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Reviews for The Twins Go A\'Travellin\'

By : CardDragonBall
  • From Lenora on May 05, 2004
    I have a feeling that I have to read Much Like Sufficating now. Though i have to ask, is it a sequel to anyhing??? You can answer in Group Therapy. LOVED IT!!!
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  • From ANON - Hudine on May 05, 2004
    You know the twins are my favourite OCs when they show up things always are interesting.

    -Hudine-

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  • From ANON - Ginia on May 04, 2004
    Ew... HT Vegeta and MLS Trunks... NOT a pretty picture - but HT Goten and HT Trunks pulling them apart is a great image! *imagines both Goten and Trunks _thwack Veg Vegeta on the back of his misguided head* So the guys are aware of us now? That certainly opens the door for some extra fun in your after chapter dialogs! I can hardly wait for the chapters as it is - now I'm getting greedy for the after show as well... Yep, I'm a Card-addict.
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  • From ANON - Getarian on May 04, 2004
    Really enjoyed this. :-)

    Highlights:

    Loved it when 'Geta had to kiss the 'FC' Bardock. :-D

    "Lil’Geta: *runs for life *"

    Yeah, I think he'd wanna run... very fast. :-)

    Enjoyed the 'Even More Of Us' visit :-)

    "Lil’Geta: *gapes at idiot question * Would you really want to be in a shower with our two naked parents?"
    "Goten: Ew…. Ew! EW! OH GAWD! MY BRAIN. IT BURNS!"

    LOL! Loved this :-)

    "HT Trunks: Hey, why aren’t you in this universe?"
    "Goten: the author is torturing Jaygoose."

    LOL!

    Totally loved the end dialogue. :-D

    Love that the s wes went "A'Travellin'" again :-)

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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on May 03, 2004
    Lmao!!!
    Very funny! I love reading the twins crazy little adventures especially the one with Trunks..hehe that was so hilarious!
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 03, 2004
    Hardy Har Har! That's right take the cheap shots at me...I just want so desprately to know where the hell is Goten! Okay now that that is out my system. That was really funny...especially the part when Vegeta started stalking MLS Trunks...well he is kick ass.
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  • From Lenora on April 23, 2004
    *starts giggling histerically* so cant spell. i loved it. it was great. i love the twins they're great.
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  • From ANON - Getarian on April 23, 2004
    Really enjoyed this. Very funny :-D

    "Goten: Er? Uh… We’re… A figment of your imagination!"
    "Lil’Geta: Riiiiiight, that’s believable."
    "Gk: Really?!"

    LOL! Gotta love gullible Goku. :-)

    "Gk: Well, first, I woke up and Vegeta had his hand down my pants… Hey, you *points at Lil’Geta* Why are you twitching? …"

    LOL! Even in another universe, 'Geta's dad still has the ability to seriously disturb him. I think he's going to have to have a serious talk with his mum about passing his name down to his first born. :-D

    "GK: And then Trunks showed up and he smelled really nice and I kissed him and"
    "Goten: WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!"

    LOL! Goku really has a gift when it comes to torturing his boys minds. :-D

    Totally loved the 'Never Before' visit. Loved the "my eyes" bit from Goten. Which reminds me...how's Yamcha these days? :-D

    "Goten: This seems redundant doesn’t it?"
    "Lil’Geta: Really, this is just tacky."

    LOL!

    "*Lightening bolt strikes them both and fries them. *"

    Nooooooo!

    "Goten: Myeh. He kissedfathfather, I don’t think I can think of him the same."

    LOL! Yep! That's definitely a real passion killer. :-)

    Ooo, so Goten wants a dominant Trunks. Wonder if he knows that? :-)

    "Goten: Ew. OH… GOD! They’re… Oh, NO! MY EYES!"

    LOL! Sorry, it cracks me up every time. :-D

    Loved Goten's reaction when he came across his 'Frosting Chronicles' self. Bet they didn't take photo's of that ;-)

    "Goten: well, Krillin’s a prince. That’s pretty funny."

    *chuckles* Agreed!

    "Maybe we should just kill Freiza."

    Yes please.

    "Goten: But… Geta! He’s just so manly and dominant!"
    "Lil’Geta: If you don’t shut up I’ll take you back to the ‘Never Before’ universe!"

    LOL! Come on guys. It's not that bad :-)

    "*In the dead of night, Goten and Lil’Geta sneak into their mother’s bedroom. The ominous buzzing of an electric razor is heard…*"
    "MWHAHAHAHA!"

    ROTFL!

    Love the scene between Goten and Bulma once they get back home. Mean Goten. :-)

    Who'd have thought that 'Geta would be the shit stirrer of the two? His messing with his parents like that was hilarious. :-D

    This was wonderful Card. Really enjoyed it :-)


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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 23, 2004
    ROFL!!!!
    Ahh...I loved it, it was hilarious...especially the photos (of b/g and also of preggy Goku) and the dbgt part.
    Very funny...and Krillen is a Prince...eh?
    Sheesh I really need to read Never Before...and Frosting Chronicles...and I will too!

    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on April 22, 2004
    Cute and funny. And I was right...Krillin was a prince! HA!
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  • From ANON - Ginia on April 22, 2004
    Well *snicker* that was *snicker* something else *snicker*

    I have always loved your end of chapter comments - and this was just terrific - no angst - just humor

    Ah well - back to the homework - thanks for the distraction!
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  • From ANON - setharo07 on April 22, 2004
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAhahahahahha!!!!!! Can't stop laughing, even when you're insinuating. And I love this style you have here, just small flashes of torturing the twins, along with severaher her characters. Can I have more later on in the stories? I'd love it. Pl??!!??!!! *Puts on very pathetic puppy dog face, with very big eyes.* Luv ya, Card!

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