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By : tinyvoice
  • From shinimegami23 on January 21, 2006
    nice. i can't wait to see what happens next. I feel kind of sorry for Trowa, although he was kind of a jerk. But I think that Quatre and Wufei are so cute together. please, update!
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  • From ANON - MANDA on October 04, 2005
    Oh come on!!!!!
    It's sweet really.
    (threesome?) *demonic grin*
    Dude, you finish this, or I will be forced to rate low!
    HAHA!
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  • From ANON - fruits of Eos on October 03, 2005
    O___O eegods! even as a 3x4x3 fan i still like this story, and found myself cheering when quat gave trowa the smackdown. i definitely want to read more of this, so keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Minako Nine on January 12, 2005
    I love this story... the last chapter has me intriguid to Trowa's thinking. Any cance of more soon? As I do so laave the writing style n.n

    Buuut, there was a few times where I had to guess what the word was.. there are a few weird errors O.o they look more like format errors though
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  • From ANON - JadedSoul on October 12, 2004
    This is wonderful. I love the plot, and the style of your writing is beautiful! I hope to see more soon. ~Jade
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  • From ANON - Sparky on August 20, 2004
    ...waugh! what? no more?

    It figures.

    Completely separately, by accident, I began reading three fics of yours, all of which entranced me up until the moment I realized that no amount of mouse-clicking was going to make another chapter appear. I was ready to jump up in dismay at this latest denial and swear off unfinished fiction forever, until I noticed they were all by the same person. ^___^

    So! Primary advice is to ignore the real world and begin living to satisfy me (and many others, I imagine)writwriting nonstop.

    r thr than that:
    Thank you, thank you, for not writing a stereotypical Wufei. I love that guy, and you write him well. I'm glad he's indecisive and
    secretly a sweetie, complete with dorky lines, and how he has complicated emotions towards Trowa (I liked the bit about his "darts"). Duo, on the other hand, you might want to be careful with. You're not making him the braided baka, right? (Much as I've loved his lines so far!) Just telling you that I'm expecting he and Heero, whenever we get a little insight into them (I hope I hope), to be as interesting as 3, 4, and 5. By the way, I'd really like some of Trowa's perspective on all of this, and soon. Perhaps, retroactively, you could insert some of his thoughts throughout the parts already written? I feel like his narrative is lacking.

    I gotta say, completely admiringly, that your writing does not squick me. You dispense with all but the essentials in the way of coyness, blushing, angst, and ranting/raving. The sex scene was so gratifying (I know how that sounds, but I mean in a literary way, I swear!) Lots of authors might have indulged in an unbearably bashful Quatre, say tha that my own insides twisted until it was all over. But no, he and Wu know as much as can actually be expected, and that's awesome. I'm really not being eloquent here, but... well, all the characters are coming across as equals, not like the super-innocent one vs. the jaded brd, rd, or some such. You're thinking about them, and doing everything right, and being concise.

    Now I just want more of it.
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  • From ANON - mirim87 on June 13, 2004
    I love the story keep writing. I am an extreme 3X4 fan but after reading your stories and before your stories I liked Wu alittle but not much. Now I adore him and wish that I could find more fics with him in them as a main character. Please keep writing, I've read almost all your stories thus far and I love them all! Keep writing. -Loyal Reader ;-)
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  • From ANON - mirim87 on June 13, 2004
    I love the story keep writing. I am an extreme 3X4 fan but after reading your stories and before your stories I liked Wu alittle but not much. Now I adore him and wish that I could find more fics with him in them as a main character. Please keep writing, I've read almost all your stories thus far and I love them all! Keep writing. -Loyal Reader ;-)
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  • From ANON - SariL2 on June 12, 2004
    You're so naughty...
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  • From ANON - Manga-Chick on June 06, 2004
    Hey! I like your story! please keep writing! It sucks to never have reviews, ennit? I never have any on mine...;_;...so I know how you feel! But I like your story very much and would like you to continue....update soon. Er, please.
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  • From ANON - merry on June 05, 2004
    poor voice!!! begging for reviews!!! =P
    i actually like the story, a different point of view from the canon pairing.
    i would love to have Quatre ends up with Wufei. but it's kinda sad that Quatre has become so quiet all of a sudden.
    does he likes wufei? or is he shagging him only for the physical gratification?
    maybe you'd like to write more sex scenes into the story? *hoping*
    and explicit as well!!!!!!!

    hehehehe!

    that's all for now. i'll be waiting for the next chappie.
    thanks for the wonderful story!!!!
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  • From ANON - Icz on June 05, 2004
    What is Tro's pro any anyway? It's really hard to empathize with him because he's so irrational. I mean Quatre has a point, Tro took great pains ointoint out that he didn't love Quatre *that* way, and now he's throwing a hissy fit because he's trying to move on.

    I would like to see more of what's going on in Tro's head. Right now he's being an ass and I really hope he gets his ass kicked in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Nozomi on June 03, 2004
    This is really good..........i'm definitely intrigued to see where you go with this. Please keep up the great work-I hope to read more soon!
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on June 02, 2004
    ARGH I got cut off...AWWW I really like this one^__^ Quatre was such an asshole to Trowa tho
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on June 02, 2004
    AWWW I really like this one^__^ Quatre wach ach an asshole to Trowa tho
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