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By : Camaro

From ANON - macha on August 18, 2004
I think Vegeta showed Goku an awful lot in this one half of the night. *shudders* Even I like to pretend that some of those things don't exsist. Although a couple of them have been placed on my own doorstep of this life. I don't want to go into details though. Just know that my life isn't all roses, as Goku's seems to have been up until now. I am not certain that anyones is. Ah, the power of anime.

Love is such a tainted word. It's so easy to say it, when really, it should be something that is proven by actions. Very rarely is it held as sacred as it should be. I don't have to wonder at Vegeta's scoffing at the word. Somtimes I scoff too. Hmmm, I wonder if that's why I shudder at mushy seens in movies, thinking to myself, "What kind of crap is that?"

I would have vomitted too. I guess there is a little of Goku in here somewhere.
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From ANON - Lady Blue on August 17, 2004
Ho hum. Just me, wanderirounround and re-reading the precioussss.
Oooh, I do SO love Vegeta. Who's to say that what he is is evil? I find it quite stimulating. And he's a seme no matter what, in my opinion. Pride. Dun't care about insignificant height differences. Vegeta is domineering, Kakarot is a fluffy bunny. D'oh! Forget "a", Vegeta is THE seme. Always.
Man, I forget how many s I's I've reviewed. Oh well.
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From ANON - Billy Hillneck on August 16, 2004
Dang girl, your story is really good! and I haven't even had any moonshine yet today! Keep this up I can't wait for the new chapter!

Billy Hillneck
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From ANON - Lady Blue on August 05, 2004
Hullo, tis me again. *shuffles feet* What can a kitty do but be impatient? Ah, sorry for pestering you so much with my constant reviewing of only one chapter. My vice. *sniffles* I guess you don't have your laptop yet; unless I'm completely incorrect and you're just taking two weeks away to hunt walrus. *perks up* Here in the kitty's mauve head there are many walrii... *does a happy little dance of amusement*
Er... *cough* This chapter is just especially shibby, seeing as how it's the most recent chapter. You know... the one last updated. The most current posting. And I'm sue ale all know how much kitties love up-to-date chapters. Especially the new ones. *stares* Hint. Hint. (blatant begging for a quick update next time, in case you missed the very subtle hints. Kitty is very subtle. Subtle is her middle name. No, we're not on medication.)
In other news, I have come to grab you by the leg and smile my cute little irresistable smile at you. :)
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From ANON - Saiyajin-Neko on August 05, 2004
My god this is getting so good, i can't get enough. I need to know more, i need more Goku and Vegeta moments. Please update soon, Ja ne!
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From ANON - Lady Blue on August 04, 2004
! Thank goodness, yesterday I couldn't find Monster when I came to look for it, and I was so worried that maybe you had been deleted again, or Montser had been taken off for some reasond Ind I tried Kiss of Hell but for some reason to do with my computer it didn't work either, and now I'm so glad to see it and you again, hooray! *huggles* I missed you!
*cough*
Er... Keep updating and write your soul out, I love you Camaro! *waves* ^_^
~Lady Blue
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From ANON - ST on July 31, 2004
LMAO! i'm so sorry but i reckon the note at the top of this should be posted all over ff.net. God how i h8 those jumped up little hitlers! i think if you carry out your plan to post under a new name everytime they delete then they're going to lose wil will to live, so keep going! maybe if everyone complained and pisses and moaned like you we might actually get nc-17s back, but i highly doubt it. The assholes are to busy jerking eachother off!
You go girl. get revenge of the little shits for deleting your account i'm sure you have the backing of millions as you certainly have my backing. the little bastards did the same to my best m8 all because her put the word 'fuck' in a story rated pg-13. Honestly any 13 year old that doesn't know the work fuck must live in a cave!
sharp objects and keyboards
ST
xxx
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From ANON - evilchild(not signed in) on July 30, 2004
I'm ewinewing just because I feel what you said in the first chapter of Monster. I like you just beacuse of that. I'm not the only one who thinks that exact same way. They (ff.net) can take away our fics and our accounts but we'll just keep coming back. Yes, it's hurtful but we'll live. It's like I always say... get over. It's mean but just don't sit there and cry and never post again. They can't stop us so what's the point in trying? It's a waste of everyone's damn time. And I'm with you on what you said about flamers. Let they ass flame if they want to, I got something for that ass. I want somebody to try and flame me. I ain't the on be be fucking with. You flame at your own damn risk. I'm a mean ass bitch and I let everyone know that when they flame like a dumb ass. I'm sorry... I'm just ranting again. I get like this every time it's against ff.net or idiot flamers. You keep on writing! I just read the first chapter but your fic is great so far. Don't let no one get you down!
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From ANON - Lady Blue on July 30, 2004
*purrs* Hatred, denial, love here in an instant and gone the next, like a balm of oil set aflame. How I do love the perversion of my own mind, the inversion of my soul. Your words captivate me. Repulse me. Attract me. Dance with me. All of it sinks into my skin, tattooing my heart with a steak knife. And you, yourself, the mind and idea behind the words, intrigue me. Your arrogance and your casual acceptance, they switch me on. I love your Monster. Some little voice in my gut is disgusted, wants me to forget what I've read and never look at another word you write. Obviously, I am not listening.
The Monster is food for the intelligent darkness of my brain. By all means. Continue.
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From ANON - Keket on July 29, 2004
You've got me hooked! I canelieelieve how well you write! Wow, just wow!
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From ANON - Macha on July 29, 2004
Yay! Your back, wahoooooooooo!

Sadly I think I am about to become a different sort of Vegeta convert. I say sadly, because while all of the stuff he said was true, I wish it wasn't. I liked the what you wrote about suicide though; thas bas been my view of it for some time now.

I can see Goku has VERY mixed feelings about all of this. This not only being sex with other men, but also what Vegeta said about how he views the earth and that Goku could really never be a part of it and REALLY be himself too. The very sad story of wanting to have your cake and eat it too. That can only happen for so long before there is no cake to possess either way.

Sorry this is so short, I have to go to work now. I ery ery happy you are back.

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From ANON - AngelKitty on July 08, 2004
To tell you the truth, when I first began to read you're opening words on fanfiction.net, it was the only reason I took the time to read this story. I learned of the version on here, so I came to see what the fuss was about. When I read you're reaction to you're flamers and you're situation with being banned, it was what first compelled me. But I'm sure you don't care about alat, at, so I'll simply get to the point.
When I began to read you're story, I was captivated right from the start. I've never come across a story like this. I found that it was easy to feel yourself as if you're looking through the character's eyes (it was written that well). It gives such a realistic point of view, which is only enhanced by the explicit scenes. I'm uncertain about what the controversy was over this story, because in my personal opinion, I don't see how anyone could find something wrong with a story that seems like it could just hop out of the screen and become a reality. You've grasped such a deep part of the human mind pnd put it into words. I find that very extraordinary; I'm impressed.
Unlike you, I don't have the ability to put my reaction from this masterpiece into words, but I still felt obliged to review.
My name of Fanfiction is AngelKitty, and please don't think I'm leaving my penname because I want you to look at my work (because frankly, my work is embarrassing compared to yours). I just want to you take note to my name, because I plan on reading and reviewing your work for a very, long time.
I'm sure I don't have to worry about saying "don�t let the flamers get you down"; because I already know you can handle them just fine. So instead, I'll leave you with this: You're a genius
~Many thanks from a very pleased reader
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From ANON - Bunni Girl on July 04, 2004
Hey Camaro-
Glad I read this version instead of the sucky ff.net version where they made you mutiliate this beloved story.
Even though I'm drugged up and can only write with one hand, I just wanna say I love you and you're my favorite author. Only your writing I can truly tolerate and not full-blow criticize; partly because I happen to get the meaning, partly because the writing is so damn good.
I know you must get tjis all the time but I'm your biggest fan.

love,
bunni
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From ANON - taboo1 of FF.net on July 02, 2004
Well now, this has just become a big mess. It's a grand mess of blood and perversion though, like a s'more. So sweet and nicethouthough the gooey white stuff burns a bit at first. Ah...that was off topic. Yeah, keep it going, I'll be sure not to miss the rest becuase I don't like missing rare chances to read great stuff like this.
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From ANON - ~Faith~ on June 25, 2004
Hm...somethings just came to me, that yes, while Kakarot is commiting his crimes and everything, deep down he is the monster. But no, it's Goku, as he is a human soul who should not enjoy such things, but *sigh* he has realised this. You've added another chapter with another small corner of Goku that no one has ever caputered. Kudos to you Camaro.

Faith
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