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By : Camaro
  • From ANON - anz on June 22, 2005
    I love this fic, but please....UPDATE...soon.

    Vegeta is there with Goku in spirit...The strength he needs for the final battle!
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  • From ANON - Serenity on June 20, 2005
    a really nice yet dark fic i like it very much, the monster inside his mind is forever his, even if he erase it form his mind the imprint is always there so nothing is ever really forgotten.
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  • From ANON - Shadowsoulmaster on June 17, 2005
    This is one of the greatest stories ever made. I would recomend this to everyone. Great job Camaro, keep up the great work.

    Loyal Follower 426....aka Shadow, lol.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on June 14, 2005
    I'm not gonna fuck with you! Oh man you kick ass!
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  • From ANON - Patricia on June 09, 2005
    Damn, you are a great writer. What a truly awesome story. Thank you!! The first few chapters scared the crap out of me. ( oh, but what fun ) YOU KNOW YOUR INSANE, YES??!!!
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  • From ANON - Kathryn on June 07, 2005
    excellent chapter........I'm dying to read the rest of this story!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Saiyajin-Neko on June 03, 2005
    Ooooooh!! So cool, I wish I could see all that stuff, your description of it all is really well done. I hope that Goku can stop Satan and make everything allright again. ^_^

    Can't wait till the next chapter, Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 03, 2005
    After all that 'talk' Satan's been doing to try to convince Goku to give in or give up.... *GRINS* YAY, the battles about to start.

    I really love the way you discribed the new power Kakarot has attained. Still not certain where it's coming from, but I have a fairly good idea, I think.

    Hmmmm, Vegeta couldn't wait in hell for this, had to come and see it with his own eyes, eh?

    I'll be waiting for your next update.
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  • From Kugatsu on June 02, 2005
    *blinks* i'll be back to see satan get his ass handed to him.
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  • From ANON - Obiotaku16 on May 27, 2005
    Very nice story. I'm extremely impressed at your writing style and the attitude you give people. I support you in every way.
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  • From ANON - dharmaserenity on May 19, 2005
    Mindblowing! I just read chapter 32. There's so much I have to acknowledge, yet I feel overwhelmed to even try to do so. It is so amazing that Vegeta's body has been taken to be used by the devil, how the devil has watched over Goku all of these years, and now, how Goku's sins have enabled him to be taken to hell if he should die... I'm just overwhelmed. Camaro my dear, you know how to pack a punch!

    And the scenes with Bulma a few chapters back, even though raw and full of misery and abandon were soo erotic, when he was talking to her as he took her the second time.. MY.

    Riveting.

    Jana
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  • From ANON - Addict on May 06, 2005
    I decided to read this whole story over again to gain the entire experience and what an experience it was. I mean that in a good way, i'm so happy to find a story that is realistic and about emotions, truth, life AND RELIGION. Nobody includes religion in their writing because most people are afaird to offend but your not and thats exactly what i love! Other writers don't want to touch on religion because they know readers will be offended because people become afarid when someone says something against what they've been taught their whole life. But religion is such a cause for love and hate and war and peace in the world that you think it would be a main theme in most stories.

    I have also seen that you have been flamed for the sex in your story. One flamer said something to do with sex and religion in the same story...well...um...sex is creation and most religions include a reason for creation...so they kind of work together. I'm glad this story evokes a reaction for these morons because maybe after they've realises how wrong they actually are they won't plague the world with their narrow minded opinions.

    Keep doing what your doing Camaro and just know you have my support! (Not that you probably need it o_-)
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  • From ANON - dharmaserenity on May 05, 2005
    Ok, read chapter 24. Wow. This is gettting to be soooooo deliciously complex. The whole history behind the "kiss of hell" is just fantastic. And I'm beginning to wonder just who IS the monster of this tale... Goku? Vegeta? Gohan???

    And thank you for answering the question: What ever happened to Icarus?

    I love the abandon that Goku is just giving in to. Really, with the madness in the world so prevalent, with a hero unable to do anything about it, what else could he do? But lose his mind...

    The most disturbing chapter would be 23 for me. As I kept reading your words that they had sex on the corpses I kept changing it in my mind, because my mind just couldn't deal with that fact. It was sort of funny. I had to tell myself, "Stop. She really means this. This is taking place in the story!" And then my poor little mind would just say, "Nah, this isn't really happening." As my mind would dance over the words. It was kind of funny to recognize this in myself, this inability to accept that Goku would do that only because it is just soooooo damn hard to accept.... I just love how this fic has the reader constantly questioning themselves.. well, I'm guessing that others are, since I am.

    This gets better and better and oh, almost forgot. Poor Krillen. :( That had to be the most tragic thing and Goku just going on in, what, less than 5 minutes... shows how corrupt his heart is becoming. He sees it, and is helpless to do anything about it.

    Thank you Camaro. :)

    Jana (dharmaserenity)
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  • From ANON - Macha on May 05, 2005
    I did have a little bit of trouble with Goku saying that God making Satan was a mistake. I would have to agree with the Devil on that one. God made him for a reason, we just don't know what it is yet.

    O.O MWuahahahahhahaha, Is it true? Did Goku really want Vegeta the first time he laid eyes on the other sayian? *dreamy sigh* What a lovely triangle Goku/Vegeta/Bulma would have made.

    Instead, that stupid fuck up called Frieza had to go and kill Vegeta and gave the Devil his chance. -_- I bet the Devil had that one planned out all along. SFF SFD

    Hmmmm, so interesting. We've heard all the stories about the infamous people of earth... would be interesting to see if the Devil clammed things for other tyrants of the universe.
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  • From ANON - Macha on May 05, 2005
    And I hit the tab button at the wrong time... *sighs*

    Back to the review....

    Of course Satan would take over the body, but he would still only know what he has known his entire time of being... and he did exactly that even in another body when he had a sort of chance to 'start over'. I don't think it was a mistake Satan saw that little boy. I don't think it was even a mistake that the little boy hit his head so hard.

    Another bit of interest:

    The more you hated, the more you discriminated, the more popular you could become with those who agreed with you. Seems familiar, doesn't it?


    *Shakes head* The purity that held so much appeal to him, he wanted to rot so he could take Goku to hell with him? Doesn't seem very logical, does it? After all, if Satan was able to turn Goku's heart, then what would be there to stop Goku from becoming determined to be more evil and powerful? Can't have the cake and eat it to. Or is Satan aware of this, and just really interested in the challange? Once broken, he'd tire of Goku and toss him aside also.

    O.O I had no idea Vegeta had been possessed so early on in the time line of the show. So... basically anything anyone has ever truely known about Vegeta in this time line would really be Satan? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh


    lol... I WON.... like it's some sort of contest. Silly Satan. You may have been able to convence most people that what you wanted, they wanted, but now you've found your match. hehe

    Curious, Satan still believes Goku's heart to be pure. Well isn't that a knot. If it is still pure, there is no way Satan can make him go.

    Damn it. I have to go to work. I'll finish this chapter later.




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