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Reviews for Thoughts And Revelations

By : EscagirlUK
  • From KnightSun on June 21, 2008
    Great idea, you need to work on your spelling, may i sugest Microsoft word, it works wonders for me. Also, i love the age work you've done, and your pairing was beautiful. Also, very cute ending I see lots of potential. Hope you do more soon.

    Knightsun
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  • From ANON - ben01 on May 25, 2004
    Dear writer,

    Pretty great fic. Oh I hate those preachers who tell you that only their way is the way to god. Personnally I don't believe in it/him. If I would believe in any kind of deity then it would be the Roman gods. But I'm getting of track. I've never ever read a story like this. Don't read a lot though. I like it. I wonder how they'll find eachother. (I stare into the abys with dreamery eyes and say the next few sentenses with a cast away voice) Maybe Trunks will find the courage to say something and then when he walks away in believe that Gotan doesn't share his feelings he is suddenly kissed by Gotan, or maybe the entire family starts interfering and ptting them together. And maybe if they're finaly together they'll sta clu club to make the rest of the guys fall in love with eachother.Or you'll stop this fic and let me linger with my questions for all eternaty. I can see myself now on my dying bed, asking for a compute rea read the end of this story. *sigh* Hope that never happens.

    sincerely,k
    B. a.k.a. ben01
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