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Reviews for Night Visitor

By : Spacefille
  • From ANON - Rachel on May 12, 2016
    That was really cute. You did a good job at keeping Piccolo in character.
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  • From QuaqueNocte on November 11, 2012
    I remember coming across this story a while back and thought it was a bit strange but well written and very entertaining. I've stumbled upon it again and realized it's well-written, entertaining and hot. Old story but such an original idea and very unique. I still love it. There should be a sequel where Piccolo discovers a strap-on..
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  • From GaramondBodoni on July 21, 2012
    I love your take on this story, Piccolo was very in character and I love the way he is very attentive to Chichi as well, like brushing the leaves out of her hair and helping her dress ^^
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  • From ANON - @_@ on October 08, 2007
    THis is the weirdest story I've ever read I think. It's sooo odd....but sympathetically written.

    Honestly, I don't resent chichi for "cheating" on goku at all. In fact, I kind of feel bad for her because it seems like Goku doesn't even care enough for her to get jealous.

    Sometimes, I really don't get Goku. It's a bit sad (for chichi) that an asexual being (piccolo) would've made a better husband than goku.

    I wasn't going to read this fic but the number of reviews and the quality of reviews intrigued me enough to check it out.

    All in all, it was a very well-written fic and pretty believable, even though I find the plot very sad for poor chichi.


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  • From nahleili on January 25, 2007
    I usually really hate Piccolo/Chichi, but this is really done well. I love that you kept Piccolo asexual (the whole 'asexual but, ZOMG, he has a fuctioning penis just by coincidence' annoys the crap out of me most of the time.), and all of the characters in-character. Well done :)
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  • From Salza on January 17, 2007
    This is an excellent story - I've loved it for a while now, but only recently remembered where I read it. ^^ I love your complicated take on what is, by its very nature, a complicated situation. I've never seen this topic handled in this way before - props to you for originality. Your ability to stay in voice was impressive, too - it all sounded like Piccolo.
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  • From ANON - Genyphur on November 15, 2006
    Very good description. You caught Piccolo's personality well. If I was still in middleschool, I would have wished it was me..I rememeber having a huge crush on Piccolo. Great story! There aren't enough piccolo lemon stories!
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  • From ANON - Velasa on June 23, 2006
    This is absolutely the most intelligent lemon I have -ever- read. And in character!! Sweet hell, it was really quite interesting in and of it's own, it was well written and I must admit you absolutely floored me. I loved this, as a story. It's interesting, it does make sense, and just damn. I love how you voiced Pic... it sounded like him. And in a lemon, for god's sake- that never happens! I'm so completely impressed with this. Have you written anything else? I'd love to see it.
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  • From ANON - DeusXEchelon on November 22, 2005
    About fucking time I see a het fic with piccolo in it. That deserves a 10 out of 10 just for that. Very creative, this story is.

    To pixelgoddess, go suck a dick you fag lovin dyke bitch.
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  • From ANON - screamguy on November 19, 2005
    ^_^ Great fic. I luved it, and you did a really good job of writing Piccolo's character too. Too bad Piccolo didn't get more 'involved' with Chichi though . . .
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2005
    very good. you did well with the time line. wtg piccolo ;)
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  • From BrianChattillon on August 14, 2005
    *Sweatdrops*
    Classic Goku.....
    I feel torn Poor Piccolo he gets caught up in what is going to become a rather tragic affair.

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  • From ANON - Nathan Ashoka on July 31, 2005

    Very good. My obvious bias aside, this is the most believable pairing I've seen in the Dragonball universe. I'm also impressed tat you wrote the whole story from Piccolo's viewpoint and kept it very much in character; a huge plus as he's my favourite character. And of course, keeping the whole thing funny too.

    I also liked little tidbits like Piccolo being able to reabsorb his claws, absorbing water and Vegita being the heavy hand of the family.

    I guess the only thing I have to quibble about was the reason for the turn around on Chichi's part when he said he'd die before he'd let anything happen to Gohan? It seemed some what sudden to, and maybe for this reason, but it's equally an enigma for male readers as it was for Piccolo.

    That aside, a very good one shot lemon.
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  • From ANON - Angel Lymisty on February 11, 2005
    I haven't given a review in a serious lapse of time. Nice to read a Piccolo fanficcie once and a while. Just a shame that there are not as much as I hoped there will be.

    Honestly, I have just been browsing around the fanficcies and even during the searches. Seen your work several times, and well yes just moved on. Haven't decided what I have liked more for a Piccolo fic and well forbidden pairs usually grasp me.

    I expected this fic to be one of those one-shots and semi-hardcore. Though turns out I was far from that. First story that I read that Piccolo had no male reproductive organs. Was a HUGE shocker, though I continued to read. I admire you for keeping the loving peace in the story, also keeping Piccolo as himself. Was very astonished that you did not let anger get to either Goku or Gohan. I encourage you to continue as do your other fans. If you write any more forbidden pairings, you can always e-mail me for the scoop and/or update.

    Well, I hope this helps you in your confidence of writing as it helped me to continue my own fanfictions, fanmanga, and probably my future anime. Thank you for writing this story! ^^

    Your fan,
    Angel Lymisty
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  • From TheDarkBeginning on August 30, 2004
    O.k. that was a really...cute story, I ended up giggling through most of it....I can imagine the look on Piccolo's face asking Kami-sama for help...*laughs hysterically* It's great for a laugh, after reading Finale I decided to see what else you wrote and I'm glad I did, I enjoyed that story, when do you intend to update?
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