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Reviews for Monster

By : Camaro

From ANON - on August 24, 2016
Gilgamesh,
Thank you for the review. Sometimes when a story is uploaded, the transcript becomes distorted. I hadn't realized that. When I can, I will take time to fix those errors. Thank you for your notification on that regard.

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From ANON - on July 27, 2016
Hello I am new to this fic and I could not help but notice the odd spelling mistakes. I am on Chapter 9 and the mistakes such as breakfasggs, ggs and others seem completely impossible. I do not understand how you can have such errors. Normal spelling mistakes I understand but this is ridiculous. you said in a response to someone that you fixed some mistakes in one of the chapters. However why not go through the whole fic and proofread it? Fix the many mistakes in an otherwise good fan fiction to avoid situations that make what a character saws impossible to understand?

Take this into consideration I do hope the years have helped you however old you are.

~GILGAMESH.

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From darkstar7789 on January 01, 2012
I remember reading this story at first at saiyanhideaway, and I absolutely love it! I'm awed by how creative and deep the story is. I felt conflicted because I wanted him to go with the devil but at the same time didn't. You don't have to answer this question, of course, but I was curious as to how you were able to form such an amazing piece of literature. If this was a book, I would buy it in a heartbeat. Can't wait to read the sequel. I'm sure it's gonna be even better. :) *hugs, blood, and chocolate*
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From HarliqueenNight on August 04, 2011
I don't know if you'll read this after its been such a long while since you finished this. I stumbled across this not too long ago and realizd that this is the most amazing dbz fic I've ever read. Kudos. It was awesome and you are an amazing writer!
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From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2011
This is Perfection:) Thank you for this. Such a powerful story
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From ANON - Youwantmyname? on December 28, 2008
It's almost 2009 Camaro. I hope you've grown up a bit since 2004. Your nasty little comments in your first chapter kept me from reading your fic. You probably don't care, but if so, that's another sign of your immaturity. You're an ordinary person like everyone else on this planet, stop thinking so highly of yourself. You may be a really nice person but you have some real defence issues.

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From Caprice on August 17, 2008
Hey there babes,

Left you a review on Strong Heart too, hope you had a chance to check it out. Like I said over there, I am always compelled to review what I read, mainly because it's only fair to the author who has given us so much of their time and even one could say a piece of their soul. So here you go:

You know, I truly do believe Monster is a fantastic story. I am not going to kid you, I truly hate gore, I don't like watching gory movies, I don't enjoy reading gore and I would gladly pass on it, but regardless of the gory, gruesome elements in this story, I was still completely fascinated by it, so to me that truly is a sign of accomplishment in your part. I think what makes it so phenomenal is how it plays like a very good thriller, were you don't really even know what's going on throughout most of the story, and you can't wait to find out who "the killer" is. That really hooks you, it makes you want to read and read and (stay up til 3am reading when you gotta go to work the next day, lol bitch ;P), and read... I think the best way to describe your stories is that you can't put them down. Really, and it's such a rare find. Good God, way above mediocre shit I've seen (and have you noticed how some of that mediocre shit gets hundreds of reviews? If you could post something like Monster on a site with the affluence of FFNET you would get more reviews than only 300. Or maybe not, you know how people are. Sometimes kiddies or sensible people just can't deal with these subject matters. They'd rather review romantic piles of dung. But still, it never ceases to amaze me how some stuff gets like WHOA, reviews galore... cripes).

So... I have to start on your sequel now, cause as you can see I am devouring your stories one by one, yeah, you could say I am binging on Camaro, and won't stop til I've read it all. My last thought would be I am glad I am the kind of person who really just likes it hard (dark fics, cause if not I'd be missing out).I think this story is definitely not for everyone. You really do need to be quite openminded to truly enjoy it, and for that I commend you. I think you got balls to cross the line and express yourself regardless of anything. Right up my alley. Sometimes I hate the feeling of having to compromise my creative identity and creative integrity for the sake of readers, and I refuse to do so, hence I respect someone who behaves the same way.

Way to go...(ps. did you start writing that original story? What was it about, will you publish it? Aw... would love to know).

Much Love,
Caprice
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From ANON - Kay on May 23, 2008
Amazing story! I was so drawn in, I couldn't stop reading. I've never felt so absorbed into a story before! You have a great talent! Thanks for sharing with us. :)
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From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2007
I know you probably heard all kinds of praises for this story, so there's nothing else I could say. You know Monster rule, you know you're the best, you know your flamers are people with pea-sized brains.
I loved the way in some parts the story reminded me of several Stephen King books I read, The Stand, Gerald's Game, Carrie, Rose Madder, etc.
Waiting for chapter 20 of Perfection now ^_^
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From smhatche on September 14, 2007
OH. MY. GOD. I'm torn between being speachless and wanting to write a twenty page essay on how good the story was and how absolutely brilliant you are. You truly are an amazing author so don't let anyone tell you otherwise. So write about whatever you want and have faith in knowing that i'll read and most likely love anything you put out! Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Dark Ember on July 31, 2007
I have a question for Ch 33 part 2.....is the part about the amazons for real! I mean that shit would hurt! Anyway enoungh of my disbelief....I really love this story! It kind makes me sad that I'm almost done reading it.
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From ANON - Darkest Ember on July 10, 2007
Amazing.....no,not even that word explains the pure emotion and time put into this fic...no amount of praise could come to the mind that explain the feelings that your fic caused. Goku, the struggling soul searching for more and finding only dark corners in his soul that even he did not know exist. Vegeta, like the snake that holds the forbidden fruit; tempting and yet warning of the conseqences at the same time. I won't lie and say the I've read the complete fic yet....because that's a lie that should never be told. But I will say,the most that I have read......goes beyond angst and more into dark understanding. To be honest you have gained a groupie for all time.
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From ANON - Rourinu on February 10, 2007
...Wow.... Just... Wow.

I must admit that I began to read this fanfic a long time ago, but I stopped before I even finished the second chapter. I'm not a religous person, so I didn't think this story was for me.

However, I came across it again and decided to give it another go. I'm glad I did. You truely have a gift for writing. The idea, the emotions, the descriptions.... it was like I was there. Perfection. True perfection.

Bravo.
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From ANON - icemaidenmoir on October 22, 2006
i think monster has been superbly written. Excellent use of imagery and creativity to do the unspeakable. I Rate a perfect 10.
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From ANON - shivalatina on June 12, 2006
I started reading this on MM.org and saw your message about AFF.net and came here before reading this. I must say, you deserve a standing ovation. This story was brillant. I found it very interesting how many of the views mirror my own. It was very well crafted but there were way to many spelling errors in the first third of the story. You are a very creative person and I applaud your creativity. I look forward to the sequel when you get the chance.
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