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Reviews for Night Visitor

By : Spacefille
  • From ANON - CWolf on July 13, 2004
    This was so well done. You get a 10 for creativity. Excellent work!
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  • From VegetaDaimoh on May 29, 2004
    ha ha, this story's hilarious. it's written really well. an impossible situation, but you made it believable. you kept piccolo in character.
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  • From ANON - Mehla phimphim on May 24, 2004
    Wow that was really forkin good. I can't stand Chichi but you wrote out the fic so well. I'm bummed it was a one shot but if you went more into it you'd have to deal with GT stuff. And lord knows Chichi would be miffed about Goku bein a kid ^^;;. Keep up thhe excellent work.
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  • From Makota2112 on May 21, 2004
    ....

    That

    was

    Brilliant!

    To be honest I've never read a fic like this before, and now I feele Ie I've been missing out entirely. This sounded like a one-shot to me, but I encourage to wto write more, whatever the story line or pairing. You're writing--damn--is wonul aul and top-knotch. After I'm done writing this review I'm going to check out whatelse you may have written, and I think this is going in one of my 'fav' stories lists, the first actually.

    I loved the way you portrayed Piccolo, it's so rare to him him shed in such a powerful and serious light. I cannot rain enough praises on you. Very very good job!
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on May 18, 2004
    Well... I was prepared not to like this. I mean, really. The idea of Piccolo and Chichi is just too squicky for words. But you handled it well. Chichi was presented sympathically, which is fairly unusual. Goku was his normal clueless self. Piccolo was the responsible one. He defined his duty and performed it. You present him as consistently loyal and non-judgemental. This isn't turning me into a het-fan *g* - I'm a hardcore Vegeta/Goku believer - but this was a nice change of pace.
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