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Reviews for Monster

By : Camaro
  • From on February 15, 2005
    *blinkblink* Holy shit! Dang, man! Ok, first off, fantabulous as always. It was so disturbingly creative. o_O I'd like to peer in that head of yours and see what's running around. I adore your descriptions and the way you've climbed into Gokuu's head. While he seems to be OOC, he's still _so_ Gokuu. Anyhoo, I'll be impatiently awaiting more!
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  • From ANON - WOW on February 14, 2005
    This is scary as hell!!! My friend recommended this to me and I cant fucking wait for an update. This is truly remarkable an unlike anything I've EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER read before!! PLEASE UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Sue on February 14, 2005
    awesome chapter. I really like where this is going
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  • From ANON - Vega on February 09, 2005
    it's ok. just email her and she'll explain it for you.
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  • From ANON - Sue on February 09, 2005
    hey great story. but pls take it easy on cujo1991 hes just a kid ok?

    sue
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  • From ANON - Saiyajin-Neko(Steph) on February 08, 2005
    Moooooore XD Hope everything is ok with you, and that your alright. Glad that you updated and I can't wait to know what happens next.

    Ja ne!!
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  • From on February 07, 2005
    Well, wasn't that foreboding... I loved it again. Loved when Gokuu was telling Bulma he wanted everything, beauty, pain, etc, for his own. If a man said that to me...well, I'd give him stupendous sex too! o_o Heh. ^_^ Can't wait for more! Ps. I loved the dream sequence, but was that really a dream? o_O
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  • From ANON - Macha on February 07, 2005
    Ah, so he did understand that the first time he had taken advantage of Bulma, and in a way has continued to do so.

    *shakes head* Maybe he should have learned from his trysts with Vegeta that he couldn't go back to 'just' appologize. The circumstances are a little different, He was going to tell Vegeta off and Bulma he was sorry, but he is still addicted. Your choice of word 'addict' was well used. It would be like a changing one drug for another, thinking this time it wouldn't end up the same way.

    The dream at the beggining of this was creepy. Then, I have to wonder if it was only a dream.
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  • From ANON - Vega Daemonson on February 07, 2005
    This is an excellently evil story. It appeals to the dark place in my appallingly human heart. Noone realises that good and evil are one. They are moulded perfectly to fit each other in ways noone could ever imagine. Enough of my rambling on my beliefs. I'm waiting for another chapter, and for you to email me back about my friend, GforeV / kaka4geta. She's waiting for you to get back to her about her last email to you. You remember that one don't you, Camaro?

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    Vega
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  • From on February 05, 2005
    Hey, I'm sorry I havn't kept up with you....I'v been having Problams with my comp...but luckily I got some of my story up...you can read it...pwez...hehe ^_^

    Anyway I'm still following your story and I can't wait for more...I hope to E-mail you when I get my computer back...Hope to talk soon. ByeBye~
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  • From on February 04, 2005
    *Whines* Where's the rest? I love this story so much. Please publish the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - chibi_kid on February 04, 2005
    hey camaro, My email is on the fritiz, so this is my new emil. Chibi_kid77@yahoo.com. Send me the corrected story coz I can't get into my mailbox in hotmail.

    steven
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  • From ANON - Creation_Dweller on February 03, 2005
    You seem arrogant at first but I think you might have some back up here. Detailing is sensational and the content is intriguing to say the least.

    Email me with an update!
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  • From ANON - wow on February 03, 2005
    this is definitely one of the more original pieces I have found. Astounding really.
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  • From ANON - StapleKitten on January 30, 2005
    I like you. I'm happy your on the DBZ side also. When I first started to read this I thought you were one of those ppl against fanfics. You're a really good writer. You know how to keep your reader's attention so far. . . I also like the fact your artict and you will so you yourself can only take so much bitching.
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