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By : Camaro
  • From ANON - Macha on March 08, 2005
    I love this chapter. How Goku goes into how much he told the old man, expecting rejection at any moment, and then... he doesn't get it.

    *winks* Bruder has a point, about how Goku told him all the bad things, but none of the good. I do have to think Goku only wanted to confess, and part of confessing is only reliving the bad stuff, none of your accomplishments. Now isn't that ass backwards.

    I hope Goku will find the strength to shed the guilt and be able to forgive himself. If he can, people like Bulma will once again be able to relax in the knowledge that there is a hero. Well, that is if Goku can find her first.

    Always be a friend when he needs one eh? Hmmmm, wonder who's going to show up. I don't mean the short version of Vegeta. That's almost a given. I wonder who else is going to just happen along in the nick of time.

    I was soooo happy to see this update. I can't wait for the next.
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on March 08, 2005
    Hell Yeah! Another chapter! I feel like I've been waiting forever, but that's my own impatience talking for ya. Well, I love this chapter. Finally, someone to tell Goku he's not so evil as he believes himself to be. I just want to hug Bruder. Excellent chapter and please update again soon. I'll be looking forward to it.

    ~Yuurei~
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  • From ANON - Turanto on March 07, 2005
    hey when are you going to update this? It's been a long time. Turanto
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  • From ANON - Jita on March 06, 2005
    Bravo, beautifully written I give you that. But I wonder, have you played Final Fantasy X , for if you have, there's a little lack of inspiration emanating. Interesting point of view show all the way though, that's nice alright. There's somthing else I'd like to know, have you read Anne Rice? Because it really looks like you have, might be wrong on that though.

    Anyway that's a good fic. Keep on with it will you?
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  • From ANON - Sue on March 04, 2005
    I dont mean to be a jeminey cricket but sometime your really mean to people and i need to tell you. great chapter and please email me when the next one comes out

    Sue
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  • From ANON - woa! on March 03, 2005
    This is like a trip!
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on February 25, 2005
    Checking my mail was certainly a pleasant surprise. All I could think was, "Woohoo! Get yo hands up!" Then I did a little happy dance before rushing to the new chapter. Thanks so much for the early update. I'm a little sad to hear that the story is nearing it's conclusion, but I'm excited as well. ^^ In reading your story I also feel inspired. I want to push myself harder with my own writing.

    Keep up what you do, and update again soon. ::hugs:

    ~Yuurei
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  • From ANON - Macha on February 25, 2005
    Eew, it sounded like Goku was in more than a terrible state when Yamcha and Tien found him, and that was just from Goku's POV. He must have been really bad off. The DBZ gang is too dependant on sensus for survival, but hey, it's anime. Besides, if there were such things, I'd be climbing Korin's tower to get me a handful, also.

    So, as far as how the bean got into Goku's system. O.O WTF? Vegeta? Does he want Goku to live to spar another day or what? And then saves his ass AGIAN by giving him the hemlick. Of course, maybe if the bean hadn't been shoved so far down his swollen throat, that wouldn't have been necessary. *shrugs*

    Tien or Yamcha's comment about Vegeta being shorter. Uh... Yeah, I thought he normally was too, so now that it's been brought to light that this wasn't the case.... (You have discribed 'Vegeta' very well, I just have this mental image stuck in my head and it's difficult to get around it unless something surprises me.)... *Head tips sideways here*

    Vegeta came and kidnapped his own wife? What kind of sense does that make. Now he has horns and looks like the devil. I am beginning to see a picture here, and it's bringing me to one coclusion, I just don't know where that conclusion leads. The horn wearing version is certainly NOT Vegeta. The shorter one maybe, but how could two Vegeta's exsist, and no body notice it?

    This Bruder character. I loved the way you discribed his features by the way, especially the part about his/their smiles.

    He certainly has Goku almost seren (sp?) after just a couple of moments. I am hoping the old man doesn't get more than he bargained for when Goku tells him the story.

    Interesting how Goku noticed he felt like... Goku again after just a few moments in Bruder's presense. Can't wait to see how the old man reacts.

    Oh, and before I forget, Dr. Briefs calling Goku to ask about Bulma. His acting abilites have me scratching my head, if everything Bulma said was/is true.
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on February 24, 2005
    Honestly, this is like nothing I've ever read before. After the first chapter I knew I wanted to read this to completion. I couldn't even pull myself away. At the end of every chapter I kept finding myself clicking that "next chapter" button until I no longer had that option. I feel that anything I could possibly try to describe your story and it's quality as would only fall short of how truly amazing I believe it to be.

    I've seen some of the reviews you've written to people and I've seen some of the reviews you've recieved just because people were angry with what you said. I've also seen your author's notes in regards to them. I must say, for never holding back with your writing and the reviews you give, I respect you. I'll be waiting to read more from you soon.

    Yuurei



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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on February 24, 2005
    Love your story and your little notes,
    i can honestley say i never read anything like them.


    E~
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  • From ANON - KittyKath on February 24, 2005
    Incredible work....I haven't read a story like this one in quite awhile. It brings to light many different issues...as well as you, the author, bring intellegence to the pages. Kudos and 5 stars for this one.. look forward to more stories of this caliber
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  • From InstantNoodles on February 24, 2005
    Dear camaro,
    I have to say that story was wild I dont know what interested me more the story or you fighting off all of the nasty reviewers. Well i hope you continue this story. Because Fanfiction is all about imagination and the whole pizza guy thing had me fucking laughing out of my seat! although the rape of a fat guy really distrubed me....
    anyho nice writing style! You should ignore the opressors and keep on writing love!

    -IN

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  • From ANON - FallenAngel411 on February 22, 2005
    I haven't read this yet, but I'm about to. I know you from FF.com (yes, I hate them), where I read some of this...and also what I consider to be one of the greatest pieces of literature I have ever read, Dark Angel. I cried when it was deleted.....but I had it saved anyway ^__^. So yeah....I would also now like to BEG you to repost Dark Angel on this sight, where it doesn't stand a chance of being deleted and will be enjoyed, hopefully, but another 3,000 people. Or more.

    I'm babbling. Anyway, you're writing rocks the world, and you are my idol. I hope to someday be able to write like you. Ignore the shit that anyone gives you (like you even need to be told, lol) and just remember that you are truly something special, an amazing talent. If you ever get published, please write me. On that note, I seriously hope you're thinking about writing something besides fanfiction in the future.....your awesome imagination would definitely take you places. So consider writing for profit if you haven't already.

    TTFN
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  • From ANON - Sue on February 16, 2005
    great chappie as always. There really isnt anything like this story
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  • From ANON - Macha on February 15, 2005
    Okay, so you know I've read this else where, but I have to be honest. The first time, and really even this time, I read these words and thought "WHAT!" Goku wasn't the only clueless one. *shakes head at self*

    You succeeded (sp?) in gory. Goku's discriptions made ME want to vomit. I really do feel pity for those people, because the first part was a spell of some sort, they had no control, but when Goku interupted this Vegeta imposter they began to regain some control. I can't imagine they stayed sain for long when they relised what was happening.

    This is becoming very intense. I hope you update soon.

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