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By : Camaro
  • From Bulma on November 27, 2005
    Ingenious! Never saw that coming. Hmm...wonder if it truely is "the devils'" heir or if it is Goku's. Wouldn't that just twist the Devil's panties in a terrible knot? I would laugh myself silly, but oh well. Will Kakarott kill Bulma? Hope he can find a way around killing her and end up saving the day.

    Kudos!

    Hope you can update soon!

    Love!

    V.M.
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  • From ANON - Kat on November 26, 2005
    Yay, you're back!!!!! And you posted such an amazing new chapter too^-^!! So glad to see your work again, this is truly the best story I have ever read!!!!
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  • From ANON - chayron on November 22, 2005
    Bulma is pregnant, and Goku agreed to go to hell?! And what will that change, that his decision? Though not intentionaly but he blazed a road to hell for himself, but what does he expect to change by going to hell? He wants to be punished, but hey... isn't that selfish?

    Eagerly waiting for more!
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on November 22, 2005
    yippee!!! like a glass of water in the desert for a dying man! What took you so long? I missed this!!!

    this is great! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!

    love the twists and turns...

    this ride ain't over yet!!!!

    Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Whoa on November 22, 2005
    Just whoa
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 21, 2005
    Okay, first and foremost (but only because it's at the end of this chapter) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! NO! She can't be preganant with his child. What a horrible mess!

    I find it very interesting that thoughts of his child and his dead wife would bring Bulma to mind. *ponders*

    Now on to the most important part of this chapter (at least in my oppinion). The dragonballs. "The road to hell is paved with good intentions," and Goku is just now seeing what that means. I know he meant to do right when he would wish the planet or it's people back, but I until now I don't think he had ever thought about the consequences, the after math. Of course, those other times, it had been one bad/evil person doing the distruction, and it was probably okay for people to go about living their lives. Difficult, especially if they had managed to get through the line at Lord Yama's gate and met family members long gone, but liveable, knowing that even though they'd have to die again they would see those family members second (third, fourth?) time they died.

    However, this time, it wasn't someone they didn't know who had killed them. This time the enemy, although influenced by another, was themselves. YES, that would cause mass lunicy. I couldn't imagine bringing them back either after the Devil gave me that little insight. Just the thought that I was what I had planned to do would make me want to vomit also.

    Ah... now to the last thing I found interesting. Kakarott's conceed. Very nicely done. I can just imagine someone with that much power being that in love with themselves. I have to wonder if he's felt that way at every transformation he's gone through.

    Excellent points of veiw and insights in this chapter. Leaves a person with a lot to think about. Well done!
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  • From ANON - AngelStar on November 19, 2005
    I Love IT!!!! Update soon!!I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From BrucesGirl on November 18, 2005
    Ok, sweetheart, I'm done, and let me tell you, I'm still in awe at your talents.

    Looking forward to seeing you later. :)


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  • From BrucesGirl on November 18, 2005
    I've gotta stop and review chapter 34. I would like to point out that I am by no means religious, nor do I believe this is a religious fiction, but sweetheart, this chapter brought me to tears. People expect God to be sitting on a pedastal when he is right here among us. Powerful idea... Great chapter.
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  • From BrucesGirl on November 18, 2005
    Hi baby.

    I'm just getting to chapter nineteen right now, and I have a lot to say, but I'm not quite sure how to word it. Some of what I want to say shouldn't be said on here, so I'll save it for later. I was thinking about you today, oddly enough, while my husband was asking me about how my stories were going. He asked me if I had done any freestyles lately. (Stream of consciousness writings.) I really haven't because I feel so bare when I write them.

    This story... It's horrible. And it's so beautiful. Painfully real. And yet so fake. You've taken the powerful division between good and evil and you've ripped the line from between them, making them mesh together and become grey. Sexuality is the outlet. It is not the reason. While we strive for the ultimate reason to live, we fall into traps, and sometimes, I wonder to myself if the traps themselves are what makes us live.

    I'll continue on tomorrow when I'm not so tired. Be well.
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  • From ANON - me_ninjakitty on November 15, 2005
    this isn't the sort of sory i'd normally read and i will admit i'm finding it hard to enjoy because its just not the type of story i'm into.
    you're writing style is excellent and the characters are beautifully written. I think thats why I continued to keep reading your story because the style and the way in which the story has been written makes me want to see where this story ends up. its a fantastic piece of writting.
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on November 11, 2005
    This spout is getting too serious, I am glad to see you checking the reveiws and responding so it must have hit coreto leave such a long reply. Call me childish or an idiot all you want but it is funny for me to leave such a long response! I hope this protest thing works or whatever so you can complete this story . Good Luck!
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  • From chayron on November 11, 2005
    Hope everything is alright with your PC (or maybe you got a new one), and soon we'll see more of "Monster". Eagerly waiting for an update!!!
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  • From ANON - Camaro on November 09, 2005
    Sigh* Alright, I'm only going to reply this once because I feel it's necessary. For one Foxxy, your reply was embarrassingly predictable; in fact, you reacted precisely how I WANTED people to react and got exactly what I wanted. Number two, your "opinion" was completely rude and uncouth, therefore, making you perfect prey for my insults. I don't expect people to be nice to me Foxxy, I only ask that they expect to hear about it if they're not.

    Number three, while it's blatantly obvious that you wish to continue this pathetic little 'verbal brawl', I'm sticking with my 'idiot' label on this one. You're not WORTH an argument to me. It may seem harsh, but quite honestly, it's the truth. From what I've observed so far, you couldn't present even the most menial challenge NOR do you have stories that you feel are even worth putting your name to. Therefore, your 'opinion' regardless of how crudely put, is sincerely obsolete. I don't respect people who offer soddy opinions and then give me nothing as insurance that they have a right to be voicing them in the first place around here.

    Number four, while it's just so cute that you like my story, sleep well knowing that you've done your fair share in keeping it going princess. What have I preached numerously but that flames and bullshit are always my greatest inspiration? You've done exactly what I wanted you to and believe me, I'm very grateful for it. In my "pov" as you put it, I believe it would be in your best interest to only offer your opinions once you've managed to write something impressive enough to serve as back up for them. Criticism is always better received when the one giving it has proved that they have something of a clue as to what they're talking about.

    So go off and write a story rather than continue this irritating and rather boring little spout you've started. Other than that, thank you for your help and have a nice day!

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - otepoti on November 09, 2005
    Geezes i have fallen so far behind on this, i loved it on FF and should really get back to reading it here, keep up the good work
    as always (if alittle slow) otepoti
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