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By : Camaro
  • From ANON - Macha on June 24, 2004
    It's certainly very crowded in Goku's head at tomenoment. Not only with the ideas and thoughts running in circles in there, but also the several different ppl he seems to have some sort of attachment to/with? I really was shocked that Kakarott paid a visit. I know that I shouldn't have been. I should have been reading this story, the whole time the question I should have been asking was "When is Kakarott going to pay a visit?" The way the whole incounter totally through Goku for a loop and creating some very touchy self doubt. Eee gads!

    The thoughts he has, still trying to sort our what happened to him by Vegeta. Knowing that he shouldn't have liked it, convencing himself that he didn't, and yet knowing deep down that he did. He's walking on dangerous ground trying to hide that from himself and others. It would be best to get it out in the open right away. I don't think this is going to be the last such display he gives to Chi Chi. It would seem as though it's only a matter of time before those thoughts running through his head get out of hand. That being said, I can't see him betraying the encounter anymore than he thinks that Vegeta is going to.

    I found the thoughts about Bulma somewhat disturbing, but I think that your interpretation of the situation is correct. I only got to see the children's version on T.V., but how would something like that be if it were in real life without any sensoring? I am betting very similar to the way you wrote it.

    So, he's going. Just as whoever left the note knew he would/couldn't resist. I'll be waiting to see what is waiting for him in New Orleans. (P.S. I liked the address, it said a lot!)
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 24, 2004
    Ah Chapter 11...oh so interesting as always. i love your vision of Goku. It's like nothing else I've ever read. Loved it.
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  • From Shan on June 14, 2004
    Controversial is always exciting. This could possibly be the best chapter yet, with the raw emotion and the sexy - almost brutal - lemon. I loved it when Vegeta whispered 'filthy whore', just to top it all off. It was excellent. Sometimes you read a sex scene and it seems exactly like the last five or so that you read (I think I'm guilty of this as well). Sometimes I actually end up skipping them rather than reading more of the same. But I'd finished reading this one before I realised I was reading it, then I went back and read it again. Thanks for posting this fic here, it's great to have thinthing fresh and different to look at.
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  • From ANON - macha on June 14, 2004
    I think the word your looking for is ADULT, as in adult fanfiction. Not just fanfiction. Of course, I like the lemons too, (who doesn't?) But it's great to have a story come along that has some meat to it!

    Should I feel sorry for Goku now? I don't think so. I think I like to see Vegeta egg him on, deeper and deeper into who/what he really is.

    "Child", what and apptly put word. Goku really still is a child in some ways. The way I see it, Vegeta's been through a lot to get him where he is. Do ole ole heartedly agree that every deprived and lustful sayian needs to behave in such a manor? No, but I think that Vegeta knows how badly Goku wants out of his bounds, even if Goku doesn't yet. Goku's always been someone's pet hunting dog. Vegeta knows what it's like to run wild. What would a ferral Goku be like?

    Is trying to pull someone 'up' to your level any worse than someone trying to drag another person down? I don't know, I think that I will to to ponder this. I think that the key to this is, "Have you walked a mile in their shoes?"
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on June 13, 2004
    Always look forward to reading your fics, the dialogue in this chapter was amazing!
    Vegeta's night visit was really daring, and the ring he gave Gohan?????

    Thinking about it, its really harsh how Goku's friends put him down like that, brush him off as the 'idiot'. And Yamcha had the gall to actually say it!
    I thoroughly enjoyed the chap! ^_^

    Anyways, *Scowls at fic* I'm actually supposed to be doing my work. *Scowls at Camaro for writing fic*
    ...But no harm done, just a little distraction from *sighs* work, which I now have to get back to.

    Looking forward to the next chapter! ^-^

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  • From Shan on June 13, 2004
    This story just gets better and better.
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  • From ANON - macha on June 13, 2004
    Ah now, tell me what I missed. Were you implying a lemon or a lime? Hmmm? Either way...*drools as mind plays over time*.

    Anyway, Yamcha was starting to even piss me off. Who's the idot in that conversation? I think that I'll pick the one that was acting like he was the only thing that mattered in the world. I think I know why Krillin baled on him.

    So, was it actually in Vegeta's plans to give Gohan that ring, or was it jusway way to occupy the kids mind for a while? Something about the kids attitude was off. *shivers*

    I have to go and contemplate whether or not I'd like to see a Goku/Kakarott walking around without a consious(did I spell that correctly? If I didn't, I what I was making reference to is what usually shows up as a devil on one shoulder, and an angel on the other.)
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  • From on June 09, 2004
    WOO! Enter kakarot!XD add a new chappie soon k?

    TBF

    (P.s thanks for the review, i was very flattered that you think my writing is good, an authoress with your talents)
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  • From on June 09, 2004
    WOO! Enter kakarot!XD add a new chappie soon k?

    TBF

    (P.s thanks for the review, i was very flattered that you think my writing is good, an authoress with your talents)
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on June 08, 2004
    Have I told you how much I love this fic? It just keeps getting better and better, I always look forward to reading your fics.
    I really like Goku's character, so different from how he's usually portrayed.

    Anyways... I read your Bio and @HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!@ *hugs* hope you get everything you want. ^_^

    And sorry for the short review, its too hot today. *Goes off in search of a cold drink.*
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 06, 2004
    I am so glad to see this updated. I love this fic. The plot is thickening, excuse the over used phrase. But it is. :)
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  • From ANON - Lexicon Devil on June 06, 2004
    You know, I'm still in love with this story and with love comes obsession...Even though I'm not quite sure if I like this state I must say that I'm sure my addiction to Monster is going to be a permanent one, as each chapter seems to add on to it...
    So much about my state of mind. Great, you got me...
    I do especially e the the way you molded the characters. They are, opposite to many others themselves, yet in a three-dimensional way. Their complexity becomes more and more noticeable and I'm really wondering where you'll take this.
    I think I'll go off and re-read the final part of the chapter, as I can't help but feel that I missed out on a part of high relevance for further chapters...All in my eagerness to KNOW as much and as quickly as possible...
    I'm still thinking about Titus and Aries - and trust me, it's been more than 12 seconds *winks*- for they seem vaguely familiar...unfortunately pinpoint it...*grumbles*...


    Love, LD
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  • From ANON - macha on June 06, 2004
    I loved it. Poor confused Goku, and creepy twins. Very discriptive, and thought invoking. I am glad that you updated.
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  • From ANON - Quoth Aurora on June 02, 2004
    Get it published. I Kinda work with a Publishing Agency, This will be snapped up, and published in no time.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 19, 2004
    Incredible!!
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