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By : RenaSama
  • From ANON - j on July 21, 2005
    "and it was wonderful" That last line always gets me, no matter how many times I read this story. Even now, years after I read it the first time, I haven't let go. Weird. (Bravo)
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  • From ANON - chayron on June 08, 2004
    Hi! I was waiting for so long for you to finish this story. Now i can say - it was awesome! Thank you for pleasant time! And - write something more! Please...:)
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  • From Hecate on June 07, 2004
    I've reviewed before on FF.net but its so much better on this site so I thought I'd review here. ^_^

    That was a beautiful ending, made me all emotional. !_!
    You had me worried there, I thought Gokuu was leaving Bejiita for Bulma. But I shouldn't have doubted, Just like Bejiita shouldn't have.

    '"You know what!? F@*& this game!" he says throwing the controller down in disdain, pouting before slapping his handsr hir his mouth. He looks around wildly for my mother. Who absolutely never tolerated profanity in this house.' - I sympathise with them, I have to abide the same rule in my house. (U_U;)

    I am glad Bulma is doing better, hopefully this 'psychiatrist' will help her find happiness.

    I a little sad that this fic has ended, but this fic will always be one of my favourites! ^-^

    ~Hecate18~
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  • From Hecate on June 07, 2004
    I've reviewed before on FF.net but its so much better on this site so I thought I'd review here. ^_^

    That was a beautiful ending, made me all emotional. !_!
    You had me worried theI thI thought Gokuu was leaving Bejiita for Bulma. But I shouldn't have doubted, Just like Bejiita shouldn't have.

    '"You know what!? F@*& this game!" he says throwing the controller down in disdain, pouting before slapping his hands over his mouth. He looks around wildly for my mother. Who absolutely never tolerated profanity in this house.' - I sympathise with them, I have to abide the same rule in my house. (U_U;)

    I am glad Bulma is doing better, hopefully this 'psychiatrist' will help her find happiness.

    I a little sad that this fic has ended, but this fic will always be one of my favourites! ^-^

    ~Hecate18~
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  • From ANON - macha on June 07, 2004
    Thank you for updating, and finishing the fic. I like it very much. I was wondering why Chi Chi was wearing the nubmer 5. Thanks for answering that.

    I'll be hoping for more fics to come from you. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - macha on May 03, 2004
    Please, please don't make Goku go back to Chi Chi. That would be evil.

    I liked the lemon. Yuuuuummmmm.
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  • From ANON - macha on May 02, 2004
    I'm still reading, and still liking this story. I don't have much of a comentary though. Except the apple part, I really liked the apple part.
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  • From ANON - macha on May 01, 2004
    I am glad that the boys decided to go see there dads. And that whole situation is the reason I liked this chapter.

    I hope Bulma finds some '' s' soon. Professional or another love in her life. Either way.
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  • From ANON - macha on May 01, 2004
    I found chapter 12 kind of sad. I guess it's to be expected though. Stealing some one elses boyfriend isn't the best way to stay best friends.

    Can't wait to see what happens when the guys go to see their sons.
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  • From ANON - macha on April 29, 2004
    I liked this chapter. It seems as though it is a set up for up coming chapters, and how Goten's and Goku's relationship has been effected, and the possiblilities of them rebuilding their relationship.
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  • From ANON - macha on April 28, 2004
    Now THAT'S a lemon.

    Hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - TT on April 27, 2004
    U evil person u, ... Y do u put up the chapters so slowly?! I've seen this fic before! I know I have, cuz I know what haaaaappppppppeeeeennnnnnssssss ^^. But I hate having to go look it up somewhere else.... c_c Ok, I'm lazy, but I'm not the writer! >
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  • From ANON - macha on April 27, 2004
    I think I have said this in another review,(yours or Cards I don't know) but, Eeeeeeeeeeeeeek. I am so embarassed for him/them/her, but I can't stop reading.

    You are writtinveryvery tan web web here. As a matter of fact, this could be one of my problems. I think you have managed to get me glued the the chair.

    Are you planning on untaggling this anytime soon? Or are you going to let the bug twitch in the web for a while. (Sorry if that was over dramatic, don't let it affect the story please.)
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  • From ANON - macha on April 25, 2004
    Eeeeek! How embarassing. I guess you had to explain some of the 'why's', and you did. And although I am very embarassed for Goku right now, you wrote that chapter very well.

    I don't know if this explains who is further gone between Goku and Vegeta, but it would seem as though Goku has been dealing with it longer....or has he?

    I am hoping that there is a reason (aka plotst) st) that you wrote that Goten had witnessed almost everything.

    Well, as usual, I hope that you update soon.
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  • From ANON - macha on April 23, 2004
    Yeah! You continued. I love this story. Poor Gohan, wanting the Prince and not getting him. It's probably for the better though, if Goku could still smell Vegeta on Gohan even weeks after 'the incident'.

    So it would seem that both of the pure bloods are obsessed. I do kind of wonder who is more far gone though. And why they haven't gotten together. *I smell plot*

    I hope you continue, I can see this story going far.
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