ANON - Camaro on March 10, 2005
    Yeah, sorry kiddo, you aren't who I thought you were.. which, kinda saddens me as it felt like old times for a second. You've caught me in a tired, weak moment and I'm afraid I just can't indulge your curiosity with more of my .. how did you phrase it? "oh so great vocabulary"?

    And the more I thought about it and got opinions from others, the more I realized you had a valid point and that although I didn't see that as a threat (it wasn't a threat or bribe so much as I really sincerely was just stating a fact) that it COULD be misconstrued or misinterpreted as that... and that's NOT something I want in my story as it's already something I've showed that I feel strongly about. I just hate it when authors say "ok, I want X amount of reviews before I update"... and you proved that although that honestly WASN'T my intention, for someone looking for an excuse to give me crap... it was an easy target.

    And about my arrogance? Sheesh, why does everyone think that's news? Why does every person take it upon themselves to give me crap about that? Honestly, it's been hammered so much, it doesn't even faze me.

    And ben? That was a weird comment... I .. sincerely do NOT know how to take that haha!

    So.. peace. I'm really not in the mood to be confrontational today. hahaha

    "Get your winter hats and gloves kids! Hell just officially froze over!"

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - God on March 10, 2005
    Yeah, that's me. And yes, I did read your story, from the first word to the last. And I'm no flammer, because I can say that you write with an absolutely perfect style, and that your story is good. Also, just for your knowledge, I don't need to write fics to have a freaking opinion on your level of arrogance.

    Now, since you seem to have nothing better to do than to answer flammers with your 'oh so great vocabulary', I wait impatiently for your opinion on this. Feel free to had more insults, I might take notes and try to stir myself from my sadly polite mind.
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  • From ANON - Ben on March 10, 2005
    your a demented pyco who has a very bad view in life and are puting them into this story

    you rock even tho i have only read o chaper 9 i think i would have liked satin to live with her baby
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  • From ANON - Sliding_Pool235 on March 09, 2005
    Camaro,

    You really do always have your hands full with flamers. Oh well, you always deal with it well. This was an excellent chapter and a much needed break for the normal angst and gore. I agree as well with former reviewers that this is done very professionally yet still breaks the mold when it can. Excellent job and please update soon.


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  • From ANON - Lori on March 09, 2005
    Uhhhhhh I dont think thats oh God. oh God is smarter sounding, that person can barely put two sentences together.
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  • From ANON - Camaro on March 09, 2005
    Waiiiiitt a tick! Oh God, is that you?! Awwwww... you son of a bitch! How the hell are ya babe?

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Camaro on March 09, 2005
    Wasn't threatening or bribing asshole, simply stating a fact that a lot of readers are oblivious to. Haha, and have you read this story? Pfft, why the hell would I EVER lose my arrogance baby?! hahaha Maybe you shouldn't try to start shit you obviously can't back up or handle... stop being a bitter, jealous little loser and write something of substance.. that's if you can you fucking shameless, anonymous coward.

    haha! My condolences to that bitch of a mother that shit you into this world.


    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 09, 2005
    ''I will never threaten, I will never bribe and I will never withhold a chapter for the sake of reviews. '' Oh, great speech huh. Where is it now? Your arrogance is leaving you, or you just lack encouragements?
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  • From on March 09, 2005
    I have only just found the time to read this fic, and I was rather shocked at the various details finding it rather odd and almost intimidating in its uniqueness, and yet I found myself reading further into the story. Almost like an amazingly intricate and well-planned novel that you cannot stop reading until you get to the final page. Or in this case the last page that has been uploaded. (I seriously haven’t stopped reading since I started! Its now 2:01 in the morning here!)

    I honestly don’t think any words can describe how wonderful and simply astounding I find this story to be and as such I am not even going to try, lest I make a fool out of myself. Instead I shall simply call it beautifully written. Your writing is inspiring and I hope you do post the next chapter instead of going some place else. Well catch ya later -waves-

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  • From ANON - Kat on March 09, 2005
    NOOOOOO!! Please don't stop posting, I love this story!! I've been following it since you started, don't stop writing now!!!! I love the way you write, and I love the way you don't give a damn if anyone hates it. This story is always the highlight of my day when you add another chapter. Please don't stop writing it, I want to know what happens next!!
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  • From ANON - Kathryn on March 08, 2005
    Excellent chapter.....I was getting concerned for Goku there (lol). I can't wait to see how you will end this story. BTW, I have read the other story you wrote about Vegeta. I really enjoyed it! Please continue to write on it as well. Kudos as always! Keep writing......
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  • From Bulma on March 08, 2005
    I love this fic and I can't wait until it's done! I am chomping at the bit to find out what happens and am about to die of curiosity! Update soon! Don't let the lack of reviews get ya down hon, we are all reading this fic and enjoying every word. Most people are kinda ashamed of themselves for a couple of reasons #1. They can't write as fantasticly as you #2. They are secretly in love with the ideas that this fic inspires and can't handle it. and lastly #3. They are afraid

    Love ya babe!

    Vegeta's Mate
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  • From ANON - lazy-Digi on March 08, 2005
    mmm. I like Bruder, and I like that there are two delicious vegetas. one that's evil and appeals to me and the other that's just a bastard and appeals to me just as much. this was quite a nice chapter, and i get the feeling i'm going to be talking like Bruder.

    this reminds me of a technique i've noticed in most horror stories that are really nice; a break from extreme horror and action and the like. a breather, if you would. *shrug* dunno, even for being a fic that pushs the limits of everything acceptable- this is quite professional in some aspects.



    aka: i love you and i want a fetus in a bag from you. XD


    digi
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