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Reviews for Forgotten By the Morrow

By : RenaSama
  • From MasterofPie on March 11, 2008
    nice fic ... YAY for Goku Vegeta smutt ^^
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  • From DietDirtyPop on April 26, 2004
    DId I like it shheezzz Of Course I did silly.....I think I too would remember it Goku crawled into my bed and stuck his tongue down my throat....I really like this.. I wanted to read this before I read the sequel which I am onto right now :)
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  • From ANON - macha on April 22, 2004
    Okay, I finally made it back to see the third fic. posted, only to see that there is now a forth. Yeah! I really, really like the way and what you write. VxG is my favorit pairing, so that makes me even happiers.

    On to the next story!
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  • From ANON - Getarian on April 22, 2004
    Oh, please don't let this be a one-off. It doesn't say so. But the "FIN" at the end sounds so final, and I really would love to see how this develops.

    Really found this to be very amusing. Enjoyed this:

    "You don't do ANYthing! So now that we're on vacation what are you gonna do? Get a job?" Buruma jeered as she packed her things."

    "Yea I have such a sweet life, I thought to myself."

    LOL! This explains the many hours in the gravity room :-)

    Love Bejiita's total apathy for this vacation, really enjoyed that he got a kick out of making the others miss the tour bus. Really can't see Bejiita on one of those :-D

    Got a really good mental picture of Goku trying to talk with the guy in the Donald Duck costume. LOL! Really loved Bejiita's thoughts on this:

    "| How can anyone understand a damn word he says?! |"

    LOL! I never can, I much prefer Daffy anyway. :-)

    Totally loved the way you described Bejiita watching Goku, laughing at his attempts to understand the duck. Then the way Goku walked over to him, pouting, before this turned into a warm smile, which eventually caused Bejiita to look away in a slightly uncomfortable manner. Also loved seeing this same scene from Goku's POV and hearing his thoughts re: Bejiita. The atmosphere was charged with happiness, unabashed love, and uncertain feelings. It was very well done.

    No matter how hard I try, I just can't see Bejiita riding the tea cups, but the hazy mental image I conjured up from your words was pretty funny. :-D Loved all of Buruma's and ChiChi's "Weeeeee's and Woooh's. Surprisingly enough, I can't really picture Goku on them either, maybe it's because of all the food he eats. However; I love that he enjoyed this all the more for beible ble to scrunch up next to Bejiita ;-)

    Really love the way that Bejiita rushed to Buruma's side to steady her. Can definitely see this. :-)

    Loved the scene where Bejiita and Goku walk along in companionable silence. So peaceful, comfortable and filled with contentment.

    Oh, methinks that Goku's 'wrong turn' was more of a, subconscious 'right turn' ;-)

    Really loved the whole "who's been sleeping in my bed" scene. Particularly these:

    ""Bu..ruma?deepdeep, husky voice asks and I freeze. For a long moment I do nothing as 'Chichi' turns in my embrace to face me."
    ""Kakarotto..what the hell are you doing here?" he asks, his voice thick with sleep and confusion, barely awake."

    The whole mistaken identity bit as Goku snuggles up to his amazingly muscled 'ChiChi' followed by Bejiita's sleepy-eyed response, was humorous, and breathtaking, as I couldn't help but fleetingly wonder what Bejiita's reaction was going to b
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    "I don't answer."

    "| What can I say? |"

    "I lower my lips to his slowly...softly."

    Exactly, not much to say at that point, might as well give it a shot. :-)

    I like how Bejiita's reaction is not immediate and it takes him another kiss re hre he realises that he likes what he's experiencing. Bejiita's reaction is very hot. Love the moan and the tongue curl, love Goku's sudden realisation that he needs more than this, he needs all of Bejiita.

    Dahamehame that Buruma's T.V. show finished at this point.

    Pleased that Goku told Bejiita that he loved him before he IT'd it back to his room.

    So tomorrow is indeed another day. Will Bejiita acknowledge what happened? And what about Buruma and ChiChi? How are they going to feel about all of this? I imagine it's going to be a bit of a blow for them. Gotta feel a bit sorry for them, although, neither seem to be a suitable companion for their Saiyan spouses. These are things I would really love to have answers to. I hope there is more to this.

    Truly enjoyable read :-)


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