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By : tinyvoice
  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2004
    Just one more thing to add.

    Duo needs his ass kicked.

    That is all.
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  • From ANON - Maldoror on May 16, 2004
    Nice chapter :) What a great morning after conversation; it rang true, with somewhat awkward attempts to defuse the situation with humor, and the little white lies and all. Qua's r's rationalisations are understandable too, though I'd also be worried if I were Wufei. Trowa doesn't seem to be the kind who'd actively interefere between Wufei and Quatre if he believes them to be a pair and fairly happy (unless Duo stirs up some muck there) but I could see him suddenly transferring his puppy-dog eyes towards Quatre instead of Heero. And Quatre is sensitive enough to notice (unless *snort* Heero). I'm wondering how this is going to end...hope you post again soon!
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  • From ANON - SariL2 on May 16, 2004
    First of all I would just like to say that I love the way you write. Such ability should not be wasted on English essays. You, many many years ago when you still had your account on Fanfiction.net changed the way I looked at Wufei. With Colony 666/Soldier 666/Black Flecked Snow - ever since then I have loved how you've depicted him and his personality. Secondly, I really like how its Wu-man and Kat, both pairs are absolutley wonderful when you write them, but yeah, keep it up girl! Another thing, Jack Sparrow? Caribbean? Have I ever told you that I love you? Hehe, :) Keep up with the wonderful fanfictions. Oh yes, and I'm writing this for all three chapters. With love - a loyal reader.
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on May 14, 2004
    OHHH I like it, and i can't wait t see more of it.
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  • From ANON - Maldoror on May 14, 2004
    I like this. The language is rich and delightful, and the characters are layered, even though there's only two chapters so far. Quatre's reaction was very believable for the character you crafted. There were some very funny moments as well, mainly due to the phrasing ('Quatre seemed to have a vague understanding of ito, so, since he didn't ask what the hell Wufei was doing with the lip balm; though, he did have the coy charm to blush.', phrases like that, neat little packages that catch the reader offguard and make him/her grin)...

    Anyway, I do hope you continue this. I'll keep an eye out for it!
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  • From ANON - lina on May 14, 2004
    LOVE THIS SOTRY!!! DONT RETIRE IT!! KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rocky Oberlin on May 14, 2004
    I don'e know about anyone else, but I kinda liked it. I think that Trowa gave up a good thing and Wufei tried to pick up the broken pieces. If Quatre stays with Trowa, then he's a fool. Wufei does, in fact, love him and is willing to do anything for him. I hope that Wufei does get to keep Quatre.
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  • From ANON - Icz on May 14, 2004
    Heh, though a die-hard 3x4 fan I'm was happy to see Wufei and Quatre hook up.

    For what it's worth I'd rather have Quatre stay with Wufei, I mean Trowa didn't give h sec second look till Wufei boinked him, he missed out, tough shit.


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  • From ANON - Nozomi on May 14, 2004
    don't retire it! this is good! I like what you've got so far, please continue!
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  • From on May 14, 2004
    Hey! I just wanted to tell you I think your fic is awesome so far. I also read the one you got the idea from on Fanfiction.net and I really like your interpretation of the characters and the scenario. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - bishigurl345 on May 13, 2004
    Nice start!! * waves 4x5x4 flag* I love stories that involve Wufei, Trowa, and Quatre....please please please please please make this a 3x4x5 YUMMINESS FOR ALL ^_^
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